MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

ROFL over the last paragraph. Too good girl :-D haha Thanks for the update

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Shalini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

my, my, my maan and geet together in a luxurious cabin. i wonder what can happen there 😈

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amazing part, maan cares about geet but he cant figure out why, maybe we should help him with that, i think the camping trip will do it.

i pretty much expect maan to flatly refuse going but riya will never take no for an answer

great update, do continue soon. thanks for the PM.

have a great weekend 🤗

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

This was again amazing...riya is sooo sweeet...I loved it when she said they cnt leave behind cookies or ice cream n also whendhe mentionned Thomas...poor guy loves him...but her the witty little khurana girl us always eager to get rid of him...hihi...

And then maan ...it seems he isn't wiling to accept how he feels for geet...I mean he seems to b fighting with himself n finding it hard to accept her as the mother of his child...

And that trip...I hope it wil give out something good for then...

Continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

AMAZING, MIND BLOWING, LOVED IT!

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

GREAT THEY ARE GOING TO CAMP TOGETHER

DO THEY GET TO STAY IN THE SAME CABIN

UPDATE SOON

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kooliio

@kooliio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Part 18

Loved the update!

But maan was mean to geet!

"If you think that i have such a conniving nature, then I hope you're praying that Riya didn't inherit it." Oh! She owned maan with her comment lol loved it!

Aww i felt so bad for poor riya :'-(

She thinks that her mum hates her...!
I thought after seeing riya so heartbroken, he will ask geet to come with them!
But nope he didn't, after all he is the great Maan Singh Khurana!

Part 19

Riya talking to her doll was really sad!
Glad maan went to get geet!
And yay she is gonna stay with them!

Totally loved the update...!

Part 20

Geet in khurana mansion...really happy!

And riya finally got to eat her chocolate cake lolz

Maan should change his attitude toward geet!
He is very rude to her 😡 mean maan!

So are they gonna go on the field trip?

Hope they do 😉...It might bring maaneet close!
And hope maan will start falling for geet!

Cant wait for the next update...!

Please continue sooon !

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

loving this FF.. Maan Geet and surrogate child.. a different take on Maneet.. good one...

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Mina420

@Mina420

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

I wonder how Maan will deal with this situation. For a person who likes things to run according to his will, this must be terrible... first Geet turning up, the Riya finding out and now the trip. But I like it how he is challenge so often...great work...