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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal



LOLOLOL. When I was trying to think of the title I was in the kitchen and I was eating some jalebis my dad had bought for me. And Akhil comes in and goes to my mum OMG AUNTY TAMHE AKLA KADVA KARELA NU SHAK KEM KARYU! Have toh maru akhu modhu bagdi jashe. Look at this face. Why would you wanna ruin it!' As soon as I heard the kadva karela bit I was like oh yeh baby. Kadva Karelas and Jhakkas Jalebis! XD

Blad cheesy bread is the one. Butter some bread, put some cheese on it then put it in a samdwich toaster for like 5 mins and may i say it is the yummiest shit EVER!


hahahhah!!!😆 omg!!! Akhil is super hilarious...seems like he loves his face alot right?😉🤣
so you're the jhakkas jalebi and he's the karela nu shak?😆 So cute!😆

lol!! I eat cheesy bread almost everyday!🤣 like grilled cheese sandwich or cheese bread...super delish. can't stop eating. I'll say cheese and chocolate are probably my biggest weaknesses in food😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@noorie

He has a straightner. THE BOY HAS HIS OWN MINI STRAIGHTNER!

Grilled cheese sandwiches are just the one. Sometimes I'll put like tomoatoes.onions and sweetcorn inside with some green chillies. Thats really yummy too! SAME HERE! But doughnuts for me too!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meepha

<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3">Hey Vandini,</font>


<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3">So after giving up hope in this drama,i was like i am quitting everything on this drama including FF's/Ss etc.I was going through extreme disappointment but then i saw the title 'Kadva Karelas & Jhakaas Jalebis'.I could not stop myself from opening this post.Thank god i did😊</font>

<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3">It was very well-written</font>

<font size="3" face="'Courier New', Courier, mono">I could imagine Arnie boy '</font><font size="3" face="'Courier New', Courier, mono"></font><font size="2">Dressed in a navy blue suit with a cream coloured shirt and a black, silk patterned scarf he looked absolutely dashing'</font>

<font size="3" face="'Courier New', Courier, mono">Man,he must have looked sizzling hot.</font>

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i hope u update this sooper soon😃</font>

<font size="3" face="'Courier New', Courier, mono">P.S-Ur SS and the new promo has brought me back on track😛</font>



YAY I STOPPED SOMEBODY FROM COMMITTING IPKKND SUICIDE! YEEEH BABY! God he'd look hot in anything he wore! Even better if he wore just nothing at all ;)
Don't worry. I'll update soon cos I'm sitting on the loo right now.




Mate i'm joking.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

@noorie

He has a straightner. THE BOY HAS HIS OWN MINI STRAIGHTNER!

Grilled cheese sandwiches are just the one. Sometimes I'll put like tomoatoes.onions and sweetcorn inside with some green chillies. Thats really yummy too! SAME HERE! But doughnuts for me too!


omg! you mean hair straightener?!🤣 oh gosh...he really loves himself man..hopefully it's a good thing. 😆 no wonder he doesn't really care when you paint his nails🤣 don't tell me he secretly enjoys it!😆

not really a doughnut fan here...sandwiches i like😛 i'll try adding sweetcorn next time! sounds yummy!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey pls continue this wondeful ss...and pls add me to ur pm list if you have one...thx!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

@mariam
Naaah I haven't seen it. Heard of it though. Is it good? I have the Iphone 4. Got it for my bday present. Still haven't fogured out how to use it properly yet! LOLOLOL! You? Aaah man I can't wait for freshers. London clubs are just tooo sick! But don't worry. I'll try update as regularly as possible! :)



yeaaah its really good! Youtube taaj from come fly with me, you'll be laughing your head off! Oooh that a good phone! I got a nokia n8 for mu birthday present so using that lol. Haha study hard but party harder lol! Oooh goood! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya guysss. Back with part 2. Comment if you liked it. I know the story's moving a bit slowly but don't worry cos in the next bit there's a bit of a bomb coming up and Shyam will be disappearing in about one or two parts so you won't have to handle the evil man anymore! Enjoy :)

Part Two

It could be windy, raining or snowing for all Khushi could care. Nothing could dampen her mood today. Her Jiji and Buaji were planning on returning to Lucknow that day which could only mean one thing. JALEBIS GALORE! Without her sister and Buaji in the house, she could make all the jalebis in the world! She couldn't wait to get home from work. She'd sit there all day and throughout the night frying and eating, frying and eating till she was so moti that one day she'd just sit on that khadoos boss of hers and squash him till he was as flat as a roti!

