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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy,,
updatee sooonn!! :) :)
an pllzzz plzzz plzzz pm me(puppyface)...:) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...read the whole ff...its awesome...plz pm me when you update
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Originally posted by: swaron502

hey i realy wana read ur ff... bt mane abhi tk shuru nhi kia...sowie...jb shuru karungi i wil definitely comment evrytym...



hope u read it soon n like it
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waiting fr d update...
wen r u gonna post????????
do pm me!!!
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Originally posted by: preetibaheti

waiting fr d update...

wen r u gonna post????????
do pm me!!!



surely will PM u.. its in progress actually..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow...just read the whole ff...gosh im speechless...it was awesum...all the parts were fabulous...u guys are superbb⭐️⭐️⭐️..writers...plzz pm me wen u update the next part...
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Originally posted by: lovely7010

wow wow wow...just read the whole ff...gosh im speechless...it was awesum...all the parts were fabulous...u guys are superbb⭐️⭐️⭐️..writers...plzz pm me wen u update the next part...



Thank u soo much.. 😊 will surely PM u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Mick and Farah...i just wanted to say that your FF is just absolutely amazing...i came across your FF today and finished reading all the parts in a matter of hours...i mean you guys are just so creative!!
i hope a new part is coming out soon...please dont leave me hanging!!! it was just beautiful!
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This one is for you MICK. I wrote MICK a pm sayin how much I loved all the parts of their ff and I just wanted to share my views with everyone else. Also thank you mick and farah for coming up with sommething so creative!

Hahah...there's sooo much I loved that I wldn know where to start from!...and i just wldn be able to do justice to the way you write...i mean for starters i love the name of your ff...i mean for me atleast heartbeat symbolizes more than just love..its passion, longing, desire, yearning, soul..i dunno..its pretty much everything!!

in part 1 & 2 i love how you've introduced chabilal again as a way to manaofy rey...they don use it on the show anymore :( ...i thot it was one of their cutest scenes..so you kinda sent me down memory lane there :P ...and even the part where instead of punching rey she kisses him on the cheek...like id love to see kria actually be daring enuf to do that :P

in part 3: i love how you've written about kria questioning her feelings for rey? like you can totally visualize it! like the way you write makes it seem so real...and of course the all time favourite bedroom scene...im a die hard romantic at heart...what can i say :P

in part 4 & 5: i can totally imagine the way rey would try to hide from kria's mum when he suprises her by going to her place pick her up...the way you've described rey's anger toward sharon in this part was mindblowing!..even the way sharon talks about what happened with rey to swayam was also really well written...i also love nilesh's lil rap where he uses kriyaansh...that was, how can i put it.."really baap" :P

in part 6: the thing i love the most is ur personal comment on how certain behaviours in college can be injurious to health!! i just could not get myself to stop laughing!! ...i also love how you got chabilal to ask romaira out on a date...now that was smart! :P

part 7: what can i say...ur description of their date gets me all woozyy...i love how you added the picture of that gazebo...it makes it all so much more real...aaah and the thought of rey aka amar in a black shirt ?...oh and the "aati ka kya khandala" addition was also just too hilarious..like i could totally imagine it!!...and just wow for the way you describe their romantic scenes...its like you feel like your watching it live.!!! if only we all had boyfriends like Rey ?

part 8: ur flashback detention secene made me youtube the episode just to see it all over again...the dreamy eyes and the puppy dog face just makes your heart melt! ...and the fight between viha was just tooo cute!!

part 9: loved the way you introduced a jnew character,,,i guess if the girls get a very hot professor then its only fair that the guys get one too ! :P

part 10: i love how you've describe the misunderstanding that kria has..thinking that rey was asking ms. jenny out...you made it feel so real! ..i also love the twist of how KSG plans to help the girls...kinda like the kabaddi scene bt the other way around!

part 11: okay for starters...that was one very very very long update...but i devoured every but of it :P...i loved every single bit of it...it was written perfectly!
P.S : i love Nikhil Chinnapa!!

part 12: okay i have no words...i mean how did you even come up with the whole make his stay the night idea...i mean trust me when i reached the end i felt like crying...like i wanted more...please please temme there is an update coming up soon...pls pls don leave me hanging there!!!! its like waiting for the time between Thruday - Monday to pass and for D3 to air again!!

so i know there are only 11 parts and somehow iv gotten 12..but i hope you understand the scenes im describing,...im sorry if you don agree with something or if iv offended you in anway
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RECAP:

Rey stays at Kria's place and the night ends with them dancing at the terrace.

