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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

hey gr8 concept!
just luved it!
cont soon
nd do PM me when u updt

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Navneet Kaur

@angel_KSG

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

very nice concept..plz pm me..

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Mandy

@-Mandeep-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Part Two
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Riddhima get into the cab and holds Armaan's hand and says
Riddhima: I love you Armaan
Armaan: but i hate you
Riddhima: ARMAAN
Armaan: Riddhima
Riddhima: shut up ok
Armaan: i love you basket
Riddhima: i love you too
Armaan kisses Riddhima's forehead
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Armaan and Riddhima both board on the ship and find their room
Armaan: Riddhima's there's our bed
Riddhima: WHAT ARMAAN!
Armaan: fine fine there's your bed and here's mine
Riddhima: good
Armaan: what do you want to do today Mrs. Basketball Queen
Riddhima: Lets go to dinner
Armaan: Ok
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Their at dinner but then Armaan's old girlfriend sees him and comes over to the table
Priya (Armaan Old Girlfriend): Hey Armaan remember me?
Armaan: Oh no
Riddhima: Armaan don't lie who is she?
Priya: I'm his old girlfriend
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Sorry this was really short! but find out in part 3 of what Riddhima thinks

Edited by -Mandeep- - 14 years ago

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

very nice...
but it was so short try 2 make it a bit longer from next time
its so gud 2 c AR already 2gether
waiting 2 c Ridz's reaction on seeing Armaan's ex...
cont soon
thnx 4 pm

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

MAANDEEEPPP <3

WWOOOWW LOVINN' THISS FF..

HMMM CONCEPTT ISS INTERSTINNN.

YAAARR PARTSS AREE SMAALL..

WANNTT AA LONGG ONEE SOOONN.. IF YOUU CAANN..

ARWWWHH LOVE AR..

OH NOOO! AR EX-GIRLFWENNDD.

UPDAATEE SOOONN

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Mandy

@-Mandeep-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

i had to make it kind of small because i didn't have a lot of time! and i needed a stopping point but i promise the next one is going to be long!

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

hey

seems nice concept...

parts are awsome.. but are really short..

so cont with longer parts...

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Mandy

@-Mandeep-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

i will! im thinking about making part 3 right now!

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Mandy

@-Mandeep-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Part Three
Riddhima: Armaan i can believe you didn't tell me
Priya: Me and Armaan went to college together, we were the hottest couple
Armaan: Priya meet Riddhima, Riddhima meet
Riddhima: Priya yes Armaan i know her name after all she's your girlfriend
Armaan: Riddhima stop getting mad
Riddhima: You two enjoy your dinner im going to bed!
Priya: Come on Armaan lets go
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Riddhima gets mad and goes to her room and locks the door and Armaan and Priya finish dinner
Armaan: *Armaan knocks on the door because he has no key*
Armaan: Riddhima open the door
Riddhima: No
Armaan: Riddhima im serious
Riddhima: Not happening Armaan, why don't you go back to Priya
Armaan: Listen Riddhima open the door and we can talk about it
Riddhima: No, sleep outside!
Armaan: Fine i will basket
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Armaan sleeps outside and now it's morning and Riddhima wakes up
Riddhima: Nice sunny day!
Riddhima: Oh no i forgot about Armaan
Riddhima opens the door and finds Armaan sleeping on the floor, she wakes him up with a kiss
Riddhima: I'm so sorry Armaan
Armaan doesn't respond but kisses Riddhima instead
Armaan: I love you not Priya
Riddhima: I know Armaan i just got mad, i love you too
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Armaan and Riddhima both hug and go outside to play basketball
Riddhima: Haha i beat you Armaan
Armaan: So i'm still the champ
Riddhima: Oh of course you are
Armaan pulls Riddhima close to him
Riddhima: Armaan what are you doing?
Armaan: Shhh
Armaan was about to kiss Riddhima until someone came
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Who do you think came? find out in Part 4!
and one thing i will not be PMing when i update i will scrap you! it's way easier and add me as a friend so im able to scrap you

Edited by -Mandeep- - 14 years ago