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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
hey nice update
i guess armina is aman daughter
well gr8 update
thankx for pm
continue soon
maria
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Nice part sweety! Quite romantic too.. but I wished those moments were of AR.. cannot see them seperated at any cost.. especially My Ammy..want him to be happy always..😳😛 hoping to read more soon! thanks for the pm..update soon..😉





Edited by Jyo_Ksg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Awesome part. I think armina is armaan's daughter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
hey di
awesome part
Oh God that Sid i hate him so much...
how could he blame Armaan??????
poor Ridz n Armaan...dn't want see them sepearte...
thanks for pm
plz di update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
hey Punam
dat was fantastic!
how could Sid blame only Armaan when both of dem(AR) r equally responsible? can't he c deir love nd get out of their lives 4ever!
i think Armina is Armaan's daughter!
i can't c AR apart nd suffer like dis!
plz cont asap
thnx 4 pm
take care...Sunita
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Posted: 13 years ago
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jyo_ksg,niharika,freva123, stupidcupid1234,dimpledsmile,
cutie_ksg, vidu87,araja1234,hotkajen ,
shonadesire, and riarai2346 ..thanks a lot friends for your inspired comments...

hope you will like this part too...







gunahon ka devta chapter --3


Dr. said that she was pregnant.now sidh understood that arman would not let anyone to come between them... Riddhima could not be anyone's except arman."


and now she got Armina,arman's love . Carbon copy of arman.when she smiled, her lovely dimples made riddhima remembering arman.she got a reason to survive in her life.

...

Riddhima returned from her thought hearing a bit snoring sound of armina,who was sleeping close to her 'riddhima squeezed her in chest and again lost in her past memories '.


"arman ,ek baat batao,kya tum bhi apne papa ki tarah snore karte ho?"


"keun ,aisa keun puch rahi ho riddhima?"

"actually koi snoring karey to mujhe need nahi aati,I hate it.."


Arman pulled her in his arm.."okay baby,but mai sounga tab to snoring karunga na'actually riddhima tumhe pata hai,saadi ke baad to mai so ho nahi paunga. Itni khubsurat ladki bahon mein ho to koi so sakta hai bhala?"


Riddhima pushed her'."arman,baat badalna to tumse koi sikhe.kya tum saari raat jagey rahoge?"

Arman kissed her hand'"agar meri basket ko problem ho to mujhe saari raat jagne mein bhi koi problem nahi. love you basket."

Riddhima cuddled armina with mumbling.."love you arman,love your baby, love our love"


''''''''''''''''''''.


Bi :" arman beta , is tarah kaise apni jindagi nikalega? Tu ek achchi si ladki se saadi keun nahi kar leta? Wo tumhare hospital mein dr.simran bari khubsurat aur achchi ladki hai.


Arman was taking his dinner and bi was continueing with her blabber.

Arman : " aap to sab janti hain bi,feer aisi baaten keun karti hai?"

Bi : "janti hun isliye kahti hun.2 saal gujar chuke hain,ab to riddhima bhi tujhko bhul chuki hogi."

Arman uttered in wet voice : "par mai usey nahi bhul sakta bi.meri life mein aur kisi dusri ladki ka koi jagah nahi,wahan sirf meri basket thi aur rahegi."


Bi(in her heart) : " bhagwan ji,aap is ladke ka koi upay karo,mujhse iska dard dekha nahi jata."


''''''''''''''..



Gunahon Ka Dewta



Dr.sindhe came dr.siddhant's house to discuss a case where he overwhelmed to see armina..he had never seen before such a sweet beautiful baby'armina was trying to get in sidh's lap but he was not paying attention her'


Dr.sindhe picked up armina in his arm: " aapki beti to bahut khubsurat hai dr.siddhant. bilkul aap jaisi aankhen hain'.hai na dr. manjari?"


Dr. manjari caressed her cheeks : "bilkul sahi kaha aapne ."


Siddh glared at armina: " ji nahi , kisi aur jaisi hai"'.

