MG:FF:The 'Captured' Life~~Thread 1~~ - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
just caught up with ur ff!:)
different concept!
awesome parts!
geet must have a horrible past!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pms!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey gr8 story it is

and last update was superb yaa..

i wonder wot's geet past that made her like this..



anyway.. continue soon

and plzzz add me to the pm list... 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting...do add me yr pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey frnds , thnx a lot for all your wonderful comments 😃😃, sorry for the delay , this is part 5 ..i hope u'll like it😃 and plsss do comment😊
PART 5
There was silence all over , she was looking lost , trying to find something on the empty roads , He looked at her while driving ...he didn't know anything but he

felt her pain , he wanted to console her but didn't know if they would make her more sad or a bit happy , he remained silent...he drove and stopped the jeep at

one place
"Chale ??
"kaha??"she asked
he signalled her to get down and she got down he went near the fields where few small houses or huts were located...he went near them all of them looked at

maan and geet in a strange manner
Maan went near them and seeked permission to click a pic , they all got so excited but a bit confused
"Par saab , hum tayaar to hue nahi hai abhi ,poto acchi aayigi na!!"
Maan smiled "Haan bilkul , mjhe to sirf aapki ek muskurahat chahiye"


Maan clicked some pics of the fields and the workers, they were more than happy..!!
they all called their families ,their wives and chidren..all came running to pose for the pic..the mothers combed the hair of the children in a hurry , all were so

excited , Maan clicked their pictures and talked to them about their daily activities ,The all carried a huge smile all over the conversation , They were so excited , children stared at maan's camera
Maan was capturing the beauty all around and then he noticed that a small boy was pulling his shirt very with his little hands , When maan looked

at him , he smiled innocently and signalled maan to bend down , the little boy then whispered bhaiyya meri bhi ek photo khincho no , wo hero waali..pleaje..
Maan smiled at him " Are to der kis baat ki , waha khade ho jao , main tumhari ek dum dhinchak photos khinchta hun, theek hai
he smiled broadly listening to these words...
Geet who was watching these all throught smiled sweetly at the little boy's sweet gesture

she looked at him lovingly, she went near him and kissed his cheek

"mere saath bhi ek photo , theek hai" she said looking at the small boy
the boy nodded with an exciting face ...Maan smiled

...THis is what he wanted , Her smile
He clicked her pics with the little boy and the other women , she was enjoing each and every moment , her smile itself made him smile
he unknowingly wished for her beautiful and innocent smile...
He kept looking at her
she saw him looking at her , she turned her face , Maan got a bit embaressed...
Some time passed away and Maan talked to all of them she heard their conversation , she listened to every thing very keenly
They left after some time , She sat in the jeep , She looked at him while he was talking to one of the farmers , He knew that she was looking at him , He looked at

her from the corner of his eyes ,...she was still looking at him with a smile on her face , that smile itself made him look into her eyes directly , she suddenly

changed the direction of her face, she turned her face to the other side...He smilde inside and sat in the jeep
They finally reached . Geet got down and started walking inside , Maan took his camera and was keeping it in his bag , he then just saw geet was still

standing there...
"Thank you "...

saying these beautiful words she smiled whole-heartedly...

He knew she wanted to speak more , he knew that she was thinking about something , He knew that there was a beautiful thought behind her innocent smile...He

knew it , but couldn't do anything..
Now between them were some...'Silent Thoughts' that were beautiful

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Part 6- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1770841/mg-ff-the-captured-life-thread-1?pn=30

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
sooo sweet n lovely part
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update... thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...i loved it...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...👏
Maan-geet-boy scene cute..⭐️
Atlast she similed whole heartdly..😊
Continue soon..Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...👏
I loved Maan-Geet & the boy's convo...sooo cute..⭐️
Continue soon..Eagerly waiting for the next part to read😛

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