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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Amazing ff.
I wish AR may unite in Maldives now.
I feel so sorry for baby.
Sid is soo cruel...
I want AR to unite soonest.
plz update soon.
Punam jaana u r a great writer n I love ur ffs a lot.
This one is also marvelous..
love
Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
hey Punam!
amazing part!
Ridz kahaa chali gayi?
Sid is so selfish! nd i can't belive Sashank!😡
i just hope ki AR reunite soon!
waiting eagerly 4 next part...
cont soon
thnx 4 pm
luv...Sunita:)



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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
i feel so sad for AR wish they come together soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84


HEY FRIENDS ...
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now the chapter --10







***AFTER 7 YEARS****''''''..



Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?

Dil mera churaaya kyoon
Jab yeh dil todna hi tha
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha'..
Dill mera churaya keun?


Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?

Rishima peeped in the room where her papa lied on the bed ..she saw that arman's eyes were closed but tears were coming from his eyes uncontrabelly..'''''''.


"Ho, dil ko dhadakna tune sikhaaya
Dil ko tadapna tune sikhaaya
Aankhon mein aansu chhupe the kahin
Inko chhalakna tune sikhaaya

Seene mein basaaya kyoon
Dil se jab khelna hi tha
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon
Humse munh modna hi tha
Dil mera churaaya kyoon?


Why did you break my heart?
Why did we fall in love?
Why did you go away, away, away, away?"'''''''''.



It was arman's daily routine.rishima was pissed off with it'she murmuring'"offoh!! Feer wahi sad song aur pappa ka rona'I hate it'"


She came in and switched off the music system'.arman got up and smiled'"aa gayi saitan ki nani'

Rishima pouted'"kya karun? Aap chain se rahne to dete nahi'

Arman made a cute face'"ab maine kya kiya?

Rishima '"wahi sad song..rona dhona..aapko to tragedy king hona chahiye tha'

Arman laughed and pulled her in his arm'.

Rishima kept her hand around arman's neck.."pappa, ek request..

Arman kissed her forehead'"kya chahiye?..ab kya kharidni hai?

Rishima thought for a while'.."ummm,nahi kuch nahi..bas mai jo kahun aapko karna hoga..plzzz'

Arman caressed her soft,silky hair.."ok,kabhi maine aapki baat ko na kaha hai?

Rishima .."promise'

Arman : "promise'

Rishima : " mere sath aapko dance karna parega'

Arman smiled.."ok'I like dance'aapki mummy ke sath'

Rishima cut his words'"plz.pappa,abhi mummy ki baat nahi,phir aap rone lagoge'abhi to humey kuch dhamal ka dance karna hai'be ready for it'

She changed the CD and switched on the player'.and yelled'."pappa!! start!!!'.


"girl you are my chamak challo
where you go girl
im gonna follow
what you want girl
just let me know
oooh oooh ohh
you can be my chamak challo
ooh ohh'''''''.


And in a minute, papa and daughter started a dhamal dance'..


"wanna be my chamakchalo'.
shorty im gonna get ya
you know im gonna get ya
you know i even let you
let you be my chammak challo'''''.



Rishima sprung up the bed and invited arman there making dancing steps'



"kesa sharmana aja nach k dikha de
aa meri hoja aa parda gira de
aa meri akhiyon se akhiyan mila le
aa tu na nakhre dikhaa
wanna be my chamak chalo
ooh ooh ooh ooh
wanna be my chamak chalo...
ooh ooh ooh ooh
wanna be my chamak chalo
ooh ooh ooh ooh...


arman made a high jump on the bed and lifted rishima in his arm'but he slipped and fell on the bed..rishima picked the pillow and hit arman with it'.



"tu meri chamak chalo
teri picture ka mein hero
give it to me girl mujko de do
ho hoo hooo
you can be my chamak chalo...


actually ,in a short while'the disaster arose in the room..'the bed cover 'pillows were on the floor'the things which were beside the bed'scattered all around the room'both were hitting each other with pillows'so these were burst and cottons were out of them ,which were now floating in the air , all around the room.



