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Nisha

@nisha1984

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Awesome update 👏👏👏

Ashna's convo with Shekhar was awesome... She told him not to come in any how and Shekhar and Rishab disagreement was hilarious... Poor shekhar!!! Bichara Adil se jooth nahi bolna chahta par karna padta hai...

Adi and Ashna conversation was awesome and intense... I am sure ab Ashna adil ko pareshan karna tab tak nahi chodegi jab tak wo use sare jawab nahi de deta...

I will love to see Adil's tactics to escape from Ashna's questions...

update soon...

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

superb update sumi...

Loved it wen aashna questions Adil directly...

He needed this...

Also loved the convo between shekhar n rishabh...

waiting for more

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Hi Sumi

u have written a brilliant part👏👏 loved the confrontations here ..be it Rishabh Skhekar or Adil Ashna..⭐️⭐️

Ashna is really desperate for Adil's company and he is avoiding her like anything but this time Ashna thought a little ahead of him and warned Shekhar so he can make any excuse to avoid coming to help her.😆😆😆

Adil is forced to go there but this time she was in genuine problem.he helped her there but refused to have lunch with her.Poor Ashna was forced to play the role of spy to check upon her hubby😉😆😆

Atleast she was happy to know that Adil was speaking the truth but it was clear to her that Adil is indeed avoiding her company.

Shekhar tried to clear the air between Rishabh and Adil..he spoke on Adil's behalf coz he wont ever explain his actions to anyone.people can thing watever about him but he doesn't justify himself.

Rishabh is not so bad..he is littel in awe with his big brother.Shekhar tried to solve his misconception abt Adil..I hope he was succeessful this time.

Ashna really scared Adil with her dissappearnce act.he was really worried over her whereabouts.

Adil was really angry to see her but Ashna was glad to see him there. it means that he cares for her and this was important for her.

She asked few questions and Adil really tried hard to avoid answering them.but his unspoken words were saying more than his spoken words.Ashna was determined to get her answers this time and she didn't let Adil go so easlily.It was difficult for Adil to control his emotions this time.He was loosing control fast infront of Ashna.

Adil was able to get her back home without answering her doubts but his silence was speaking volumes. Ashna is sure that he cares for her in his own way..😊

but Adil can't run forever from Ashna..he has to answer her someday and that will b the turning point of this story..😃😃

Pls continue soon Sumi

Bye

Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago

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Sugh...

@Innocent_eyes

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Hey sumi...u're back and again with a longerrr update 😊 😊😊..n yes dont worry i didnt take a nap during reading an update...wo kia hai na neend srf course book study krnai k time ati hai 😛😛😛..

Now coming to part...Adil felt this time ashna again calling him for a DATE but she got a genuine problem..n the way ashna said main bhi dekhti hun WO kaisai nahi ata was so good...us nai achai sai shehkar ko bta diya k u're not welcome here😆

Nice convo between Shehkar n rishab...sehkar is really a true friend of adil...😊😊😊...rishab bhi to some pints apni jaga theek hai...but adil has to taken all the responsibilities wrna wo aj itnai aram sai nhai hta...

Now coming to the post good part of the update...tne coversation b/w adil and ashna...superb dear..👏...start main to luv the concern when adil search her and then when they came face to face...ashna jee nai jo bouncers phenkna shru kiyai to bus adil ki wicket gira k hi chori us ko chup hna hi para...but adil being adilashna ko bhi sath pavillion(house) lai k gya😆 n sab sai acha to last question tha😆😆😆...waisai must say adil ki company nai ashna ko intelligent bna diya hai 😆😆😆...kafi achai questions kiyai adil sai😆😆😆...

now i've talked too much...

