MG[FF]Maan Proposes Geet Disposes[Thread1/Note149] - Page 85

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Amazing...
Loved it...
So this means that Maan likes Geet...
Wow...

5 years difference...so what ...??
This is not too much...Maan should be fine with it...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.



Originally posted by: prerna1

nice part
loved maan thinking
5 year gap is not so big age gap especially 20 years ago
what will be maan reaction to geet's answer
plz continue soon


Well Maan has his own line of thinking. What to do?😆

Thanks a lot for liking this :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: udeshi91

awesome update loved it wow maaneet got engaged 😳maan didn't stop his starring session 😆 and geet didn't once look at him 😲maan is a true gentleman 😊really loved when he agreed to mohinder ji's request 👏 he is one in a million 😊maan was impatient to talk with geet 😳 loved it it was so nice when ask about her opinion 😳 geet is so lucky to have him in her lifeeagerly waiting for next part thanks for the pm and please continue asap 😊


Thank you so much for the appreciation!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Whoa - nothing gets attention more than a lack of it on the opposite end.

Lolz...how true!!😆


I'm begining to get super duper intrigued, bebe!! Jazzz am so glad ur updating quickly. Ab toh I'm going mad.
🤣🤣

SO does it mean that Maan and Geet will have a long courtship before they get married!??
Keep reading😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comments - i was off on vacation for 3 weeks.

I totally love your story - may I repeat again that I am in love with your writing style, your language flow, punjabi convos and strong minded characters.have not yet been through a story which has so many strong characters and each of them hold on to their own.

Bravo jazzy... Maan and Geet are what you call - cute 😆 So Maan was staring at her and felt attraction...how is the munda going to last for about 3 more years? I am sure you are going to find a way out.

BTW, wasnt the update supposed to be yesterday night? Exactly where have you vanished😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Jazz,

Together them was wonderful.

Same thing looks different to everyone or mostly to everyone even if the onlooker is standing at the same place because we have different POVs & personal beliefs. Same thing happened to Maan; he might have understood the poetry already but with it's new implication, meanings got deeper for him.

Yes...until and unless you undergo a feeling you cannot understand why it is described in a certain way.

The way Mohinderlal introduced Geet was amiable with hope that his lovely daughter will receive if not more than at least the equal love to him.

Aaha'''Maan was busy staring at Geet in hopes of interpreting Geet's thoughts with risk of being caught & get teased by his Jijaji 😆. Still Geet did not look at him, maybe because she knows her eyes speak & she did not wish to reveal her problem & disrespect her father at critical time like this or she did not wish to see arrogant, Saru man who (according to her assumption) rejected her sweet sisters.

Nandini & Daman are amazing duo who parted from their son because it's one of the hardest things to do even though they know he will be in best hands.

True...its just not easy. Speaks volumes of how much of a daughter she is to her father.

Maan's jealousy at Geet looking at his father made me laugh but his support for Geet raised his respect level even more if possible from his previous acts.

SSK was eager to bring her bahu home ASAP but Maan's words erected the hindrance in front of all her ideas but officially they were engaged to her contentment (& my happiness if that's o.k. for an alliance in 80s when I was not even born😆).

Lol...the woman surely wants to see her son married desperately😆

Maan was concerned for Geet's free consent but seems that she found it hard to believe in his words when apparently his actions were contradictory.

Yes, she is still in conflict.

Enjoy ur time with ur father & give us more wonderful updates after that.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshithaaa

nice update...

both r getting married after completion of geet's education...
liked the way maan asking geet opinion


Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

no worries ... have fun n enjoy with ur dad ...

updates can wait ...


Thank you...glad you enjoyed the update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Speechless

Her father introduced her as She is my pride My GEET Maan was staring her all the while and wanted her to look at him once Lucky Nandani-Daman's son means their grandchild "She would look at my father but not at me."

Maan's reply to Mohinder lal's request "Only after she honors your wishes and fulfill her duty as a daughter, I will take her to my home as my wife."
savitri is more impatient than Maan to bring Geet Home Maan was concerned about GEET's opinion and if she is fine with all this marriage stuff



Thank you for the appreciation :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
wow Maan approved but Geet is not satisfied...
but liked Maan's views...
the last scene somewhat confused me...
cont soon dear and thanks for the pm...


Thank you...hope the next part clears the confusion :)

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

Oye hoye rishta toh ho gaya pakka and loved it wen maan understood dat she needs tym do update soon


Thank you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sangs-

Shikha.. are you always online or do you have a supernatural power to know that Jazz has updated.. 😡 Why Why are you first everytime 😈
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Wow.. that was awesome Jazz... Maan staring and Geet didnt not even look at him.. poor guy..😆
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shocked to read that Lucky is Nandini and Daman's son. Respect her a lot..this takes a immense power to give her child to her parents..

Loved the way Mohinderji , introduced Geet, as his pride. Maan on the other hand, proved that he is a perfect gentleman. Not many would want to make the girls study even after marriage in those times..Kudos to that.

Last me Geet ka reaction, 😆 bichari... Update soon..😛
Bichari Geet...ya fir bechara Maan🤣

Thanks a lot sakhi🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jimzi2716

So Maan's staring session starts from the very first meeting...😆


He never wanted to get involved in anything like this but he did...see thats the reason people say take a chance.😉..how can u decide something is right or wrong till u get to see it or experienced it...😳 Loved every bit of it Jazz...when story is beautiful like Geet words r not enough to praise it...😊Geet's reaction is justified as she hasn't measure the depth of Maan's char yet..once she knows love story will begins in true sense...😳

Nandini & Daman...👏Its not easy to give their own son to someone...whatever the reason is I absolutely respect them more..😊

Edit:Updated my comment on page 103 too😳


Yup...never knock it till you try it😆

Thanks a lot sakhi...glad you love these characters so much🤗🤗

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