Dr.sindhe(confusingly) :" ji mai samjha nahi..


Sidh : "actually wo apni mom jaisi hai'.

Dr. : " aap to kismat wale ho dr.siddh'itni khubsurat aur samajhdar biwi,itni khubsurat beti'


Sidh mumbled'.." huh! Kismatwala!achchi kismat payi hai maine'"

Suddenly baby uttered'"mumma'mumma'

Dr.manjari.(lovingly)."arey!papa saamne hai aur mumma'.baby pappa bolo'pappa'

But armina nodded in na'."nan..na..nan..na'

Sidh looked at her angrily and called kaki.."isey andar le jao kaki'..


Kaki : " ji '.
'''''''''''''''''''.

Sidh had gone singapore for a week'after a long time,riddhima got a relief cause sidh was not at home and she had a leave from hospital'.armina was sleeping beside her. Riddhima took out the album.when sidh out from home she always did it'riddhima was turning the page of album'.papa,ma,anji di,atul,and all friends'and her love arman!'seeing the pics,a heavy flow of rain coming down her cheeks'.she lost in her sweet memories'


She took an album which was full of her and arman's pics''the surprise party ,after her internship award, salsa dance with arman,then nawratra function at sapna's house,meet with arman secretly in the firescape,talking through eyes when friends were with , making masti in holi,rouka function with arman'and lots of pics of beautiful moments of their life!!.. now she had to live for those memories ! '.she kissed arman's pic.." jahan bhi raho khush rahna arman"'.


Suddenly phone rang and riddhima went to pick up the phone'dr. simi was on other side'she phoned riddhima to inform about their conference,which was held in maldives'..

Riddhima : " nahi dr. simi..mai nahi ja paungi,baby ko chorkar..

Dr.simi : " I know riddhima tumhara baby bahut chota hai,but 1 week ki hi to baat hai,aur dr.sidh bhi tab tak lout aayenge na..wo sambhal lenge bachche ko..

Riddhima : "but..

Dr.simi : " na mat karo riddhima,wahan world ke best doctors aayenge,humey bahut kuch sikhne ko milega'aur dr.sidh ko baby sambhalne do,akhir papa hai uska aur mai bhi to apne dono bachchon ko dr.mohit ( her husband)ke paas chorkar ja rahi hun.

Riddhima ; " ok,mai soch kar batati hun.

Riddhima hung up the phone and came in her room'.but she saw that armina was woke up and now album was in her hand'.she looked at arman's photo'

Riddhima (lovingly) : " aley mela baby'need khul gayi?"

Armina looked at riddhima and gave a sweet smile'and uttered.."pappa'

Riddhima was stunned!! How armina knew it! Armina pointing her little finger at arman's pic and continuesly uttering '"pappa'pappa'.

Riddhima pulled her in his arm with moist eyes'."beta,tu kaise jaan gayi?...

Armina was shaking her head with joy and patted the pic''pappa'papap'..

Riddhima kissed her '" haan beta,yahi tere papa hain'

Armina kissed the pic and uttered..'pappa'naith'.kithi'..(pappa,nice,kissi)

Tears flowing from riddhima's eyes with a great joy''.

Kaki was watching all these silently'she came to riddhima and caressed her hair'"akhir khun ne khun ko pahchan hi liya'bhagwan karey humari gudiya ko uske papa mill jaye''.


Riddhima hugged kaki tightly and uttered in her cry'."kaki ,mai kya karun? Kaise armina ko uska papa dilaun? Plz. Bhagwanji meri help karo. Mere liye nahi to is bachchi ke liye hi sahi'..plz. bhagwan ji is masum par daya karo'



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hey friends,hope u liked the part...plz.ignore my spelling or grammatical mistake and plz give a comment,how it is...

punam


Edited by anamika2010 - 13 years ago
Maria151994 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
loved the update
i am wondoring how arman and riddhima will mett??
thankx for pm
continue soon
maria
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Nice. Waiting for armaan and ridhima to meet and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Loved the update
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb part
luvd it
thnx d pm

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