i cant help falling in love wit u[arsh]updtd pg 5

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Short story

I can't help falling in love with you

On arsh

Hey guys and gals and many don't I think some of you know me ' to people who do not know me' I'm Sophia, ' first you read this whole oneshot and then comment and like it ' this is the first time I have attempted to write a oneshot so please bear with me and read my oneshot fully even though it may bore you ^_^ and please do not come to conclusions without reading it fully and I'm not copying any ff or os this os is all my imagination

So here it starts-

Note- we are all ghosts in this oneshot

Armaan malik, the great 'no this is an understatement... the greatest and the biggest business tycoon in the world' the dream of every girl had finally fallen in love!!! Again'This was the talk of the decade all over the world' almost all the people on the earth heard the news' some of them were happy that the ARMAAN MALLIK had finally moved on with his life and their girlfriends would forge about him because he is occupied ' while some of them (girls) were streaming rivers made up of tears'and most of them were planning how to separate armaan and his present love and wanted to make themselves his future love' this was the scenario of the girls in the world' well not every girl was behind him but majority were'well this is not the correct story ' well lets see who actually knew the truth ' lets begin but rotating the earth' wait a second we actually cannot rotate the earth it rotates by itself' hmmm [thinking] what to do now' IDEA' hehehe not the sim card' this is not my ff its a oneshot completely different' ok okay people do not get pissed I am coming back to the oneshot' just got a little distracted ' now about my idea' lets rotate the globe' screech'screech sorry about that this is an old globe that's why its making so much noise' anyway lets stop at the united states and take a closer look' now lets change our gaze from Chicago and go to New York ' now lets take a trip to New York ' you must be thinking whose is this magnificent breathtaking' in short words dream house' well it is ' Armaan's house' you know it' how' oh armaan is coming down the stairs ' guys lets hide ourselves behind that tree ' I know that he is better than his house' okay now since he is gone lets get back to admiring the house' okay this is the ARMAAN MALLIK ' the sophisticated , dazzling, the most breathtaking and a person with whom anybody will fall in love ' and lets go inside the house wait a second ghosts cant go into a house without permission from the leader' since we cant go in lets imagine the interior of the titanic ' okay now since we have entered the house imaginarily lets go into his fiancs room' as we all know his fianc is Riddhima gupta', the famous Aman gupta's one and only daughter ' yes, the present owner of the gupta industry ' isn't she beautiful' ok okay his ex girlfriend was also pretty and beautiful' what's her name' I forgot' now I remember its shilpa' shilpa malhotra ' Armaan's ex girlfriend ' she was the sweetest person in the world' well this was according to me but many other girls did not think this way' they thought that she was behind him for money' well we do not know the reason why they broke up but I still remember when they broke up nine months go the earth was at shock ' most of the girls were happy to see ARMAAN MALLIK back into his single status ' and many boyfriends were torn apart because their girlfriend went behind armaan ' while all of this was going on we all noticed that the Armaan malik was not the same anymore' he was actually acting like a devdas but did not become a drunkard but he was not smiling' well he was acting like a devdas till yesterday' even today he was not smiling like before' and now he is engaged with Riddhima gupta ' I wonder what actually happened' hmmm lets rotate the globe again to see where shilpa malhotra is' don't worry this is a new globe' lets rotate it' screech' screech' oops its the same globe' sorry' anyway lets stop at Mumbai', the place where shilpa lives' awe she looks so cute but sad ' tears start flowing from her eyes' hmmm lets find out the behind these tears' common fellow ghosts lets get into the ghostly time machine' I know it's scary but we have to find out why she is crying' now lets ho to the beginning the very beginning'. What's this' omg we came into the Jurassic park' oops I told the very beginning' haha silly me' now lets go when armaan and shilpa first met'

Flash back [not narrated by the narrator because the narrator doesn't know why they broke up]

Shilpa was standing inside the cemetery campus ' sobbing ' because her father just died after a long battle with cancer ' she was hugging her mother who was crying worst than her she was relieved that her mother had finally started crying after the shocking news ' she looked at her father for the last time and started burying him under the earth' the people surrounding her were talking about the good things her father had done' she felt proud of her father ' she looked all over the cemetery she found people crying for their loved ones ' some people were talking to the grave and many of them came to give roses to the grave in which dead bodies of their loved ones were buried' one of them had caught her attention ' he was wearing a formal clothing ' he prayed at the grave put the roses on top of the grave and walked away ' she felt so connected with him even though she did not know him ' it was live at first sight for her' but she thought that it was just attraction' and she better stop looking at him like that or she will scare him away' when she looked at him all her tears stopped flowing' she started smiling' when she realized this she turned her head towards her fathers grave and again hot tears started flowing down her cheeks ' on the other hand armaan was standing in front of his friends grave ' telling her how he missed her and wished she never died' he was not sure weather she was listening ' but he thought that he gins no loss by doing this' soon his gaze shifted from the grave and went to shilpa's fathers grave' he actually came to see shilpa's fathers grave' he looked at shilpa' he immediately guessed her' and thought 'she is beautiful'

I know this part is short well this is a short story not an ff and plz press the like button and comment and tell me weather I should continue

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice ss...continue soon...n do pm me...
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hey sophia

nice ss nice strt

luvd it

would luv to read it mre

cont soon

thnx fr d pm kip pmin me

luv

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nice ss do plz contion and pm me
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hey!
nice part...it was sweet!
do continue soon :-)
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Very nice ss! do cont. Soon 😊Thanxx for the PM
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loved the start
Wonder y ArSh seperated
Continue soon
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hey nice strt
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
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hey its an amazing start dear... u have to continue this ff... and do PM me whenever u update 😳 loved ur story telling style... its so diff ⭐️... and write the next aprt soon...😊
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hey love the concept n your writing style very different n interesting ... anywaz loved the intro n armaan n shilpa's introductions ...n wat all has happened to them till now beautifully portrayed by u ... anywaz pls continue soon ... n pls PM mee if possible ...take care...love aish...

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