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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashmayurfan

Very nice ss! do cont. Soon 😊Thanxx for the PM


thank u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really amazing concept...

very interesting..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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oAwesome ..I wanted to be a ghost n now i m ghost thx to u and on top of that i m ghost in ARSH story ...its like dream come true :p ...nice ..continue soon :) could u add me to ur PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful starting..
Do continue soon..
And plz add me in your pm list..
Tc..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear

its avery nice concept

plzz pm me when u update next

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I can't help falling in love with you

Part two

Hey guys thanks for commenting and liking my short story ' it meant a lot to me ' and guys note that

My fellow ghost beings common lets begin our trip to when actually met' we do know that Armaan and Shilpa met at the cemetery ' both Armaan and Shilpa came to the cemetery for the death of Shilpa's father' but the question is how does Armaan know Shilpa's father when both of them do not have any connection' common lets find out' fine I will tell you the story

Armaan's father and Shilpa's father are actually brothers Armaan's father was the elder brother of Shilpa's father ' the actual name of Shilpa's father was Shashank malik not Shashank malhotra like you may all think' actually Shilpa's mothers name is Padma malhotra ' Shilpa's father never changed his name he was always Shashank malik and even Shilpa's mother never changed her name she was always Padma malhotra and Shilpa inherited her mothers name instead of her fathers ' Shilpa and Armaan do not know each other' even though they were related ' this was because Armaan's nani that is Shashank's mother was strictly against Padma's marriage with Shashank ' she wanted Shashank to get married to some high profile girl who was her best friends best friends daughter'poor Shashank had already given his heart to Padma and was not willing to marry any other girl other than Padma ' but his family forcefully tried to get him married' in the marriage when then pastor asked weather he was happy with marrying that girl he said no and apologized to the girls family' the malik family was furious at this and disowned him' being a twenty year old he got married to a young nineteen year old Padma ' he then continued with his medical studies through scholarship and Padma worked as a waitress in a five star restaurant to look after their household ' and soon gave birth to Shilpa' [Flash forward 20 years] Armaan was twenty three and Shilpa was twenty'. As we all know Armaan and Shilpa first met at the cemetery for Shilpa's father's death '

The meeting of Armaan and Shilpa took place again' this time they did not meet at the cemetery but a different place but connected to the cemetery' the hospital' yes, a hospital ' actually Shilpa works as an intern at sanjeevani, in Mumbai ' Armaan knowing that Shilpa works in sanjeevani' he bought half of the shares of sanjeevani ' so he was the new head of sanjeevani ' he was the boss' his family business was also under Armaan and he did a good job in both' all he wanted was to get the family together ' he was told by many people that the moment shashank left the house the house never had happiness' so Armaan set out to find his lost family ' this was unknown to his family who still did not want shashank or his family' all they care about is their reputation which was lost when they disowned shashank' but they still did not understand ' or maybe they did not want to understand ' Shilpa knew about her father's family and how they disowned him but she neither knew her father's family name nor did she know that Armaan is a part of that family ' Armaan and Shilpa became friends instantly' their second meeting was not bad nor was it good ' it took place in the ' elevator'. This was not planned by Armaan ' it was actually was the plan of god to keep them together ' since Shilpa is claustrophobic she started sweating and was in the verge of crying' fine if you cant imagine it lets go there' when it took place ' you will understand it better' now let me start the engine' seriously people' oops ghosts should use this machine quite often ' look at its condition' drrr' drrr[engine noise]' now people put on your seat belts' now get set'.. go'.zoom zoom zoom'.