''''''''''''''''''.


Their dance stopped with a jerk hearing bi's angry voice'."feer suru ho gaye!! ..rishima!! '

Rishima protested making close arman's lap'."maine kuch nahi kiya,wo to pappa ne'

Bi glared at arman, who was now sitting on the bed lowering his head'"maine nahi''

Bi (raised eyebrows): "toh kya maine kya hai?

Rishima chuckled : "mujhe to yahi lagta hai,hai na pappa?

Arman (making a puppy face): "haan ,mujhe bhi'..

Bi held her head'"offoh! In baap-beti se mai paresaan ho gayi..jab mai chali jaungi'

Rishima cut her words'"mai bhi jaungi aapke sath'.

Arman : "aur mai bhi'..

Their cute argument made bi smile'."chalo,bahut hua'dinner ready hai'.

...

After dinner, rishima came arman's room'"pappa,mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi."

Arman pulled her in his arm'"haan rishima ,kaho beta.'

Rishima .." mai kal se dance class and tution nahi jaungi.

Arman : "keun? aapko to dance bahut pasand hai na,aapki mummy ki''

Rishima cut shorts'"mummy ki tarah mujhe kuch nahi karna'I hate my mummy'

Arman stunned!!..'rishima ! aap kya kah rahi hain!!

Rishima 's eyes were full of tears'"mujhse nahi dekha jata pappa,mai dance class chali jati hun aur aap mummy ko yaad kar yahan akele room mein rote rahte ho'.mumma agar hum dono ko pyar karti to chodkar nahi jati'

Arman : "nahi beta,unki bhi majburi rahi hogi'

Rishima .."kuch bhi ho,koi mummy apni beti ko chodkar jati kya? Mujhe sab pata hai pappa'bi ne mujhe sab bata diya..mummy ne dusri sadi kar li na..i hate her'

Saying those words rishima ran away from room'..arman was sitting on the bed hell shocked!!!'rishima's words were still echoing in his ears..."koi bhi mummy apni bachchi ko chdkar nahi jati'..


'''''''''''''''''''.


Arman woke up feeling a soft,little hand caressing his hair'rishima!!sitting beside him with a sweet smile in her lips'.."bilkul basket jaisi smile hai 'kitni pyari!"'arman said in his heart.

rishima :"papa,sorry and good morning'

Arman held her tiny hand and kissed'"sorry keun beta?"

Rishima lowered her gaze'"maine kal galat kaha na'mujhe mummy ke baare mein..sorry pappa'


Arman pulled her in arm .."koi nahi beta..mai janta hu aap apni mummy ko kitna miss karti hain. But beta ,I can't help'mai unhe wapas aapke paas nahi la sakta."


Rishima kissed his cheeks'"mujhe jarurat nahi..'mujhe sirf aap chaiye'

Arman smiled.. '" beta,mai ek baat kahna bhul gaya tha.kal aapki anjali masi ne phone kiya tha'aapki summer vacation start ho rahi hai na'masi , atul masa aur angel ghumne ja rahe hain..atul masa ke town,jahan unke mom- dad rahte they..apko bhi le jana chahte hain..


Rishima (confusingly) : "but papa,mai aapko akela chodkar!'

Arman laughed'."meri dadi ma'mujhe koi prob nahi hogi'

Rishima nodded in na :"nahi,mai nahi jaungi'mai aapko akela chodkar kahin nahi jaungi'


just that time arman's phone rang''



Rishima picked up the phone'anjali was other side'"rishzi shona..

Rishima (happily) '."masi!! angel di kaisi hai?
Anjali.."sab thik hain,but we miss you bittu'.
Rishima .."I miss you too masi..
Anajli : "to feer kuch din humare paas aao na..
Rishima :"but masi ,papa'
Anjali : "plz.beta'


Arman said her with eyes to say "yes".