PART 12:



The night was finally over with some sour moments for some and for some a romantic adventure.😳

Nil Bharat and Amar stood in the locker room lost in to their own thots of previous nite.

Vicky enters the locker room and Nil wakes up from his thot and says 'hi' nd turns to his locker but turns bak to Vicky again.

V: kal raat (lost)😍

Nil Bharat nd Amar gets confused😆

Rey who was at the door enters

R: kal raat (lost)😍

Swaym also enters

S: kal raat (lost)😍

Nil Bharat n Amar share a luk🤣

N: Oye kal raat aisa kya hua jo tum sab ke hosh udd gaye😆

Rey and Swaym stood straight getting bak to their senses

N B A luking at them wid a questioning xpression…Rey quickly turned towards Vicky trying to act innocent😆

R: Vicky kal raat kya

V: kal raat ko

Nil gets all xcited and nags him

N: bol na kya hua kal raat(wid his phamous eye-expression🤣)

S: oho kya baat hai Vicky chal jaldi bol na

V: wo (he said sharmaofying)

B: abbey oye apni deewani ki tara sharmana band kar aur jaldi bol

V: wo hum dono haatho mei haath

N: aur aur (said nil lyk a kid xcited)

R: bol na jaldi Vicky

V: aur fir uska nasha uttar gaya fir wo ghar chali gayi

A: bas itna?

V: haan kyun aur kya chahiye…but it was special (he said sharmaying😳😆)

N: chod faltu mei xcitement bar haya

B: ek sec agar kal raat tere liye spcl tha tou Swaym aur Rey kyu itna khush hai🤣

N B A nd V looked at Rey nd Swaym who looked at each other for help and den dey both moved on both sides of Vicky and started acting.

R: arey apney dost jigar ke tukre ke liiye khush hoon

(said Rey hugging Vicky from the side)

Dey turned deir look to Swaym

S: mai bhi

(he said quickly wid deir questioning looks)

S: humari mehnat finally rang layi Vicky and Neha almost set

(he also hugged from the other side and Vicky N B nd A looked at both of dem wid doubt wid Vicky trapped btw Rey and Swaym🤣)

V: aye (Vicky moved dem away from him) co..control yaar😆

S nd R: yeah yeah

B N A still stared at Swaym nd Rey suspiciously.

S: chalo na class nahi jana hai kya😆

(he said pushing dem all out of locker room and he goes off to his locker to take his books and so dus Rey but Vicky stops him)

R:kya

V: dusro ko bewakoof bana sakta hai lekin apne chadibuddy ko nahi😳

R: k..kya matlab

V: kal raat Sharon tou Swaym ke saath thi aur tera K...K...Kria tere saath😉

R: haan tou…mai usse ghar drop karne gaya tha

V: acha tere shakal pe ye jo bhara bhaje hue hai na mujhe sab pata hai

R: kya pata hai…kya bol kya raha hai tu

V: chodne tou mai bhi gaya tha Neha ko aur Swaym Sharon ko

R: tou

S: tou tu bata humein ke Kria ke saath hua kya

R: arey hua kya matlab jaise tum log chod ne gaye the waise mai kriya ko chodne gaya tha…kyun Swaym tu Sharon ko chod ne nahi gaya tha kya

S: eh..eh mai wo…tu topic divert mat kar..dekh Vicky topic chnge kar raha hai

V: dekh Rey tu zyada humein ghuma mat seeda point pea a warna teri pol pehle se phut chuki hai😛

R: kaisa pol

V: he he he (evil smile)….subhe gaya tha mei tere ghar😈😆

R: g..g kaunsa ghar

V: kyun bhul gaya apne ghar ko tabhi mai sochu raat bar tu ghar mei nahi tha

S: kya tu raat bar ghar mei nahi tha

R: wo mai wo

V: chal bachu bahana mat soch ab bhet aur poori baat bata

R: arey poori baat kya wo mai kisi frnd ke waha gaya tha tou usne kaha reh jao tou mei reh gaya