[Flashback]

Armaan was getting into the elevator with a file in his hands in which the accounts of the hospital were written [sorry I did not get anything else in my mind]' he was reading it carefully ensuring that there was no mistake in it ' as soon as he entered the elevator the smell of lavender filled his lungs' he could not concentrate on anything' he turned his head and found Shilpa there at the corner of the elevator looking at him intensely ' her hands were folded holding some file' maybe the patients record' he noticed her and recognized her instantly' this was the same case with her she hed come following Armaan to the elevator ' she usually avoided elevators but today she was so engrossed in looking at him that she forgot that she was in the elevator ' his masculine scent filled her lungs' and she felt like she was losing control over her mind'. She couldn't help but look at him like a love sick teenager'. Suddenly there was a loud noise and all the lights were gone suddenly the elevator stopped being claustrophobic she started sweating' she could not breathe etc etc [sorry I'm not claustrophobic but I love going on elevators] Armaan, On looking at her present condition went near her and held her arm and started soothing her and she unknowingly hugged him tight not wanting to let him go' this made something stir in Armaan's stomach' her touch were playing a havoc on his senses' but he controlled his inner beast from coming out and making her his in every single way' soon the lights came on and they got out of the elevator and Shilpa thanked Armaan and Armaan cheekily offered his hand in friendship with her to which she happily agreed '

[Flashback ends]

Now I hope you guys understand' anyway guys now let's go to the time to when they confessed their love for each other' now we have to go to the future ' so common guys lets go there' well actually we are still in the past we are just going to see when Armaan or Shilpa confessed their love for each other

[Flashback]

Armaan and Shilpa were the best of friends' they were always together after their duty hours' their relationship was not that of an employee and boss but two lost friends,,, even Padma liked Armaan a lot' but however Shilpa and her mother did not know about Armaan' but Armaan's family knew that Shilpa is Shashank's daughter but they did not know that Armaan and Shilpa were friends and they hardly cared that shashank had died'

One day Armaan had called Shilpa to go out with him for dinner to which Shilpa agreed blushingly ' while armaan arranged everything and was waiting for shilpa's arrival' he waited enough so he made a way towards the door towards shilpa's home ' on the other side shilpa dressed herself in an green and blue knee length dress which showed all her feminine curves perfectly , it made her look very classy ' while she was walking on the road waiting for a taxi to come on her way, a bunch of drunken men were looking at her with eyes filled with lust ' shilpa did not notice them but soon did when their breath filled with the smell of alcohol touched her skin making her feel scared , she started shivering and started running away but the men started chasing her'she fell down many times but still got up and ran when she could not run any longer she stopped and noticed an Audi car stop right in front of her she tried to see who it was but could not ' when the man from inside came outside she realized that it was none other than armaan she breathed a sigh of relief after the green signal from armaan she went inside his car after receiving a green signal from him ' Armaan's eyes were burning with anger ' he clenched both, his teeth and his fists and beat the men black and blue' after that he enter the car and noticed the bruises on her leg, her left arm and a small wound on her forehead ' armaan was hurt looking a her in such a state' even though they were not going to kill her every drop of her blood which oozed out were like a thousand knives piercing through her body' he took out the first aid box from his car and started dressing her wounds as soon as he finished he cupped her face , looked into her eyes and started told her that

Armaan- shilpa, I would have died if anything bad happened to you' you are my life and I cannot live without you' you are the world to me I would die than live without you ,you are my life' I love you shilpa' damn it I love you'

Shilpa was too numb to react' soon tears formed in her eyes' armaan thought he shouldn't have told her the truth, he thought that he was going to loose her friendship forever' he thought shilpa to beat but instead he received a warm hug from her

Shilpa- I love you too.., I loved you since the day I saw the first time '

Armaan responded to her hug and kissed her on her lips

[Flashback ends]

THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR PRECIOUS COMMENTS AND LIKES' IT MADE MY DAY'. PLZ COMMENT AND LIKE THIS UPDATE'

Edited by sophialuvzmusic - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

really amazing concept...

very interesting..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...


thank you meant a lot to me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part..
thnx 4 da PM!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part!!!!!
getting very interesting.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyya sophia

nice one yaar

plz do cont soon

n thnx fr clearin d confusion of hw armaan n shilpa's father knw eachother

plz cont soon

luv

Bipin

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