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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: DiehardYMfan
hey simi y did u move to the ff section...y dint u write@the rbo 4um...watever be it its ur decision and we haaians are always wid u...and now coming to the updt...well i will lyk ur new male entry opposite khanak and shaan getting jealous and 1 more thing dont show that every other girl is falling for shaan...it reduces the sq of the ff...(its ur decision dear we r not 4cing u ...i know he s irresistible and all that...ur pick dahling)...anyways as always great ff ...luv u

@bold; there is no such plot as a jealousy track..she is a harmless entry to whom shaan said abt his wife in their 1st meet itself..

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: DiehardYMfan
hey simi y did u move to the ff section...y dint u write@the rbo 4um...watever be it its ur decision and we haaians are always wid u...and now coming to the updt...well i will lyk ur new male entry opposite khanak and shaan getting jealous and 1 more thing dont show that every other girl is falling for shaan...it reduces the sq of the ff...(its ur decision dear we r not 4cing u ...i know he s irresistible and all that...ur pick dahling)...anyways as always great ff ...luv u

Thanks Sourav..

Aage dekho hota hai kya.

btw..she didn't fall for him ..she thought that he was a nice guy.

will pm to you!!

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: simiv
Ahem remember he has her cell...she left it at home..so he kept it near her desk and was playing with her and was playing along!!😉

They are full on besharam..😉

Yes..I am thinking of some fun in the next updt.

@bold: ya..i'm such a budthal that i forgot..even i didnt feel that when she wondered who placed it near her..oh my god..little careless..
now i got it very clear..

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: mystory
hey czarina

m not back yet

but rok nahi pai apnay aap ko...feeling very sad :(

jab vapis aoongi tab baat karungi

abhi para nahi hay updates

love yaa

bi

I knw there are a lot of reasons for feeling sad and I hope its not becoz of my moving here.

Vapis aake zaroor batana.

Bye,

Yr czarina

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

@Deepali S: Thanks dear for yr comments amd that you are liking this move:D

@Shiksha: Thank you too!!

@Sonali: Thanks for reading hon!

@Sonal: When you are writing so sweetly why wudn't I like it??

@Krithika: Thanks dear!! Thanks for liking Anuradha's entry. And for quoting as well. You knw they like talking via SMSs.

@Nehal: Thanks for posting yr comments> Yes Anuradha may hv had a little crush on Shaan well who wudn't?? But he clarified his status pretty nicely and she being the kind of girl she is will not come in between. Yes she's a chef...I like that profession.:D

And yes for Khanak Shaan is the best guy she cud ever want to hv as a hubby!!:D

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Stormy Vibes...Comments :

I absolutely loved the way you wrote that small part about Khanak getting tired and losing her patience while Megha continues with her questions...LOL..

And this "Thank God for little assistants in crime" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

And how Shaan teamed up with Megs to irritate Khanak! That continues asking questions..I could SO imagine the scene!

🤣

Shaan's state was also so pitiful when Boo asked him to pacify Khanak when he herself was one of the reasons for her fumed moods *giggles*

You know the little things they do with Megs is kinda like how they will be with their own kiddos na? Its veryyy cute!! 😳

And do I have to mention about Love Dream? Amazing.⭐️

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Ground Zero A

OMG.

The start is so blush-inducing!! Maarne ka iraada hai kya? ☺️

And they were trying to fool Madz? LOL! "big wet kiss" Typically her!!Cute Mum!😳

Cutest was Shaan getting scolding for sthing that Khanak forgot..LMAOOO!! Wives are such na?!?! Hehe!!🤣

LOL @ Shaan's convo with Mrs. D'Souza!! 😆 "hadnt lost his touch"🤣

I have a good feeling abt the girl so welcoming her...for now...😃

This is one of the most adorable updates you've penned...to write romance with just one person..brilliant.I want to have a clone please...so caring!! Its almost like love drips from both of them...Loved it to the very last word!! 😃

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Ground Zero B

Okayyy. If the last update was brilliant..I am sorry am short of words to praise your writing. One single event. And to cover so much of that in one single update without boring the readers is no easy feat woman!! So so so so (raise it to power infinity) well written! In aweo f your writing, all over again.

⭐️👏⭐️

The part you wrote abt Madz and Shaan was hilarious...LOL! Madz talking to herself part..so real!! She does that na?? 🤣🤣🤣

LOL @ Shaan saying who can forget you and get away with it🤣🤣🤣

I want his office to start soon!! And a request here please...can we get a small fight...LOL...when they both come back from office? And you know how to manaofy them back again

And get him a wicked female for a secretary..LOL.

And yet again, love is like the web that weaves them so finely together, they almost skip in its feel...he is an elixir to her...she could've calmed only after receiving his call...lovely. Bless them!! 😳

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Hi Vatty!!!

You are back after a long hiatus and that too with such wonderful comments that honestly will serve to blow up my head like a baloon!!

God I love you..I wish that you are doing better.

Shaan will soon hv an office to go to..and their little tiffs and makeup sessions too!

Yup I want to give both of them readymade babies ryt now..but I think they need a little more time.

I like Mads too..she's funny and cute and really is more of a friend than MIL to Khanak.

Will wait to read the rest of yr comments!!

Am a little under the weather ryt now...hope to perk up soon! You hv definitely helped quite a but!!:D

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Ye Shaan kitna caring hain yaar Khanak ke liye ... loved the way he is around her when she needs him ... Kash

But alas its not always like this in life, if not necessary that you get love for love ...

I wanna know how Shaan gets back to his career and how Khanak supports him thru the tough phase, she is not even aware of the difficulties he is facing on that front .. I want them to be vocal of it and open up on aspects of their life together.

~Cheers,
Dish

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