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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hey...

the story looks v different...

cont soon

n pm me

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

First of all Welcome back and Congrates on new story

Wao Dear amazing concept and great start

beautiful describe the whole scenario

Waiting to see how this story will unfold

Thanks For pm

cont soon

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

kinza
it was awesome start and seems really very diff story..

loved it hun
do cont it

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Damn that was great!!😍

u hooked me up now! I cant wait for the next part😳

Pleeease update soon i kno u said updates will not be daily but plz try Im in love with dis ff rite from the starting🤣😎

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Angel...this update scared me...i had goosebumps...please dont tell me something will happen to their father...plz plz plz...

Im eager to read ahead as well as scared as to what might happen next...

The way you compared the darkness of the sky with the intuition was fab...but still yaar...its scaring me...:(

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

hey😊
congrats for new ff...
loved the begining...!!
seems like somethin might happen to her bauji...
eagerly lookin forward for the story..
continue soon😊

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

hey kinza..interesting concept..

what was with nupur and darkness? something feels very wrong to me.

so they all were one happy family, and i loved each character :)

nupur left the terrace door open, and someone entered? :O omg! thats really scary. their dad wanted them to go in, and he would handle everything. of course, he did'nt want to put them in danger. but nupur could sense something was gonna go wrong. she was intuitive powers? so cool!

PS: again magic in the title? :P

thanks for the pm

update soon