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Posted: 14 years ago
Simi...finally caught up on the last 3 updates...sorry for being late...wonderful wonderful updates...the range of emotions i got to read with triple updates ..starting with Khanak trying to be a dutiful wife...to the one where she was pining for him whilst he was at work...to worrying out of her wits...perfect ending to it all i must say...can't wait to read some more x x x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved the update, intense emotional and sizzling hot!

Thanks Sona!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitasengupta

Hi Pundu,


loved it!!! this is so close to reality😆.actually it is real.want to say a lot of things but can't say more and you know why!!!

OMG!!! can't believe i'm reading a ff.feels like a chapter out of life,specially the feeling where Khanak enjoys tormenting Shaan but at the same time realising that maybe she has crossed the line.

this according to me is the best update so far and wish you many more to come.

love

Brishti

Thanks Brishti!!
Yes, a lot of these emotions I portrayed here are quite real! I wish I can write many more 'best' updates!! Thanks!
Pundu😃
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Posted: 14 years ago



czarina atti sundram

bahut khoobsurat likha aapnay

akhri ki chand panktiya...humaray hrihday kay bahut kareeb hein

aapka shukriya ki aapnay apnay komal hast kalam say aur apnay sundar hrihday say humay jannat ka saffar karwa diya

lovd it darls

yaar aissi steamy fights toh roz honi chahiye

muah...

urs

czar

Haaye huny bun czar!
Aap bhi hamaare dil ke bahut kareeb hain😉
Aapne hamaare haathon ko naazuk samjha...😳
Kash..hum bhi inke jaise fight karte toh kitna mazaa aata😉😍
Aapki khubsoorat czarina





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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanaksansar

THUD...wow what a hot update. Dil khush huwa.


This is something that most married folks can relate to. One is trying to get hold of the other and is unreachable. Kya kya khayal aate hain...

And then both seeking each other...too good. This Khanak is really fiery and fiesty. Absolutely needed for Shaan...no wonder he is completely bowled over.

Aise hi likhte rehna...We want MORE!!!!

OooHHH!!! 😃
Hamara dil bhi aapke dil ko khush karke khush hua!!!😃
Hamaari Khanak is opening up...and why not??
More to come darling ...thanks!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: candy84


Oh My God!!!! She is Khanak...apni Khanak????😲
*me rubbing my eyes*
Waah!! Biwi ho to aisi...Rang Badalti She Dragon!!🤣🤣
just a small piece of advice for Khanak (my lovely Bhabhi)-----------Nayi nayi shaadi hui hai, take it easy...dheere dheere maro Bhai ko and next time if u want to punish him then give him maida wala Upma n jadi booti kaadha kind of soup!!😆😆

"BORROWED SECRETARY"...Bad Joke in front of wives & Girlfriends !!
*WARNING for Rahul too beware of ur Biryani*😉

Burthal my Bro...i warned him before hand but nahi meri toh koi sunta hi nahi 😭😆

@Ramzz...wats the gud news??? Shaadi kar rahi ho...my Hug Queen???







Yes SKD..this is our Khanak!!! She is coming out into the open...😃
Good advise...subtle tactics!!!😆
Yes 'Borrowed' is not a very good word...strictly avoidable😆😆😆😆
Shaan needs to listen more carefully now and so does Rahul!!!😉
AS for RAmzz..Ahem..spy camera anyone????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simiv



czarina atti sundram

bahut khoobsurat likha aapnay

akhri ki chand panktiya...humaray hrihday kay bahut kareeb hein

aapka shukriya ki aapnay apnay komal hast kalam say aur apnay sundar hrihday say humay jannat ka saffar karwa diya

lovd it darls

yaar aissi steamy fights toh roz honi chahiye

muah...

urs

czar

Haaye huny bun czar!
Aap bhi hamaare dil ke bahut kareeb hain😉
Aapne hamaare haathon ko naazuk samjha...😳
Kash..hum bhi inke jaise fight karte toh kitna mazaa aata😉😍
Aapki khubsoorat czarina









aye haye mein marjawa

aapka hukkum sar mathay par

meri khoobsurat nazuk kali jaissi czarina

aapsay hum bus prem kartay hein aapsay nok zhok hum toh apnay wildest se wildest dream may bhi nahi soch saktay 😉

love yaa

muah...

urs n only urs

handsome hunk czar



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Posted: 14 years ago
Such cute daily routine ... now I know how wives tolerate their workaholic hubby ... they are so romantic at home ya!

Loved the way u built the air about the calls, him getting late, she leaving from her mom's house till the moment he came home ... their tussle was awesome ... so cute!

Khanak can make him pay as she wants but she cannot stay away from him ... Loved the way Shaan made her come to her .. Haaye!

Tu aise sab scenes likhti hain .. saans atak jaati hain ... kabhi tho main mar jaungi aise ekhade scene padhne ke baad ... u being a doc also do such things to us ... hey bhaggu .. main kya karu...

Chal waiting for the next Shanakalicious one.

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am Like this reading the ENTIRE updatee :
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☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
She has Become SOOO BOLD !!!!!
And Yes .. Anyone would be worried if the Husband Doesnt call till Midnight !!!!
ROFL @ Secretary ... Biwi Ka Calls Blocked ????
LMAOOO !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI Simi...great going...just caught up with the updates...ShaNak are settling well in their marital life...cooking for hubby dear...early morning in a saree too...kya baat hai...I for one can never do that😉...saree aur kitchen mujhe jamataa nahin...but sounds very s- - - !! loved her Convo with her mom...and very sweet of her mom she understood her daughters reason for screaming and very politely hung up...besharam Shaan making it so awkard!!!!

Shaan is so engrossed in his work that forgets the time knowing that wife is already in a off mood after being not able to get in touch earlier...badhiya hai...Khanak should have grilled him a little more...but its easy said than done...chal alls well that ends well..good to see Khanak opening up...bold and beautiful!!!

So good to see the Story take shape in the real world...loving it!!!

love, Ann,xox


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