HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ] - Page 60

1 word.. AWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE...

Amazing!! Abhi bhi full on 10/10!!! :D

Originally posted by: AlexArsha

1 word.. AWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE...

God bless you n keep writin...

but just a small confusion.. this is the flash back.. so wen is the cont. from the phone convesation afta the date gonna start???

SOON ... VERY SOOONN... M WAITING FOR THAT PART TOOO...

JAISE AAJKAL D3 CHAL RAHA HAI NA, I HOPE TO REACH THAT LEVEL OF ROMANCE BTW KRIYAANSH.. !!!!!!!!!!

AND also MICK that COTTON CANDY dialogue was hilarious...haha...I ROFLED literally!!! 🤣

Originally posted by: preetibaheti

i actually started reading ur FF 2day

n spent my whole day reading d FF

read all the updates in 1 day(couldn't stp frm readin)

it is super awesome

keep on updating...waiting fr d next 1!!!!

n yea u guys really rock...luv d way u r writing kriyaansh's story..i hope it ws shown in D3 also...but still luving HEART BEAT👏..mick n farah u guys really deserve dis!!!!

hey thank u sooo much for the nice words.. glad u loved it... 😊

Gr8 job mick ... Waitin 4 ur nxt update eagerly...

hey mick n farah great 2 see u n ur updt back..=)

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hey mick n farah great 2 see u n ur updt back..=)

the updt was awesome

can imagine 2 baar koi na koi disturb karke chala gaya..lol

poor rey...lol!!

n omg rani laxmi bai thanked him 4 taking kriya home

n allowed rey 2 stay at their home as its really late

omg !!..rey ka jadu inpe bi chal gaya..lol

n rey was superb ..kriya ke khan khalye

"terrace pe milne aogi na?"..bolke bolke..lol

the last scene was really lovely

dancing on the terrace with music n wind =)

waiting 4 next updt

see uuu guys soon

love yaaa

thanks for loving it.. 😉

hadd hai yaar!itna lamba intezaar :@
but neva mind!all my anger is flushed out afta reading dis BEAUTIFULLL CHAPER.
1stly whn krias mum had seen him n asked him to cum up,I ws nt expecting sucha cool behaviour frm her :P
deir sweet lil romance in da gueest room & whyl searching for book ws cute!
" Kria closed her eyes to relax herself.. a pool of scenes of everything that happened tonite flashed in front of her eyes…the party the dance game and den the her and Rey's dance…her fite with Rey over the juice…her getting drunk with Rey and then Rey handling her in her horrible state.. at the pool.. and then the walk back home with Rey.. Everything had one thing common Rey " THIS FLASH BAK MADE ME HV GOOSE_BUMS>>AHH!! I SOOO SSSOOO LOVED DAT PARTY.
kria lyk a cotton candy..heheh
THE BEST NYT KI THE BEST N APT ENDING.WOW!!
PLSSS DON STOP WRITING DIS FF n RELEASE AT A ESSER INTERVALS N GR8 WOTKKK,YET AGAIN.