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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Geet's mental condition is quite dangerous. I am surprised that she is able to continue her education in a state like this.

Her mother does not seem to be completely delusional. It is more of augmented reality to me, where the additional layer makes the facts more pronounced and unacceptable.

The bitterness Geet was radiating is seriously disturbing. Her dreams are perhaps a parallel world which are keeping her going what we call as "completely insane". Or are they pushing her into it? I don't know.

I like the way the story is shaping up.

Oh yes, and I was surprised when Geet asked Anjali to come along as support. Why is it so...out of place? Or is it just my misjudgment?

Nice read :)

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Loved it, I'am little confused is there some evil power present in geet's room as she felt when she saw her image moving after few seconds after she moved from the mirror. continue soon.

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aanyakunat

@aanyakunat

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Sati wondered if every human was insane and those who were cloaking their insanity were called sane. - i wonder the same thing actually... 🤔

another exciting part... 👏

and sookie thanks to u i have started with the sandman... finished with the first 2 volumes... took me some time to get used to it... but i must say i'm hooked now... neil gaiman seems to have quite abstract ideas... or maybe they just sound abstract to me...

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

"An idea is powerful as far as one believes in it unconditionally in its outcome. If the idea is merely subjected to an introductory round of beliefs and is then further diluted by application of rationality and realistic values then it loses its potency; it ends up being bunch of words and something of a ' 'could-have-been-amazing'."

I read that, and was reminded of D's post in REEL..

"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always preserves." -- 1 Corinthians 13:4-7

To explain, define, measure and bind in parameters, things that are so simple and whole unto themselves..

and then such ideas(as these updates), just exhilarate , like I have an entire carpet of green to run on , with wings of blue :D

pleasure.

Edited by ninand - 13 years ago

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

arghh forums is not letting me press the like button :(

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

update was interesting Sookie...is Geet suffering from same mental state as her mother...is it all her imagination or real if real then what her mother was indicating...

thanx for pm

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-Artemis-

@-Artemis-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Sati is an intriguing choice of name.

Did you open a can of worms or did Geet?

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sia221

@sia221

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Hey awesome update..
Geet herself n her life both r so complicated..
Is geet a psycho?? But I m loving this story.. Its kind of spooky.. Gives me chills as I read it...

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Your writing is addictive...did u know that? Another brilliant story by you...read the first 5 chapters in a row and now am hungry for the next one. Your writing is brilliant, filled with so many emotions...intrigue, sadness, mystery, insanity, curiosity, excitement, fear...all is there. The tone of your books is totally out of the world (i know i've written books rather than updates/FFs but really, for me this is no less. I've read When Human Voices Wake Us and Translucence as well...just started with Omerta...they way you handle all the characters, the way you build the plot, they all really seem like books). Point is, you really need to get your writings to a publisher!!!

P.S. Please add me to your PM list...