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Originally posted by: lovely7010
wow wow wow...just read the whole ff...gosh im speechless...it was awesum...all the parts were fabulous...u guys are superbb⭐️⭐️⭐️..writers...plzz pm me wen u update the next part...
Rey stays at Kria's place and the night ends with them dancing at the terrace.
PART 12:
JENNI is conducting a ballroom dance class in the rehearsal hall (JUST LIKE NICOLE DID IN D3)
KARAN MALLIK was just passing by wen he heard the faint soft music coming from the rehearsal hall…he was standing out the door watching Jenni…
Dance really did enlighten her face the most….she was dancing d ballroom style wid Rey…when all the boys were sulking at Rey (esp Nilesh) the girls were chilled out sum how except for Kria who looked as if she was about to hit someone😆
While Rey was dancing with JJ his attention nd eyes were on Kria…
gud going Rey, Karan thought….Rey was working right on the track.😉
Karan entered the hall and looking at his sight JJ xpressions changed in to murderous looks.😆
J: yes mr. Malik how can I help u?
K: JJ I mean miss G I was thinking ke u r here to assist me toh why not I help you today
J: first of all its Gupta not G…..nd secondly thank u but I think I'm managing well here
K: rite u r
J: xcuse me
K: mai soch raha tha ki kyun na hum pairs mei kaam kare…u r teaching dem ballroom so its very imp to work in pairs.. rite guys?? (everyone agrees with him)…so lets get pairs ready and me and miss Gupta will observe how u ppl r doing it rite😳
Sharon: sounds cool sir
(Sharon moves towards Rey but before that Karan stops her and looks into her eyes)😆
Karan: Sharon
Sh: yess sir (lost….Swaym eyes Karan and moves towards dem but Rey stops him)
K: pairs mein choose karunga and u have to dance with d person I say
Sh: ok sir (she agreed lyk a well behaved kid)😆
[Swaym nd Rey gawk at Karan nd Sharon]😲
Sw: maan gayi
R: aise tou mujhse bhi nahi maanti🤣
Sharon moves away and goes to Simmi Rinni while Rey and Swaym falls over to Karan's feet..😆
R: aap toh sach mei guru ho sir..
S: aap mahan ho..
K: guys kya kar rahe ho get up (Karan tries to lift the two up but they r jus going on praising Karan finally he shouts out when JJ was going to look at them) ATTENTION🤣
(Rey nd Swaym stand up straight immediately wid hands on their heads…Karan shakes his head and lowers their hands whispering to dem)
don't act like fools my bloody phools🤣
(He then looked at everyone else who looked doubtfully at him and the two boys)😆
K:Wo mai I was giving them tips how to make muscles😛
J: Mr.Malik filhal ye mera dance class hai aap apne personal tutions kahi aur dijiye
K: rite dance class soo couples ready
Before Jenny could speak or take a step ahead Karan moved and started pairing himself each and everyone. Everyone was perfectly matched Karan winked at the boys as dey took in their partners hands.
Kriya felt so elated to be handed to Rey but why she thought…sumhow this thought also annoyed her in her head…what was it that with every single thing Rey dus or with every single touch of Rey she wud shudder but yet feel a butterfly feeling about the touch…wat was happening to her.😳
Rey took up her hand and placed it on his shoulders and caressed back thru her hand to her bak…and took up her palm into his oder hand…Kria closed her eyes going breathless with his touch😍…Rey softly spoke
R: Kria (she opened her eyes slowly)…look at me😳
Rey looked straight into her eyes which raise up…he felt as if he hit the sea shore and the big wild waves pulled him in to the sea.
The light around them was dimmed and the music was put on.
They moved with the tune hand in hand dancing in the room but minds across the sea.
R: Kria
K: hmmm
R: thanku
K: kisliye
R: for yesterday nite
(Kria smiled at him)
K: friendship mei no thnku😆
R: hmm rite…Kria
K: hmm
R: wo actually shoulders mei haath aaram se rak the hai u knw (Kria was soo lost in her deep thoughts and blushing so much dat she din realize she her hand on Rey's shoulder turned into a tight grip)🤣
K: omg I'm sorry wo mai
R: shhh (he pushed Kria at her bak whr his hand already was towards him and put his finger on her lips)…friendship mei no sorry😆 (Kria nodded lost into Rey's eyes…he moved his hand and caught her palm again and started dancing whyl Kria was still in her own daze)😳
On the other hand Bharat and Vishaka struggled to set their hands on each other.🤣
B: abhey yedi tera haath upar hona chahiye tu ladki hai..
