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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Wonderful update Kinza

aww...feeling really bad for Nupur 😭 she's trusting him Ya Rabb

amazingly written sis

thanks alott for the pm

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

beautifully written one kinza
thanks for the pm

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

very nice part...wow...very nice...

especially how this was used...

Lie provides an escape from the reality, forming an illusion to make you live, but illusions shatter one day and what remains behind is only the bitter truth.

continue soon...;:):):)

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

amazing update...

lovely,,,

truely you made me speechless

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Priya Iyer

@priya_1234

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Superb Superb Superb dear. 👍🏼 I read all the updates in one go.😉

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

OH GOSH...

wht will happen whn she got to know abt her family...

m scared...

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

beautifully written kinzu!👏
just read part 4 n 5
i felt bad 4 MN... both r trapped!

She had no choice but to trust.

He had no option but to lie.

des lyns say everythng!

cont soon!

luv ya!🤗

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

very nice update.

I m worried wt will happen when she will know the truth.Wil she held mayank responsible for killing her famly.She wil hate Mayank then.Poor Mayank.😭

I hope everything will b fine at the end.Mayank is falling for her.I hope she will also fall for him.

O God too many questions.😕

BTW this is the first pm of this ff I got.

I didn't know u have stared a new ff.😲

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

no no no no no... this cannot happen...

poor mayank has to go through so much to save nupur from the shock that her family is dead.

awwh poor nupur. she trusts him now. its different that she trusts him out of fear. lekin jis din usey pata chalega, what would she do? poor girl! i feel sorry for her. is there any tiny possibility that her family is not dead?

very well written kinzu... loved the last two lines... the title is way too good... whoever wrote it, it was wow!

loved the way the characters are blending. one request. nupur ke saath koi zabardasti wala scene nahi. tu hamesha ulta karti hai lekin yeh baat toh sunle... let not that captain n that joseph come near nupur. pleeej 😔

thanks a lot for the PM kinzu.. sorry fr the delayed comment. i was too disturbed to comment yesterday... 😕

God bless you hun... take care ❤️

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

I'm loving this..Mayank's rational thoughts and his sensitive mind are contradicting each other.And Nupur's trust in Mayank's words and her fear under his captivity are also contradictory.Who will win ultimately?Something I'm looking forward to know.

Cont soon

P.S:Please dont give a sad ending.It need not be a happily ever after story, but not tragic too.

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