Rishima : "ok,masi. mai aaungi'

Anjali : " ok beta'aapke atul masa kal jayenge aapko lene,,ready rahna'"

saying these anjali hung up the phone'and said in her heart'."jo koi nahi kar paya wo bas rishima hi kar sakti hai'riddhima ki beti hi usey wapas la sakti hai..plz. godji uski help karna'."



hope you liked it...



love you all
punam

Edited by anamika2010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Waoo... 7 yrs leap. Gud going jee. Waiting fr nxt part. Happy new yr
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesome part...happy new year😊have a blast😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
7 years leap..i like it
hope to seeAR together soon
thankx for
lov
maria:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
hey Punam! Happy New Year!
amazing updt!
7yrs leap!
loved Armaan-Rishima scene!
i wish AR r reunited now! can't c dem apart!
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm
luv...Sunita:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Awesome parts...
I just loved them..
U r simply amazing Punam.
I wish AR may unite soon..
Rishima is soo cute..

love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
hey, my loving friends ...TANVI_SEXY, peachgirl, araja1234, hotKaJen (sunita), samades, teenorchid, AR_LOVER( gourav), Riarai2346(maria) and crazy4kash(asma)... thanks a lot dear for your like tabs and for you loving ,precious comments...

and a very very happy new year to all of you...hope you enjoyed your new years holiday...





now plz. enjoy the next part of "gunahon ka devta"





chapter --- 11



"anji masi,mere papa to itne achche hain,duniya ke best papa,phir nannu unhe pasand keun nahi karte?"rishima asked her innocently.


Anji kept quiet for a while'she did not have any answer of it...she was narrating ar's love story to angel and rishima. Rishima wanted to know about her mumma'arman never told her about riddhima and whenever remembered, started to cry'so rishima had no courage to ask him..


But anji wanted to tell her about ridhzi,about her sweet ,loving sis.. who is the best sis in this world 'cause anjali comes to know that rishima hates her mumma.and anji had brought her for which purpose, it was necessary to tell her everything about riddhima '.everything about her'.her habbits,her passion,her likes dislikes and her unlimited for arman.


Anji started her story from the 1st day of their internship''.


1st "AR" meet at basket ball court'''''.






"bulls eye! Give me the ball plz..!

"bahut smart samajhte ho khud ko?"

"of course sweetheart! Samajhta nahi,hun."

"hey boys ,coach badal lo,faide me rahoge'

"yo basket ball!naam to batati jao'.



And 2nd meet at sanjiwani''''..



"mummy bachao,aunty dara rahi hai."

" di,tum nahi janti usey."

"Aur tum janti ho?"

"Ye sadi hui basket tumhari bahan hai!!"

"Beauty and miss beast!!!"


And then arman's prank on riddhima,teasing session,their fight'.


Riddhima : "arman! Kab se mai sorry kahna chah rahi hun..

Arman : 'decide karo,sorry bolna ya thank!

"agar yakin nahi aata paper par likhkar de dun? Paper lana plz'

Arman!!

Riddhima!!

Armaaan!!!

Riddhimaa!!

"tum ,tum kabhi nahi sudhra sakte!mai apna thanks wapas leti hun."

"sorry bhi wapas de dun?"

Plz.promise karo wahan tum mere peeche peeche nahi aaogi.mai tumhe aur jhel nahi sakta."



And their camp going'where started their love story'arman fell in love with riddhima'.



"mujhe pyar ho gaya hai!!! pyar ho gaya hai!!"'''''.


Kya kaha?"

"mujhe pyar ho gaya hai"''''.

Riddhima's laughter...'"I am sorry! Ye problem kitni baar ho chuki hai?i mean ye pyar kitni baar aur kitni ladkiyon se ho chuka hai?"


"riddhima ,I am serious,mujhe sach mein pyar ho gaya hai."