S: FRND….ye frnd hai kaun

V: KRIAAA (said Vicky loudly but Rey caught his mouth)

R: kya bol raha hai kisine sun lia tou

V: isiliye tou keh raha hoon isse pehle koi aur dunle tu humein suna kaha that u

S: acha wo chod ye tou bata baat kaha tak puhochi

Rey was lost again into the nite dancing under the moonlight stars wid his love his baatcutter. He went over to sit at the bench and Vicky nd Swaym followed him.

R: baat…ab mis baatcutter ko mujhse baat karne mei koi problem nahi hai

V&S: awww (dey hug Rey but Rey cums bak to his senses)

R: mera matlab hum ab ache dost hai bass

V: basss

S: ache dost ka tera definition tou bata

V: mai kya kehta hoon seedha ja aur bol de dil ki baat…ami bhi apne deewani ko bolne wala hoon

R& S: WAT

V: haan (he said clapping hands xcitedly lyk a kid…but someone from behing said 'NAHI'…3 of them jerked and turned to see who spoke)

V: sorry sir


K: sorry nahi….nahi

V: wat nahi😆

K: nahi nahi😆

V: par sir apne bola hai nahi aur maine bola sorry fir aap kehte hai sorry nahi nahi mei confuse ho raha hoon😆

R: Vicky chup kar na

S: aap aisa kyun keh rahe hai sir

R: xactly I mean why cant we….mera matlab hai Vicky propose to neha?

K: hmm ofcourse kar sakte ho

V: ok fir mei chala (said Vicky and was walking towards the door wen Karan said)

K: aur joothe kha kar aana (he ran bak to Karan )

V: p..par kyun sir meri deewani bhi mujhe pasand kart hi hai

K: ye usne kaha

V:nahi

K: tou uske chehre pe likha tha

V: (Vicky opened his mouth to say sumthing but den closed again) kya aap bhi na sir chehre pe kaise koi likhta hai wo tou haath pe likhte hai ya fir tattoo banate hai jaise aapne banaye 😆(he said touching karan's tattoos and gawking at it….Karan raised his eyebrow at Vicky's touch and immediately moved away)😆

K: thnk u very much door se dekho😆….ladkiyan chahe kitne bhi ache dost ban gaye ho par love confession kabhi nahi kar sakte…..aur tum use jaa kar propose karoge tou get ready to be rejected

V: nahiii….rejected nd dejected…..nahiii aisa ho nahi sakta

K: aisa hoga

R: par kyun

K: the LOC

S: wat lock a iske saath kya connection hai

K: connection hai….abhi tak sab ek war mode mei hai use pyaar mode mei badlo

V: k…k…kaise sir….kaise sir (jumping up nd down)

K: the 3s's (he said holding Vicky still to the ground😆)

(and then the whole scene of Karan's tuition on three s's and all dat cums)


JENNI is conducting a ballroom dance class in the rehearsal hall (JUST LIKE NICOLE DID IN D3)

KARAN MALLIK was just passing by wen he heard the faint soft music coming from the rehearsal hall…he was standing out the door watching Jenni…

Dance really did enlighten her face the most….she was dancing d ballroom style wid Rey…when all the boys were sulking at Rey (esp Nilesh) the girls were chilled out sum how except for Kria who looked as if she was about to hit someone😆

While Rey was dancing with JJ his attention nd eyes were on Kria…

gud going Rey, Karan thought….Rey was working right on the track.😉

Karan entered the hall and looking at his sight JJ xpressions changed in to murderous looks.😆

J: yes mr. Malik how can I help u?

K: JJ I mean miss G I was thinking ke u r here to assist me toh why not I help you today

J: first of all its Gupta not G…..nd secondly thank u but I think I'm managing well here

K: rite u r

J: xcuse me

K: mai soch raha tha ki kyun na hum pairs mei kaam kare…u r teaching dem ballroom so its very imp to work in pairs.. rite guys?? (everyone agrees with him)…so lets get pairs ready and me and miss Gupta will observe how u ppl r doing it rite😳

Sharon: sounds cool sir


(Sharon moves towards Rey but before that Karan stops her and looks into her eyes)😆

Karan: Sharon

Sh: yess sir
(lost….Swaym eyes Karan and moves towards dem but Rey stops him)

K: pairs mein choose karunga and u have to dance with d person I say

Sh: ok sir
(she agreed lyk a well behaved kid)😆

[Swaym nd Rey gawk at Karan nd Sharon]😲

Sw: maan gayi

R: aise tou mujhse bhi nahi maanti
🤣

Sharon moves away and goes to Simmi Rinni while Rey and Swaym falls over to Karan's feet..😆

R: aap toh sach mei guru ho sir..

S: aap mahan ho..


K: guys kya kar rahe ho get up (Karan tries to lift the two up but they r jus going on praising Karan finally he shouts out when JJ was going to look at them) ATTENTION🤣
(Rey nd Swaym stand up straight immediately wid hands on their heads…Karan shakes his head and lowers their hands whispering to dem)
don't act like fools my bloody phools🤣
(He then looked at everyone else who looked doubtfully at him and the two boys)😆
K:Wo mai I was giving them tips how to make muscles😛

J: Mr.Malik filhal ye mera dance class hai aap apne personal tutions kahi aur dijiye

K: rite dance class soo couples ready

Before Jenny could speak or take a step ahead Karan moved and started pairing himself each and everyone. Everyone was perfectly matched Karan winked at the boys as dey took in their partners hands.

Kriya felt so elated to be handed to Rey but why she thought…sumhow this thought also annoyed her in her head…what was it that with every single thing Rey dus or with every single touch of Rey she wud shudder but yet feel a butterfly feeling about the touch…wat was happening to her.😳

Rey took up her hand and placed it on his shoulders and caressed back thru her hand to her bak…and took up her palm into his oder hand…Kria closed her eyes going breathless with his touch😍…Rey softly spoke

R: Kria (she opened her eyes slowly)…look at me😳

Rey looked straight into her eyes which raise up…he felt as if he hit the sea shore and the big wild waves pulled him in to the sea.

The light around them was dimmed and the music was put on.

They moved with the tune hand in hand dancing in the room but minds across the sea.

R: Kria

K: hmmm

R: thanku

K: kisliye

R: for yesterday nite

(Kria smiled at him)

K: friendship mei no thnku😆

R: hmm rite…Kria

K: hmm

R: wo actually shoulders mei haath aaram se rak the hai u knw (Kria was soo lost in her deep thoughts and blushing so much dat she din realize she her hand on Rey's shoulder turned into a tight grip)🤣

K: omg I'm sorry wo mai

R: shhh (he pushed Kria at her bak whr his hand already was towards him and put his finger on her lips)…friendship mei no sorry😆 (Kria nodded lost into Rey's eyes…he moved his hand and caught her palm again and started dancing whyl Kria was still in her own daze)😳

On the other hand Bharat and Vishaka struggled to set their hands on each other.🤣

B: abhey yedi tera haath upar hona chahiye tu ladki hai..

V: oye kya matlab hai tera….mai ladki hoon tou mera haath jaha bhi rahe...tujhe kya

B: par Vishaka aise nahi pakar te hain

V: aye dun try to teach me man…who cares abt d hand positions anyways…dance hi sikhna hai na…chal leg movement dekh😆

On the other side two were deep lost in to each other dey were holding demselves perfectly😳but they forgot to move and dance to the tune Amar and Rinni🤣

A: Rinni

R: bolo

A: tum aaj bohat athi(achi) dikh rahi ho

R(blushing): thnku

Karan peeked on them😆

K: peeka boo guys agar move karoge tou acha hoga u knw dance on d music🤣

A&R: rite sir (both waking up from deir dreams and strting to dance)

Poor Simmi could not handle the excited Nilesh😆

S: Nil mai yaha hoon

N: par mai waha hoon😆

Simmi looked towards his destination wid angry jelous face…Nilesha was busy admiring Jenny.