V: oye kya matlab hai tera….mai ladki hoon tou mera haath jaha bhi rahe...tujhe kya
B: par Vishaka aise nahi pakar te hain
V: aye dun try to teach me man…who cares abt d hand positions anyways…dance hi sikhna hai na…chal leg movement dekh😆
On the other side two were deep lost in to each other dey were holding demselves perfectly😳but they forgot to move and dance to the tune Amar and Rinni🤣
A: Rinni
R: bolo
A: tum aaj bohat athi(achi) dikh rahi ho
R(blushing): thnku
Karan peeked on them😆
K: peeka boo guys agar move karoge tou acha hoga u knw dance on d music🤣
A&R: rite sir (both waking up from deir dreams and strting to dance)
Poor Simmi could not handle the excited Nilesh😆
S: Nil mai yaha hoon
N: par mai waha hoon😆
Simmi looked towards his destination wid angry jelous face…Nilesha was busy admiring Jenny.
S: Nil tumhe mere saath dance karna hai (she pulled him towards her and set the hands and strtd dancing)
N: lekin mujhe unke saath dance karna tha (making a sad face)😆
S: Nil eyes on me (holding his face to look at her)
N: noo eyes on her (lost looking at Jenny)
Simmi stamped her foot in anger and gave up trying to grab his attention.
Swaym and Sharon who were already dancing were busy looking everywhr but at each other.
Sh: dekho abt kal raat
S: its ok
Sh: no its not
S: fyn its not
Sh: tum-
S: wat? Tumne kaha its not tou its not😆
Sh: luk get this okay jus becoz u dropped me home nd all that zyada apne hopes high mat karna
S: okay…as u say
Sh: aur aur aaj mai jo dance kar rahi hoon dun get the wrong idea…its only becoz of Karan sir
S: yeah sure I get dat
Omg Sharon jus cud not take it…his behavior gosh it was annoying him but why she didn't even undrstnd dat.😆
Vicky and Neha were dancing perfectly to the tune twirling around wid their non-stop filmy dialogues
V: deewani
N: bolo BABU
V: tum Bollywood ke saath ballroom bhi kitna acha nach lethi ho😳
N: really
V: haan
N: thnx
V: mention not…deewani
N: bolo
V: ballroom ke liye kaunsa rodras hona chahiye
N: (sharmaofies)
V: bolo na
N: wat bolo na…Neha showing u d ras whr is ur mind working Deewana😆
V: oh wo actually mere mind mai tou sirf tum ho
Neha sharmaofies…while Vicky wonders
V: sharma rahi hai ya ras dikha rahi hai…samajh nahi aatha…puchu ke nahi puchu…nahi puchta agar galtise angry ras dikha diya tou😆
N: wat u thinking r
V: k..k..kuch nahi abt u only
Karan gave out his hand to JJ and asked her to dance wid him but she rejected …and den he pulled her hand nd pulled her towards him and before she wud scream
K: guys Jenny and I will show u the way how to do it and u guys can observe and learn
Everyone: ok sir
J: look mr.Malik jus becoz tum counseling kar rahe ho nd I'm supposed to assist u dus not mean u can do whatever u want
K: wat I want…mai jo chahta hoon wo tou tumhe already pata hai na JJ
J: stop calling me dat…and ek baat samajh lo hamesha sab kuch tumhare hisaab se nahi hoga…jus becoz u want it dus not mean the other person also wants dat
Karan's frustration grew more and more and he pulled her more close to her both of them dancing around perfectly but with luks of hatred
K: oh pls JJ misunderstand karna tumhari purani aadat hai…tumhe wo har cheez se problem hoti hai jo mujhe acha lagta ho…get this thru to urself everything cant work on ur way coz ur way is always wrong
J: misunderstand…really…no mr.Malik u r wrong…galti hamesha tum karte ho….misunderstnding ki koi jaga hi nahi hai yaha
K: galti maine ki lekin wat did u do u din even try to understand me why JJ
J: leave me Karan
K: nahi jawab do…y
J: becoz u hav chngd…u r not d person I knew before…u were jus one of dem infatuated wid urself and wid ur own way of thinking…kisi aur ke bare mei sochte the kabhi
Jenny was abt to leave wen Karan caught her wrist tightly and pulled her towards him again widout oders noticing.
J: Karan leave me (she said thru gritted teeth)
His eyes were not filled wid anger and pain….he jus cudnt believe his JJ told him all dat…Jenny twisted her hand to try to leave his grip and finally did and pushed him away from her…everyone stopped dancing.
J: xcuse me plss
K: maam lekin
Karan: guys class is over u guys may leave now
R: but sir-
Both Jenny and Karan left without looking bak.
K: inn dono ko kya hua
R: pata nahi
S: NIL…NIL uthooo NILESH getup yaar (on the other hand poor Simmi was trying her level best to wake up Nil who slept on her shoulders dancing the slow ballroom dance)😆
N: huh…khatam hogaya
S: uff…forget it
(And then after dat all the classes KSG nd the gang had in the show and the classes they had wid Nicole but u can imagine Jenny instead hahaha that's wat all happenes)
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