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Posted: 13 years ago
the latest update was so good. it was magical imagining kriyansh like this.😍
lamba tha toh padhne mein time to laga beech mein thoda irritating laga ki khatm hi nhi ho rha tha(sorry 4 that)😆 but in the end it paid off.
kriyansh scene was so beatifully presented. just LOVED IT❤️
COMMENDABLE👍🏼
HATS OFF👏
it totally rocked⭐️

waiting for more impatiently
Edited by monaya24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO HELLO !!!
I READ IT ...FINALLY !! and COMMENT Karti hun ..abhi ruk jao ...Sabar karo Sabar karo ./...
AND AND AND
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING THIS PART TO ME ...😳
I am Already Awwwing ...And tumko toh maloom hi hai ...Jab mera Awww...suru hota hai to Band hone ka naam nahi leta...😆
Now, before I start awwwinnnggg more ...THE UPDATE IS SUPER DUPER HIT BLOCKBUSTER ...
I will be Back after the intermission ... Thoda POPCORN and DIET COKE khake aa jaun 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was so gud why did u stop it i was feeling lost in this story completely.
pls update the next part soon.how can anyone wrte so wonderfully for two wonderful persons . kriyaansh was superb .swaron was also gud but my fav jodi is kriyaansh so write more for them .keep writing such wonderful parts in future

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HPmaniac

Yay! Update,finally!!! It was definitely worth the wait guys!

Ok first, I loved the description of the clothes that each of the girls were wearing, it was exactly what the D3 girls wud wear for a party

(On the other side Swayam looked at Rey who was smiling as if he won a prize)😆😆😆

So cute, Nilesh asked Simmi directly which color she was going to wear!! And Loved the little BharKa part!

N: Neha tou luving the place..

V: mujhe kab luv karogi

🤣

The game part is fun,esp ViHa+Nil 😆and this part:

S: Rey music jab band ho jaye tou mujhe pakar lena...

R: kyun tujhe kyun pakru mai??🤣

S: wo suna nahi tune'.two people will win dis game'.two special people...

R: abbey oye tu kaunsa special hai..🤣

S: acha toh Kria hai???

And the salsa performance!!!! Hayeee.I wish this wud really happen on the show!!! I'm dying to see something like this! And the song.I love it and it's absolutely perfect for KriYaansh!

eh any gay couples here(Nil and Vicky were standing beside each other who moved miles apart as Nik mentioned about gay couple)

🤣

Typical NiCky!!!!!

And Neha!!! Lol, it wud've been fun if she had actually tried to ask RDX for a dance!!

Poor Simmi, finally she had to ask Nilesh for a dance,but it's ok, at least they finally reached the dance floor!!

A: Rinni (he said putting out his hand)

(Rinni did not wait for him to ask and took his hand)

Awww, that's soo sweet!😊😊😊

Rinni: Jenny maam ke saath in ladko ko bhi drinks deni chahiye.sabak sikhane ke liye...

Si: Rinni (all were staring at Rinni)tune pehli baar kuch samajhdari ki baat ki (every1 agreed with Simmi)

Oh God! In logon ke mind blowing ideas! And they always fall into their own trap!!

ViHa are super cute and Kriyaansh fight over the drink! Poor Nil.

Aww, so cute Kriya, drinking tequila shots

But seriosuly, how stupid can the girls get? Khud unhone hi drinks bheja tha ladkon ke liye and they drank it???🤣 But ok,iska result bohut accha hai!!

Poor Jenny though.now I'm curious, kya hua tha unke beech???? (has this happened in DMG too?)

Kria and Sharon hugging?????? I wish yeh sach mein hota guys!!!! 1st toh I wud be in a shock! Then I wud just keep laughing on and on!!! This part is so amazingly cute!!! Awww'.

Haha,Reyam have no idea! "Bichre hue behen".🤣😆😆

And the KriYaansh part after that...wow... mean, where do I even start??? I loved this whole Kriyaansh part!!!!! It was cute and romantic and just really, really good! But I can't believe u stopped it there!!! Torture!!!

Waise, if u don't already know by the lenght of this post, let me just say it here...I absolutely LOVE the update!!!!
When r u'll going to update next??????? Jaldi se PLEEEASE!!!!
coz diwali holidays r over, kal se cllg..and no D3 for 3 days...so I really need to look forward for something!!! so please update soon!



THANKS A LOT SARAH N EVERYONE ELSE WHO LIKED IT.. ALSO TO OTHERS WHO DID'NT LIKE IT.. 😆

WELL, I REALLY DNT KNOW ABT THE NEXT UPDATE.. PROBABLY NT SO SOON AS MY EXAMS CLOSING IN SOON..
😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
U guys r truely lovable the way u write its awsome nd catchy
i liked ur ff
to b honest i read frm part 8
i loved it yaar
mujhe itna acchha laga i toh waiting fr next part
even part 10 was superbly described
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Posted: 13 years ago
micky and farah guys ur awesum u really write it like we r watching it on tv...really i cud imagine all the things in my mind thank u for such a lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
so so cute and sweet...
esply d endin part..."kaun main.."..."nahi ramaira"😊❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay, this is freaking amazing!!!!! it's sooo goood! and so funny!(: i could picture the WHOLE party scene in my head!!!!! i loved it sooo much(: nice job(: !!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashree45

okay, this is freaking amazing!!!!! it's sooo goood! and so funny!(: i could picture the WHOLE party scene in my head!!!!! i loved it sooo much(: nice job(: !!!!!!!!!!!



thanks yaar.. that was d only purpose so that u cud imagine d same thing that was running in our minds..!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww love dis.. next part kb milega..? cnt wait

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