MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Loved it.
I bet Riya has got a plan up her sleeves.
And will maybe involve daadi

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!
i'm really looking forward to finding out more about Geet's past!
Maan subconsciously is i think starting to care for Geet!
well i assume by the way he keeps questioning her and trying to make her comfortable!
i'm excited to see what idea Riya's tiny little brain comes up with
i'm super excited for the family camping trip!
awesome part! eagerly yet patiently waiting for your next update 😆

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Mina420

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

well, I am sure that MAan and Geet will be helpless in front of Riya. Children can get their way with adults much better than they would like to admitt... great update, thanks for the pm

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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Riya she is so cute nad she knows how to make her parents mouth shut and ya, plsss want to see maan slowly falling in love with geet.

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

your update brought a smile on my face...had a very grumpy morning as my daughter kept me awake almost whole night but now I am smiling

So Miss lady bug just found out tht her parents are not married...hmm just wondering what she will think of.

It seems Geet doesn'thave any family...that bit was sad

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kavs123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

awesom updt n riya tooo guddd

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Prerna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

nice part
waiting for Riya's planning
plz continue soon

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Mirela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

First let me tell its always a pleasure to read this...everytime u come with smth fresh and cute!! 😊 Coming to this update,hmm,seems that geets parents are kind of a soft spot...waiting for more details on that!! 😉 What i loved was riya's logic of married people,totaly sweet and innocent...in a way she was rite,the love they shower on her will be the one to unite them!!Anothe cute detail that i loved was riya's "Huh" and maan's fear for Thomas intervention in his daughter life 😆 😆 Too lovely 😃 The end of a great opener for the rest of the story,lil kid turning in cupid! That would b awesome to fallow,cause what maaneet case is a delicate one!! Thank u for this update!

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

awesome update dear...
loved it...
loved the way maan n geet r explaining to riya that they r not married...
they r having tough time... lets see wat riya is going to do...
wowww very excited...
plzzz continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm