MG FF: Forbidden Stranger Updated Part 20 pg 130

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Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: Dilsay
lovely update Simran

Thanks buddy 😊

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Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

awesome update...

thanx for pm

waiting for next...

Thanks dear

will try to update soon 😊

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Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: crazydream
Wow
Superb...
Awesome update. Awesome. Awesome
Too good..

Keep writing...
Luved it..

Thank u so much dear

😊😊😊

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sai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved geet nd NT
No maan
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

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Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: zahra15
nice update,...i loved the bit with all the bar dancers...it was awesome...n the last bit...geet thought maan wouldnt be there...but then she saw him...i loved it...continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

Thanks alot dear

will update soon

😊😊

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Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: Dhanvi83
Too good...thanks for pm...i just read it...simply amazing...good work...
Update soon...

Thank u so much dear

i dont know about mine, but i m pretty much enjoying ur ff 😆

will update soon

😊😊

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Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: shalini01
HA geet is dancing and maan is not going to be working, never ☺️ gosh i love this FF. please update soon and thanks for the PM.

Thank u so much sweety

will update soon

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Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved geet nd NT
No maan
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

Thank u 4 loving it dear

will update soon

😊😊

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#389

WOW..THIS STORY IS MOVING IN A VERY DIFFERENT WAY...

WHILE I AM LOVING THE DEVELOPING ATTRACTIONS BETWEEN MAAN AND GEET, I ALSO LIKE THE BONDING BETWEEN GEET AND NT...

ONE QN: ITS STILL NOT CLEAR TO ME IF MAAN AND NT FEEL SOMETHING FOR EACH OTHER? I THINK THE INITIAL ATTRACTION WHEN THEY FIRST STARTED OFF WORKING TOGETHER HAS BEEN OVERCOME BY THEIR HABITUATED NATURE... STILL WHY IS NT BLUSHING AT THE MENTION OF BEING MAAN'S GIRL? IS IT JUST EMBARASSMENT?

YOUR LANGUAGE HAS A BEAUTIFUL AND SLEEK FLOW WHICH I MUST ADMIT IS ANOTHER THING THAT DRAWS ME TO YOUR WRITING 😃

LOVELY 😃