waiting for a next update...cont soon

Take care

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

ha ha ha...AB ne record tod diya...itna bada update...aur toh aur...adil bhi iss me ullu bana haipahle Shekhar aur Rishabh ke hatho phir Ashna ke hatho...maza aa gaya je...bada maza aa gaya...😆

abhi properly update par aate hain...aur Sumi tum bhi ready ho jayo...fulltoo pakkne ke liye...kyoun ke bina pakaye main toh tumhe chodwali hun nahi...!!! tumhari wajah se mujhe aaj galiya sunn ne ko mili thi yaar...😆

actually jaise hi maine dekha tum ne UD kiya hai...main padhne baith gayi... mujhe laga tha ki ud asusal length ka hoga...par yeh thoda bada nikla...n mamma mujhe baar baar lunch ke liye bula rahi thi...n main uss waqt Adil ko kaise Ashna interogate karr rahi thi wo padhne me busy thi...!!! mamma se galiyan suni par phir bhi...main pura update padh kar hi uthi...he he he...mere (A)dil ka sawal hai yaar...😆

Fab...Fab...Fab...pura camera Ashna par tika hua tha...!!! Ashna...bandhook leke khadi thi...adil ke samne...bichara na bol pa raha tha na samajh pa raha tha...ha ha ha...!!! Ashna...mera support hai tumhe...aage badho aur Adil ka zuban khulwayo...koi bhi tarika ho...kya farq paddta hai...kamm se kamm kuch toh achha bolega...😆

arey yaar...yeh adil bhi na...Ashna ki koi bhi baat seriously leta nahi hai...!!! usse help chahiye aur janab kya kya sawal karr rahe hain...aur agar uss ne Adil ko bulaya...toh chala jata na...!!! khair...iss me toh Shekhar n Rishabh ne kafi help karr di...!!! bichara Shekhar na Ashna ko mana karr pa raha tha aur na hi Adil ko jhuth bol pa raha tha...😆

kya farq padta hai...jeet to ashna ki hi hui na...!!! aur adil ko Ashna ke sath lunch na karrwa ke tum ne badhiya kaam kiya hai...!!! ashna ka bhi na sahi me achhe time par dimag chala...n kya solid planning banayi uss ne...😆

wo scene maza aa gaya padhne me...Adil ki bolti bandh kar di Ashna ne...!!! uss adil ki jiss ke samne kisi ki zuban nahi khulti...wo kuch pal ke liye chup ho gaya...!!! uss ke paas toh jaise koi jawab hi nahi tha...!!! Ashna sawal puchti gayi...aur adil bass gussa ho raha tha...par kis par...khud par ya Ashna par...😆

aur Ashna ka use chod karr janewali baat mast thi...!!! aisa laga jaise nishana sahi jagah par laga ho...!!! aur uss ke dad ke property wali baat bhi...!!! ha ha ha...Adil ke sath reh kar Ashna smart bann gayi...aur apne smartness ka pehla example uss ne adil ko hi dikhaya...😆

phir wo scene bhi mast tha jab adil ne ashna ko zabardasti car me bithya...aur ashna ne kaha...'mera ek aur sawal baki reh gaya'...main seriously hass rahi thi...ha ha ha...bichara Adil abhi tak ek bhi sawal ka jawab diya nahi hai... upar se Ashna ka ek aur sawal...aur wo sawal bhi kya sawal tha...bichare ko break lagani padd gayi...ha ha ha😆

aur iss sawal par adil ka reaction...maza aaya...!!! bichara Adil...is update me uss par Ashna bhari padd rahi thi...par mujhe maza aa raha tha seriously...😆

bass...Ashna ne jo kaha wohi kare...roz yehi sawal pooche aur Adil ko itna irritate kare ki janab...gusse me aa kar kuch toh bole...😆

