MG:FF:The 'Captured' Life~~Thread 1~~ - Page 5

nice start!
i really liked it
cont soon
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congrats for ur new ff...nice start...will be w8ing for ur next update..

Hey guys ,I'm quite upset today as my plans of watcing a play with my frnds got cancelled i really wanted to watch that play !! but my bad luck now i'll not be able to watch it 😭😭 anyways ..i'm updating the second part hope u'll lke it 😊😊

He didn't delete the pic , the pic actually didn't bother him much ..he continued his drive nd after some time he went to a small office , the office was was too

small , they were yellow patches all over the wall ,the door was located at such small height that anyone above 5 feet have to bend their hends to go inside the

room , an elderly lady was sittng on the chair and was reading a file with round spectacls and tied hair , she looked like an archetypal ' Good and sweet woman'.
She looked at him and smiled at him in a very pleasent manner ' Oh , hello Maan beta How are you '
"I'm fyne ma'am nd how are you and i'm glad you still remeber me"
"oh i'm fyn and...i'm not too old to forget such a person like you , and that too it's not been so long that we met last time'
Maan smiled .

this town
Maan smiled "Hello , I'm maan , he extended his hand towards hers ,
she shook hands with him without any smile , or even a fake smile .
the elderly lady told maan to take rest and after that geet would help him in explorin the town , but maan was so excited to click pictures that he was ready to

see the nearby places . Geet stood there hearing all their conversation , maya aunty requested her before to help maan in his work and Geet accepted it as she

cannot ignore her aunty's request .

They both walked in the fields

goin' to help him in future.
"So , What do u do geet??

her stern face , her stiffness , everything was making all the things and his mood dull , he tried to distract himself , he took out his camera and captured some of

the scenes , while geet went on walking , while clicking the pics he slipped a bit and was about to fall , but he balanced himself
"Oh...This pit , he looked down at the pit"
geet saw him in a very rude manner , Maan couldn't understand the reason behind those looks
"excuse me Mr. Maan we came here to see the place and not to click pics , once you see this place you can come here every day and night and you can keep

clicking your pics , so please if you can do a favour please concentrate on the surroundings so that i don't have to waste my time.
Maan was shocked , she didn't even speak a word during their walk but when she spoke she spoke so rudely , Maan didn't like it , but still he didn't say a

word and moved on keeping his camera in the bag.
While walking his bag got struck in between some plants and as they were wet his bag became dirty ,
"Oh, NO..all my necessary items were in this bag and it got wet
oh, no can u take me to a water tap and something like that
"Oh...So you wanna clean your bag b'coz right now your costly bag got dirty due to these these plants right..!!
"wat??"
"oh..come on Mr, Maan i'll not take this anymore , will you please stop being a "oh-no this is dirty" man
first you click the pictures of all these trees like they are some alien species , and like you are new to these trees , you never saw them , and you were getting so

restless to click the pics nd now all this "my bag got dirty" behaviour..!!
Maan was hell shocked to hear all these things , he was totally annoyed ,first her cold behaviour , no response to his questions and now this !!!
"Look Ms. Geet , what is your problem , this bag had all my essential items so i was a bit worried about this bag , and you know what , i have travelled to many

places where you can't even stand for a moment. i hv visited those people and places which you might term as scary and dirty .I'm very much used to

accomodate myself in any kind of surroundings and This place is indeed beatiful for me , nd i started clicking pics b'coz your behaviour was making me dull

,and now you are shouting on me ,

if you are not intrested pls leave...!!!

wanted to...he took a deep breathe, he moved on , he knew that after all these she would definetely move away leaving him alone .
But he was wrong she still walked with him "wat..??"

she was still the same , her stern and expressionless face , not a bit more rude not a bit soft..!! As his words didn't bother her at all..!!
He was confused with her behaviour ,

"she is weird".

'u can observe this place , u can see the whole town from here , said geet still in her expressionless face and voice
saying this she sat on the rock lookin at the sky, sunrays were falling on her face, breeze was gently blowing , she looked at her side and smiled a bit ,

enjoying the nature , the photographer inside him wanted to click a pic , but the person inside him didn't even wanted to look at her, her only felt her ugliness , her rude behaviour, but what he was now seeing was so pure and beautiful ..and the person inside him

won he didn't click the picture and managed to look away from her but one question surely came into his mind
"What is she?"

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Part 3- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1770841/mg-ff-the-captured-life-thread-1?pn=15

Hey dear...
Awesome part...

Oww...Geet was behaving very rudely...
Mystery han...

Hope we come to know about this mystery soon.

Updt soon.

geet is behaving rudely

some mystery is their in geet's behavior
awesome update continue soon

oh dear...she is a real enigma