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Nihson

@Nihson

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Awesome part dear

There was so much passion and desire.It was simply HOT

The way you described their emotions and feeling were great. The part where Armaan tried to leave giving space to her was so thoughtful. just fell all over for him.

Please cont.

Thnx for the pm

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reema

@reemz.malik

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

OMG that was HOT HOT!! 🤪

It was beautiful..I loved how u described their love and trust... :D

Keep writing moree <3

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

The PM OS was just. My god. I'm still moved!

It was so good! And sooo...descriptive? LOL.

But it was really good! And please please please do write some more! You are a lovely writer <3

Love,

Kriya <33

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mitchell

@mitchell

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

awesome yaar
i loved it when u described feeling n shyness of newly bride.
n armaan is so cute n the way he build up trust in his bride just mindblowing.
n the part isOMG so HOT .
do write more😳.
love
mitchell

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RITIKA

@ksg_ritika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

awesum part ...

loved it ...

it was actually vry intense ...

loved d way u described der feelings n fears ...

thanx 4 d pm n keep writing more ...

ritika

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RomanceChocolat

@RomanceChocolat

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Hey, That was really a nice simple sweet story.
OMG so many functions i have never known some of them LMAO :)
anyways gr8 writing yaar.

If you can, plz send me the pm part. Also let me know if u have any other ff's or OS on Arsh will be waiting

cheers
choco😃