New OS ' A Good-bye Kiss vs. an Eternal Kiss'

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Marvee Khan

@marvee-khan

Explorer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hey Zeynab!!!😃

I was about to fall asleep and just decided to check IF, saw your pm for the os and randomly read and boy am I glad I did.

It was BEAUTIFUL!!! and it was so much better than the move😆

I love love loved it!!

Cheers,

-Marvee🤗

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: itsreallyreal
Hey Zeynab!!!😃

I was about to fall asleep and just decided to check IF, saw your pm for the os and randomly read and boy am I glad I did.

It was BEAUTIFUL!!! and it was so much better than the move😆

I love love loved it!!

Cheers,
-Marvee🤗

oh em gee !!! i can't believe a writer like you is liking my OS.***Zee pinching herself to see if this a dream or not 😆****

Thank you so much Marvee!😳

It really means a lot coming from you.

hayyyee rabba did i read it right " you think my OS was better than the movie???😲" okay i think that is the hugest compliment i have ever gotten.

u just made my night!

Luv u!!!!

~Zee

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Angel

@amita5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Fantastic OS

please keep on writing

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesome OS...

loved it...

loved that maan never let his love go...no matter what...n he fought for her...

cant believe its ur first OS>...it was superb...

do write more...

thnx for PM...

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heermeher

@heermeher

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

that was very sweeet OS

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

loved it when he turned it into eternal kiss

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesome!
Excellent!
Its the best I've ever read

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Anju

@AnjuMaanManiac

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

ABSOLUTELY SENSATIONAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MAANEET HOT FIERY PASSIONATE!!!!!!!!!!!

Its was amazing! I was so shocked when geet said this is a goodbye kiss...and felt the pain Maan was going through at that moment when he smashes his fist on the pole...

love the ending!!!!!!!! ❤️