S: Nil tumhe mere saath dance karna hai (she pulled him towards her and set the hands and strtd dancing)

N: lekin mujhe unke saath dance karna tha (making a sad face)😆

S: Nil eyes on me (holding his face to look at her)

N: noo eyes on her (lost looking at Jenny)

Simmi stamped her foot in anger and gave up trying to grab his attention.

Swaym and Sharon who were already dancing were busy looking everywhr but at each other.

Sh: dekho abt kal raat

S: its ok

Sh: no its not

S: fyn its not

Sh: tum-

S: wat? Tumne kaha its not tou its not😆

Sh: luk get this okay jus becoz u dropped me home nd all that zyada apne hopes high mat karna

S: okay…as u say

Sh: aur aur aaj mai jo dance kar rahi hoon dun get the wrong idea…its only becoz of Karan sir

S: yeah sure I get dat

Omg Sharon jus cud not take it…his behavior gosh it was annoying him but why she didn't even undrstnd dat.😆

Vicky and Neha were dancing perfectly to the tune twirling around wid their non-stop filmy dialogues

V: deewani

N: bolo BABU

V: tum Bollywood ke saath ballroom bhi kitna acha nach lethi ho😳

N: really

V: haan

N: thnx

V: mention not…deewani

N: bolo

V: ballroom ke liye kaunsa rodras hona chahiye

N: (sharmaofies)

V: bolo na

N: wat bolo na…Neha showing u d ras whr is ur mind working Deewana😆

V: oh wo actually mere mind mai tou sirf tum ho

Neha sharmaofies…while Vicky wonders

V: sharma rahi hai ya ras dikha rahi hai…samajh nahi aatha…puchu ke nahi puchu…nahi puchta agar galtise angry ras dikha diya tou😆

N: wat u thinking r

V: k..k..kuch nahi abt u only

Karan gave out his hand to JJ and asked her to dance wid him but she rejected …and den he pulled her hand nd pulled her towards him and before she wud scream

K: guys Jenny and I will show u the way how to do it and u guys can observe and learn

Everyone: ok sir

J: look mr.Malik jus becoz tum counseling kar rahe ho nd I'm supposed to assist u dus not mean u can do whatever u want

K: wat I want…mai jo chahta hoon wo tou tumhe already pata hai na JJ

J: stop calling me dat…and ek baat samajh lo hamesha sab kuch tumhare hisaab se nahi hoga…jus becoz u want it dus not mean the other person also wants dat

Karan's frustration grew more and more and he pulled her more close to her both of them dancing around perfectly but with luks of hatred

K: oh pls JJ misunderstand karna tumhari purani aadat hai…tumhe wo har cheez se problem hoti hai jo mujhe acha lagta ho…get this thru to urself everything cant work on ur way coz ur way is always wrong

J: misunderstand…really…no mr.Malik u r wrong…galti hamesha tum karte ho….misunderstnding ki koi jaga hi nahi hai yaha

K: galti maine ki lekin wat did u do u din even try to understand me why JJ

J: leave me Karan

K: nahi jawab do…y

J: becoz u hav chngd…u r not d person I knew before…u were jus one of dem infatuated wid urself and wid ur own way of thinking…kisi aur ke bare mei sochte the kabhi

Jenny was abt to leave wen Karan caught her wrist tightly and pulled her towards him again widout oders noticing.

J: Karan leave me (she said thru gritted teeth)

His eyes were not filled wid anger and pain….he jus cudnt believe his JJ told him all dat…Jenny twisted her hand to try to leave his grip and finally did and pushed him away from her…everyone stopped dancing.

J: xcuse me plss

K: maam lekin

Karan: guys class is over u guys may leave now

R: but sir-

Both Jenny and Karan left without looking bak.

K: inn dono ko kya hua

R: pata nahi

S: NIL…NIL uthooo NILESH getup yaar (on the other hand poor Simmi was trying her level best to wake up Nil who slept on her shoulders dancing the slow ballroom dance)😆

N: huh…khatam hogaya

S: uff…forget it

(And then after dat all the classes KSG nd the gang had in the show and the classes they had wid Nicole but u can imagine Jenny instead hahaha that's wat all happenes)




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