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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: minnu345

Hey simi

at last i read u r updates

khanak was feeling very insecure... poor girl ...loved shaans response for her silly question


Am I so fickle that I am going to run behind everything and anything in a skirt when I have the most beautiful creature in the world as my own wife


a very big hug to u for this amazing words🤗


Badmaash! Goonde!! Mujhe abhi neeche utaar nahin toh naani yaad dila doongi that was hilarious buddy😆😉

the update was emotional naughty and hot
Yes, my darling! I have realized that I can't work without working on you first 😳😳😳

i loved that mole and earlobe stuff simi n u r an expert in such discoveries😉

khanaks cooking made me laugh like i realized that how newly weds struggle in their lives😉

yaar hamaare shaan tho kitchen mein bhi khanak kho romance sikhareh they bechaari she had to lie to her mom Lol😳😆😉

khanak mom was really smart she left them alone analyzing the situation😆🤣

Love u simi for a wonderful update👏

waiting for the next oneee😍


Minnu dear!!
Thanks so much for reading and liking the parts!!!
Yes, sometimes our dear Khanak demands reassurance and who can do it better than our Burthal???Embarrassed
Their relationship is full of love and passion as well..I guess that part is extremely essential!!!😃
Yes, Khanak's mom is pretty ishmart and our burthal never fails to miss any opportunity at romance!!!😃
Looks like yr lappy is working now..hope to updt tomorrow😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Smiley Sim

Awesome & lovely update

Sorry for the late comments as my unwanted guest make me so tried 😳 & than I was working on collage project.😳 So couldn't reply earlier. Waise loved the title of the part "Humsafar" 👏

Loved the start.👏 Shaan wakes up with the loud noise & thinking whats happening. Sim that sound was discrinbed amazingly.👏 Actually starting mein even I wondered ki kya hai yeh?😕 But loved the part. Shaan immediately goes in the direction of the sound. & there he saw his beautiful Wifey trying to Cook.😍 & kitchen is a mess (Oops I don't like messy kitchen ) the sound was of the falling plate.😊 Khanak is talking to her Mom😃& asking her the receipee for Upma, loved the way u explained her look.👏 She looks damn preety in this perfect Wifey role.😍

Shaan is cupke cupke listening to their convo & laughing & thinking about it. OooMmmGgg he actually visualized the picture that his wifey serching kids everywhere, & thinks that mummyji has point.😉 Loved the way khanak defends herself she says she is bad only in kitchen 😆, & puts every blame on hubby that he shifted the place of groceries. Shaan is mentally planning how to get on this with wifey.😳 Khanaks mom teasing her on the "Unhoney" ''haaye'..so cute,😊 loved khanaks reply "Kya mama aap bhi na?☺️ Palak ki beemari aapko bhi lag gayi hai kya?"

Khanak finally tells her mom that she is cooking today its shantanus first day at work 😊 & she wants everything perfect for him.👍🏼 & he needs to have a tummy full before going to work. Oh man she is so sweet.😊 Shaan gets emotional with this.😳 & Sim you are awesome I so laughed on this yaar "But be sure you don't use maida instead of sooji!" Ekkksss maida in upma'..😛

Khanak gets surprise at his presence 😲& she says Ekksss because of his sudden kiss,😉 khanak says nothing its because of "CHUHA" but shaan enters in the convo & talk to his MIL.😊 Loved their little sweet convo.👏 Shaan asking her abt he apper as a rat & she explains.😃 Loved their sweet romantic convo. Loved the roothna manana part. Shaan takes khanak out with her & she is settled on his lap. 😍(that reminds me of RBO 😭) he ask her that if she needs he will drop her 😊& khanak annoces that she has a off today. Shaan asked her what will she do alone whole day 😕& I just love her answer & the way he teased hubby😆, but yet again shaan wins.😃 Doc is so innocent,😳

Shaan enters rahuls office 😊 & reminds how his angle wished him Luck.😍 & as always blue line was Feb 👏 waise loved the update,,,,,,,Super Super Super Super Super Cute

Waiting for the next part,,,,,,jaldi dena.

Love

Pranju,

Pranju darling!!
I have got so used to seeing your long analysis and cute smileys that I don't feel like posting the next updt without them...now I can😉
Hamari Khanak is all for making hubby happy on his first day at work and kitchen jaaye bhaad mein..mom is helping her out and our BUrthal is enjoying watching his wife's mess.
What other way to win his heart all over again...????
Love U too!!!
Simi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Simi ...

Nice kitchen scene ... Khanak is cooking for him with advice from her Mom

Shaan is his mischievous self huh... cool convo after that, she has a day off and he wont be at home ... uff!

So he has joined Rahul's firm finally ... hmm ... wondering what lays ahead.

Waiting for the next one dear ...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Simi 😊
Awesome parts Midnight dessert and Humsafar superb loved both 👏


Midnight dessert was too hot very romantic everything was beautifully written ☺️

Humsafar is a really sweet part so real loved the entire kitchen scene and every bit of the part it so nice...
Khanak gets up early in morning trying to cook for Shantanu though she does not know to cook much but with the help of her mom she cooks it was hilarious but this mess happens with every girl when we try to cook for the first time 😳

Thanks for the lovely parts 😃
Love u 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dishbhan

Hey Simi ...

Nice kitchen scene ... Khanak is cooking for him with advice from her Mom

Shaan is his mischievous self huh... cool convo after that, she has a day off and he wont be at home ... uff!

So he has joined Rahul's firm finally ... hmm ... wondering what lays ahead.

Waiting for the next one dear ...

~Cheers,
Dish

Hey Thanks Dish!!
Poor Shaan..kya karein..we hv to go where life leads us...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: k.krithika

Hi Simi 😊
Awesome parts Midnight dessert and Humsafar superb loved both 👏


Midnight dessert was too hot very romantic everything was beautifully written ☺️

Humsafar is a really sweet part so real loved the entire kitchen scene and every bit of the part it so nice...
Khanak gets up early in morning trying to cook for Shantanu though she does not know to cook much but with the help of her mom she cooks it was hilarious but this mess happens with every girl when we try to cook for the first time 😳

Thanks for the lovely parts 😃
Love u 🤗

Thank you Krithika!!
Yes, Khanak is trying to be the best wifey she can be..but Shaan likes her just the way she isEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago

hmmm...!!
Simi...it seems ur popularity is increase day by day 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey simi it was so nice to read both the parts...u know i dont comment much unlike few others...but ya i would say ur hm parts were completely enchanting maybe even better than these...and now also its very romantic and realistic @the same time...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DiehardYMfan

hey simi it was so nice to read both the parts...u know i dont comment much unlike few others...but ya i would say ur hm parts were completely enchanting maybe even better than these...and now also its very romantic and realistic @the same time...

Thanks Sourya!! Yes the HM parts were more surreal..thereby almost dreamy. 😃 Thankyou for coming down and commenting!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitasengupta

Hey Simi!!!Hi Ramani!!!


what are you guyz doing?

Ramani:how did the earthquake feel?btw my husband was supposed to atttend HC on the day of the blast.but as it turned out,he didn't have to.


@sangi: i'm not from delhi..i'm from chennai..

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