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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

loved ur update... it was awsome... plz add me to your PM list...

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ilove99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

plz plz plz update soon..i am online for that only

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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 14 years ago

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.30. "He did?",she asked in a sad tone. "Yeah today morning, he was flirting with Liza so I enquired about you. He rudely said that it's all over",he replied. Pia felt tears dwelling up. She looked at Abhay sadly and he was laughing with Naina. "So do you accept me?",Kabir asked. "No",she answered without taking off her eyes off Abhay. Kabir started to say something but Pia couldn't hear him. She was numb. She picked up her Biochemistry book and left the table mumbling,"See you later Kabir". She felt like crying out loud. She quickly made her way through the corridor and in a few minutes, she was on the road requesting a car driver to give her a ride. Abhay did notice her walking out of the cafteria but he didn't want to go behind her. In fifteen minutes, Pia was at the heart of the forest. It had started to rain quite hard and she felt cold and miserable. She knew there was a waterfall nearby. She advanced slowly while crying. The waterfall was a beautiful landscape. But her troubled mind failed to notice the beauty. The only thing running in her head was that Abhay had permanently left her. What was life without love? She stood at the edge of a high cliff which had once been a waterfall. Now the river had slightly changed it's course making it a thin waterfall but with a lot of force. She looked down the ravaging water smashing up in huge waves. It had actually become a plunge pool. A very deep one. Once you fall in it, you can never come back but swirl in that huge hole till death overpowers you. She didn't take another second to think. What was the use anyway. She widened her arms like a bird and took her heels off that huge rock chunk. For a few seconds, she seemed to wonder where the water was and then with a huge splash she immersed fully in that dangerous deeply cut plunge pool. Then the real danger occurred. As it is the extremely cold water kept on cutting her and the huge swirls made her sick. She felt likeit was a huge washing machine. The constant splashing and swirling of the icy cold water made her lose her consciousness. Soon she was suffering in that deep waters like a lifeless body. Abhay felt he saw Pia drowning herself. He instantly tried calling her but her cell was with Jeremy. He followed those visions and soon reached that beautiful dangerous part of the forest. The sight of Pia floating lifelessly in that plunge pool made him get the shock of his life. He immediately dived in but it was very deep. It was impossible to swim against the current but he managed to grap Pia's drowning body. He found her breathing uneven and her temperature was unusually high. He quickly jumped upwards, climbing the deadly rocks. He quickly laid Pia on the ground but she wasn't breathing. He frantically called her name saying,"Honey don't leave me". He tried giving her mouth-to-mouth but it was after a long time that she started breathing. She was still unconcious so Abhay took her quickly to his home. He quickly took her to the washroom to take off her wet cold dress. Her temperature was rising rapidly. He quickly helped her take a warm bath and dressed her in a white full sleeved long dress. He laid her on the bed and changed his own clothes quickly. Haseena came in worriedly. Abhay was stroking her hair when Haseena asked,"How did this happen?" "It's my fault. I pressured her emotionally",he whispered. "Why's she not coming to sense Abhay? Is she okay?",she asked. "She has high fever mom. Her body is literally burning. What do I do?",he asked. "I think we should take her to the hospital",she suggested. Abhay nodded and picked her up slowly in his arms. "Mom come with me please",he asked. "Sure",she replied. Haseena drove the car while Abhay sat at the back with Pia lying on his lap. Abhay felt regret about hating her so much even after she returned. He gently kissed her wrists and then her cheeks. "We're at the Dehra Care Hospital. This place will be okay for Pia?",Haseena asked. "Yeah I think so",he answered.Abhay took Pia to Doctor Vaishali asking her to treat Pia's fragile condition.She soon had Pia admitted and Abhay had to inform her about how and since when she's suffering of such high fever. When asked about his relation with Pia, he stated that Pia is his fincee. Pia remained unconcious for several hours even the Dr. gave her saline and various injections. Abhay kept standing beside her regretting his rude behaviour. But Pia wasn't recovering as yet. Her condition became quite serious and complicated. At night after ten past nine, Pia regained sense. When her tired eyes opened, she found Abhay's head down beside her and her hands "entwined" with hers. Abhay rose up and found her gazing at the ceiling. "Oh Pia!", he exclaimed and hugged her tightly. Pia weakly rested her head on his chest. "I'm sorry Pia, I'm really sorry. I love you Pia, I can never hate you",saying this he kissed her lips gently. She still had fever, so he didn't get any response.

Edited by I-love-Roses - 14 years ago

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

I kind of imagined that this is what Pia would do. Finally Abhay also has come around. Hope Pia gets well soon.

Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago

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Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Awesome update! I love how Piya totally turned down Kabir when he told her that Abhay had been flirting with another girl and if she would give Kabir a chance now that Abhay has left her! 😆 I honestly think Kabir was lying about Abhay flirting with another girl because no matter how mad Abhay is at Piya, he still loves her and would never leave her for another girl! Poor Piya, I'm glad she survived and now I hope Abhay will be back to normal with her again! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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ilove99

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Posted: 14 years ago

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oh!!pia drowned...i thought abhay would reach in time..

but abhay is on track now i hope we get some mast masala update next time and jaldi...

Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago

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---Priya---

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

atlast abhay is back with pia... awsome update... looking forward for the next part... plzzz pm me when you update

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PRERNA VERMA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Awesome Update...⭐️⭐️⭐️Thank god Pia is safe and Abhay was on time to rescue his love... Just hope that everything will be fine now...😊Eagerly waiting for next update.Continue Soon...Good Luck!!!👍🏼And thanks a lot for PM🤗

Edited by prerna26 - 14 years ago