SS:-Kadva Karelas and Jhakkas Jalebis(Pg 25 Note) - Page 5

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234

Omg why?!
Shyam the bas********d!!
What a tramp!
What the hell?!
Why did he do this?!
I thought arnav would reach in time to save her!!
But whats done is done hope he comforts khushi!
Loved the update
you write fantastic!
Update soon!
Thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

Told you it was gonna be a shocking update! LOL I had to set the scene in these three parts. From now on it'll be all hunky dory. If I feel like it I might even get incorporate my vegetarian shoes story into Arnav's character. Update tomorrow now.

aha yeah u did! And thank you! All loveyy scenes now! Now you can go partyyy! Lol

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

<font color="#0066ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">OMG!!!</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I can't believe Shyam actually went ahead and Khushi could do nothing to save herself.</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Khushi's pain and anguish is evident through your writing. You've written this part really well, especially given its delicate nature!!</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I'm so glad Arnav persisted and managed to get to her at the end. I really want to know what he says or does to comfort her, and how she reacts!!</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thanks for the PM darling!!!</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">😊</font>

I wanted Khushi to be absolutely distraught. That scene could have been so much more graphic but I didn't enjoy writing it so it was obvious people wouldn't enjoy reading it. But from now on all is gonna be good so carry on reading. It makes me feel so happy that you guys enjoy it! :D

OMG! shocking !!!! what is khushi gonna say!! really want to kill shyam right now!!!

LOL yeh. Cab should be coming soon to pick us up. Woot. Although now I've got to the good bit I just wanna sit at home and update update update :( sadtimes!

Haha aww
you can update tomorrow
thats if you hant got a hangover Lol

Originally posted by: Zbegum

OMG! shocking !!!! what is khushi gonna say!! really want to kill shyam right now!!!

update soon plz.

xxx

Thanks for reading :) Well to find out you'll just have to wait till tomorrow ;)

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234

Haha aww

you can update tomorrow

thats if you hant got a hangover Lol

LOL nah I won't have a hangover. I don't really drink. Maybe one shot but thats it for the night. I like to be sober and enjoy things. I'm actually not that bad a girl :D

Bloody shyam!!!! Aarrrahhh!!! Why? Why?????!!!! Greedy git! Am distraught! :(

Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

LOL nah I won't have a hangover. I don't really drink. Maybe one shot but thats it for the night. I like to be sober and enjoy things. I'm actually not that bad a girl :D

haha aww good to hear!
You back already?
Btw why dont u put urs and Akhils love stories in here haha (did i spell his name right? If i didnt im sorry)