Shyam sat there. He'd decided to leave her forever and return to his wife. Although his last night with her would have to be something special. Something which would pleasure him. Even if he had to use force on her. He didn't care what he had to do. One last night then he'd never see her again in his entire life. He'd take Anjali away from Delhi, away from Lucknow to somewhere where Khushi would never be seen. Just one night. Suddenly he heard a knock on his door.

"Saale sahib aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Aaye aaye bethiyen. Kuch chahiye? Juice, chai, coffee. Abhi mangwaleta hoon!" he said in a startled tone

"Nahin jeejaji. Bus di ne aapko yeh tiffin dene ki liye kahan toh mein yahan chala aya. Chalta hoon ab. Bye" And without another word he left the cabin.

He climbed down the stairs to his car when suddenly in his car mirror he saw a brightly dressed girl walking his way. Her plait bounced up and down as she walked along the busy roads of Delhi. Suddenly she jumped as a rickshaw driver horned at her for getting in his way. She didn't let him leave before letting him hear a few words even if it was her fault! Her eyes widened as she saw her favourite food. A jalebi stall to her right. She stood there eating and eating and eating. How on earth did her tiny figure manage to stay like this when she ate so much. Her dress clung to her curves perfectly and as he watched her eat unknowingly a small smile played on his lips and he got lost again in this dream world where nothing around him existed apart from her and him. Khushi Kumari Gupta done something weird to him and he knew that this feeling wouldn't be disappearing any time soon. He broke out of his spell when he realised that he didn't want to see her out of the office as well as in the office.

"Arnav. Control yourself. Apne aap pe kaboo rakho. Yeh who ladki hain jisse tum nafrat karte hon. Aise mat dekha karo usse. Kaam pein dhyan rakho." And with that he got into to his car and drove off.

All full up she paid the jalebiwala and entered Shyams' office.

"BAPRE BAAP! ITNA BADA OFFICE! Pura ka pura Lucknow isme bas sakta hain. Aur itne saare kamre. Wow humare desh mein itne saare problems hain, ke itne saare lawyers ki zaroorat padti hain? Agar hum hote nah, to hum to sab logo ko ek meethi si jalebi khila dete. Sab kuch theek ho jata!" and with this second genius idea of hers in one morning she flashed a large smile walked up to the receptionist and asked for Shyam Jha.

"16th floor and its office number 1657"

"KYA! ITNI SAARI SEEDIYA CHADHNI PADIGE MUJHE! Chalo accha hain ke mein jalebiyan khaake aayi hoon" she exclaimed and walked off.

The receptionist just glared at the vibrantly dressed woman who was now stomping off into the distance and then got back to work.

Huffing and puffing Gupta finally reached Shyams office. Bursting in she slomped herself on the chair handed him his phone saw the time and ran out again because she was going to be late for work and didn't want to hear another one of ASR's rantings! (Made her walk out cos I know how its not enjoyable to read about Shyam and Khushi! XD)

It was another day of walking into this weird red office. Never had she seen an office like it. ASR who was such a private man, had a glass cabin. It was a bit weird, but then again he was weird. Weird like a cactus with roses. Sometimes he was nice like the roses. Sometimes he was full of hurtful comments like the cactus. She had decided it would be better if she'd just stayed away from him, get her work done and go back home. She tripped. Again she'd forgotten about the small step she had to climb up onto to enter the office and banged her head on the door.

"Hey Devi Maiyya. Kisi ne kuch dekha na hoga toh accha hoga!" she prayed

ASR saw her walk into the office. As she entered he recited to himself quietly about what was going to happen as she walked in.

He spoke to himself. "She walks...she trips...bangs her head...and finally prays to her Devi Maiyya!"

It was her daily morning routine and everyday he would be standing in his office watching her silently from afar. Her clumsiness would make him feel alive. And then he remembered all the trouble she'd caused him and again those thoughts would override the feelings he had for her and the dragon inside him would once again light up those flames of hatred for her. He sat back down to work but couldn't help but take small glances at her working away munching on her peanuts and making her small hand gestures in the air every time she completed a piece of work. He had no idea what was happening to him. But he knew he was changing.

Edited by StarryEyedGyal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update vandu!!🤗
So Arnav already feels a little something something for khushi huh😉
Keep em coming!!❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
loved it!
euurggh wat is shyam thinking!?
one night of pleasure from khushi! force?!
nooo!!
hope arnav helps khushi!!
and beats him up!
yes shyam is going to go in two parts!
loved the update!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it darling!!!
I love the way Arnav was watching her secretly from near his car, and then when she came into work. He even knows her routine in the morning!!
Thank you for minimal Shyam and Khushi interaction...😆
Thanks for the PM!!
Looking forward to the next part...😊

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