Adil ne do Security guards laga diye...par Ashna kuch naya karegi...ha ha ha...!!! maza aayega...!!! waise bhi adil ne use uss k sawal ka jawab toh nahi diya...par Ashna ko toh uss ka jawab mill hi gaya hai na...😛

arey haan...shekhar n Rishabh ke scene ke bare me bolna bhul gayi...!!! badhiya tha ek damm...shekhar ne Adil ko hamesha se samjha hi nahi...bal ki wo kya hai uss ne sab ko samjhaya bhi hai...dost ho to aisa...!!! aur raha rishabh ki baat toh...wo bura nahi hai...bass use thoda se spl classes ki jarurat hai...!!! jaisa ek class Ashna de chuki hai...aur ek class Shekhar bhi de chuka hai...!!! hope ki ek jaldi ki use sare syllabus samajh me aa jaye...😛

abhi mujhe next part jaldi chahiye...aur khabardaar jo tum 2 weeks ke liye gayab hui toh...mujhe tum janti nahi...phir se gana gane lagungi😆...aur jab tum wapas aayogi toh yeh thread 150 pages tak pahunch gaya hoga...aur tumhe toh pata hi hai...mujhe support kaarnewale yahan baht hain😆...isi liye mujh se panga matt lo...aur jald se jald update likhna start karo...😃

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

part 25
hey sweety...
awesome part...
chalo Ashna started to question Adil ab ye kahan bhagega aur kab tak...
good going Ashna...
i now Ashna will not keep quiet like u said she will try new new methods and Adil in the frustration will confess something...
OMG Rishabh and Shekhar's bickering and cribbing was so funny...
at least Shekar told Rishabh the hard and harsh truth...
that guy needs some harsh reality check...
cont soon dear...

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Hey Sumi

This was the best part of this story till date. I really liked the way Ashna confronted Adil. Its really required to break his defenses and get something out of it. I am also glad that you understand, unlike most writers that one 20 minute conversation is not enough to heal wounds which have been stinging since years.

Adil is a loner basically. It is extremely hard to change that. But the fact is that he needs to understand that by being this way, he is not being great. Instead he is hurting his loved ones who end up feeling that they are not worth his affection. At some point, Rishabh is right though his perspective is wrong. He could not understand the reason behind Adil's changed behaviour but he evaluated the effects quite accurately. Being an over matured brother who was just perfect while he should have been a friend did more damage to his relationship with his brother. Good that Shekhar tried to clear things up, perhaps some combined effort from both Ashna and Rishabh will finally help him recover.

Again, good work.

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Hi Sumi...

Great,...finally tumne update kar dia aur maine padh bhi lia... siri ko achha bday gift mil gaya... I was thinking ki uske bday pe koi OS nahi hai...

Coming to the part... it was awesome...😃

And yes...lengthy as well... but hum to humesha lengthy updates ke liye ready hain...

Yes...this part did have very important conversations... par pata hai kya...jaruri bhi tha...koi to rishav ko sunaye...aur iss bahane hume kuch to hints mile...par pata nahi kya hints mile aur kya nahi...par maza aya padh ke...

Aur fir Ashna ke sawal... mai to wo pura convo padhke has rahi thi... kya logic lagaye hain uss ladki ne... aur fir kaise bolti hai...secondary baton pe dhyan mat do...😆😆😆well... the determination in her eyes came from her LOVE...(For Adil's knowledge)...😆 But the best question was her last one...whether he has someone in her life or not... Adil ko break lagana hi pada... I am wishing Ashna fir se kuch aur kare...😆

And I can perfectly understand your situation of being lazy...even m incredibly lazy now a days... kuch bhi nahi karti... sone aur cls karne ke alawa...😆

Aur tum kitni achhi ho pata hai hume... isliye skip karke padhne ka hint apne note me likha hai jo ki part ke baad hai... jab tak koi note padhega tab tak wo pura part padh chuka hoga...WITHOUT SKIPPING...😆

Anyways... update soon...

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Guglu

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

@Priya: Tera comment padh ke lag raha tha ki jo mujhe kehna tha wo tune keh diya...isliye maine chotu sa comment kiya hai...😆... KAsh 3-4 like button hote to mai unhe iss update par aur tere comment pe luta deti...😆