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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey di
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sunds interesting...
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continue super soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey friends,so sorry for too much late ud...actually hell sick and lack of time are making me unable to ud...but promise now i will ud very fast...


anyways enjoy the first part-----

" gunahon ka devta"



NOTE--- THE INTENSION OF CREATING THIS STORY IS ONLY TO ENTERTAIN MY READERS. SO PLZ. DON'T MAKE ANY ISSUE OF IT.

COPYRIGHT –THIS STORY IS COPYRIGHTED @PUNAM….PLZ.DON'T PUBLISH IT ANYWHERE WITHOUT HER PERMISSION.


INTRODUCTION ---THIS STORY IS STARTED AFTER THAT INCIDENT , WHEN ARMAN SPENT A NIGHT WITH RIDDHIMA IN "DILL MILL GAYYE."


chapter --1

"GUNAHON KA DEVTA"

"tumne riddhima ko dhokha diya hai...tumne usey use kiya hai..."

"nahi sidh..maine usse pyar kiya hai...

"isey pyar nahi kahte arman ,isey vasna(sexual desire) kahte hain...tumne kisi aur ki patni ke saath...

"nahi nahi!...riddhima ne ferey jarur tumhare sath liye hain,par wo dill se meri hai...wo meri hai sid...kaho riddhima,ek baar kah do tum meri ho...tum kisi aur ki nahi ho sakti..." arman pleaded her in his cry..."arman-riddhima ko koi alag nahi kar sakta ..duniya ki koi bhi taakat nahi...you are mine...tum meri ho…"

"tumne paap kiya hai arman...tumne bahut bara gunah kiya hai...tum bahut barey gunahgaar ho..mera,riddhima ka aur is duniya ka,samaj (society) ka...innocent riddhima ka faida uthaya hai…

"nahi!!..maine koi gunah nahi kiya..."arman screamed in pain and opened his eyes with a jerk...bi was shaking him..."arman...arman...uth jao,feer se saapna dekha tumne?...

arman got up ...he was totally sweated!!...he mumbled..."sapna tha,koi nahi hai...riddhima uske paas nahi hai...wo to aaj se 2 (saal)years pahle usey chorkar chali gayi hai...ab to bas uski yaaden hain!!!...

...

arman got up,freashen up and started his bike on the way to hospital.now he lives in a small village,where no one knows about his past..no one questions him what he has done , then why he couldn't forget about his past? But he knows its not an easy task..….not easy to forget his past,his life…his basket!!!…

but now he understood that riddhima would not come in his life…now she is happy with sidh……she must be happy in her own world…where she has an understanding life partner like sidh.and surely they must have been moved forward in their life,but arman couldn't ….he can never move even one step without riddhima…..his life has been stopped at that point,where riddhima had left him…but why riddhima did not oppose even once,when sidh was blaming him? this meant she was also agreed that arman was wrong…and even when arman left the sanjiwani ,all friends tried to stop him,but not riddhima,not his basket.

A heavy flowing started from arman's eyes….he wanted to sweep away all his past memories with his tears….no,he has to forget all these….riddhima had blossomed in his life like a beautiful dream….a sweet little dream…now she went away….but even she enters in his dreamland each and everynight , and will come in his whole life……

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hope you liked it...plz.do a comment and if u liked, plz.press the like tab...thanks a lot...

punam

ps. plz.ignore my english grammtical and spelling mistake.













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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the update
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
wow amazing part!
poor armaan!
:(
im sad now!
cont soonn lol

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