"asmani rang ho,pyar ki boond ho
Roshni ho dhup ho,chahton ki gunj ho ''''''''




Urging about his love to riddhima '







"kah do abhi ki tum mere liye kuch mahsoos nahi karti"


"tum mere liye kuch mahsoos karti ho ki nahi'"

"arman,tum kya kah rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha..chodo mujhe dard ho raha hai.."


"mujhe itna dard dekar tum thoda nahi sah sakti?"



'riddhima's ignoring attitude...'arman's accident ''''''.


"yaad hai tune hi kaha tha,dilchaspi nahi hai.."


"accident ke baad kya hua pata hai?"

"kya?"

"hum sabse pahle riddhs yahan pahunch gayi aur tab se lekar ab tak wo ghar nahi gayi."



And at last'''.. riddhima's confession of love.






"I hate you."

"but I love you"

"mai tumse..mai tumse pyar'I hate you."

"but I love you.."

"I ..i love you."


But Papa's resentment on arman'.and at last realising their true love'to give permission for marriage.




And occured that horrible accident and their separation'''..


Again coming back of arman and they got married ..(actually anjali could not tell them about that night,as rishima and angel were too young..so she told they married)


But to obey papa's behest 'sacrifices of her love arman and her life rishima'..




'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''



Angel and rishima were listening the story so attentively,like it was a fairy tale'rishima asked'

"kaho na masi ,nannu mere pappa ko pasand keun nahi karte?"


Anji looked at atul with a big confusion'she had to herself no any idea about it'


Atul smiled with a great pain.. .."actually beta, arman aur ridhzi sath hote to mushibaten aati hi rahti,,to aapke nannu aapki mom ko bahut jyada pyar karte they na,to unhe lagta arman ke uski life mein aane se aisa ho raha hai.."


Rishima (sighly).."naanu galat hain,mere pappa sabse achche pappa hain'


Anji pulled her in arm'" we know beta..aur isliye hum chahte hain ki arman aur riddhima ko apna pyar wapas mile,aur aapko apni mumma'


Rishima(in choked voice) : " mumma kahan hai masi? I miss her..mai unko apne paas chahti hun..

Anji : "actually hum isiliye yahan aaye hain.aapki mom yahin hai'ek orphanage mein rahti hai,wahan ke bachchon ko dance sikhati hai aur unka dekhbhal karti hai'


Rishima(excitedly) : "abhi chalo na mumma ke paas'


Anji : "nahi beta,usey pata chala to phir wo chali jayegi yahan se'isse pahle kai baar aisa ho chuka hai'humne jaise hi uska pata lagaya,wo chupke se wahan se bhag gayi feer se kisi unknown place par."


Rishima : "lekin keun? kya mumma ko mai aur pappa yaad nahi aate? Kya wo humey pyar nahi karti?"


Anji : "bahut'bahut jyada pyar karti,wo sochti hai uski wajah se hi tumpar musibaten aati hai,isliye wo tumse dur bhagti hai. wo sochti hai uske sath denewale har insaan par mushibaten aayegi,isliye wo humsab se dur chali gayi hai'.wo chahti hai ki arman,aap aur hum sab khush rahen.



Angel :"mumma,masi to bari buddhu hai..koi apno ko chodkar khush rahta kya? Uske yaaden hi unhe sad banati rahti hai na..takleef deti hai.."


Atul (lovingly) "yes,beta..aapne thik kaha,bilkul apni mom jaisi samajhdar ho aap."


Rishima(with full tears in her eyes) : "hum mumma ke bina khush nahi hain masi..


Anji : "I know beta,hum bhi nahi..aur yahi usey samjhana hai..par is tarah nahi,jaisa mai kahun waise'


Rishima: "ok,masi'aap jaisa kahe hum karenge''mai apni mumma ko wapas laungi'promise..



love you all
punam




Edited by anamika2010 - 13 years ago

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