Core of My Existence#2(AR Story]Part 25 Page 132 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Boo you Shru! You can't beat me 🤣 😎


I'll edit this later, have to go right now! But yay today was fun! And thank you for that mention over there! I'm so glad I met you and came across COME 😳

xoxo
Aanya


Sorry Shru, what can I do? IF loves me 🤣


Screw you Aanya. 😡 Hmph.

And IF may love you, I don't. *Arrogant face*.

And yes, Aku, thank you for the special mention, we love you too, and don't worry, we shall continue spamming for as long as we live. That's our duty. *Proud face*

I love COME! I'll edit my comment later, I have to study now, and if you guys want an update tonight, I really will have to rush! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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comment edited plz read😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Congrats Ankita !! *hugs*
Way to go girl
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
hey congrats 4 new thread
update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay second thread :D
Congratulations anku :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Congratulations on your new thread! I hope you get many more threads :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS!!

Ankuuu <33 I am SO proud of you 😳 you made it to your 2nd THREAD! You have come a long way. I really LOVE this FF and it's one of my favs. You writing style is just really nice. And the way you portray the emotions and the way you describe things, it's just amazing. You really know how to touch somebody's heart with this FF and your use of writing 😳 well idk about everyone else 🤔 but I know you touched my heart 🤣 anyway, You put a great amount of thought and effort into this FF. Every part you write, you just can't get enough. You feel like you just want to read more. You get really addicted to that part considering the fact that you go so much in depth that the reader just doesn't want to end it. And I love that about your FF. Keep writing like this and you will get to your 3rd thread in no time :) unless you wanna end your FF in this thread :| WHICH YOU WOULD NOT DO CAUSE I WOULD NOT LET THAT HAPPEN /fine. This FF is really close to me. And I love the concept of it. It is really unique. Only a person with a creative dimaag would think of that :$ tehe. You are really talented and creative, love. I hope you don't end this FF otherwise i'll be very naraz.

I LOVE YOU! <33
Edited by NomaLuvsKSG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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If you weren't such a sweetheart, I'd be really angry with you right now! Thread two, aur voh bhi mere bina? :O HAWWW!

NONETHELESS, my lovely :$ You've made it so far! I'm so extremely proud of you! Mash'Allah. Your writing is incredibly wonderful. You've improved tremendously from when you started out the FF, until now. I'm so proud of you, Ankeeeta! Your writing is a treat to read, and I love the way you plan things for the story. There's never a moment where I'm sitting in doubt about what's happening, and why a certain problem is standing out more than another. You've always maintained a very good reputation of solving your problems with time, and ease. there's always logic and reasoning behind your motives in regards to this FF, and I love knowing that there's something exciting or cute about to come! You always have be on the edge of the seat with Armaan and Ridhima's arguments. I love how in-depth you go with each and every one of them, along with the fact that you resolve them in a very mature and sophisticated manner!

ANYWAYS, I'll keep writing on and on about how much I admire your writing, before I even get to the point - CONGRATULATIONS! You're on thread two, babe! I'm so very proud of you :$ It's like my little baby is growing up! Ehehe :) I'm so glad that you started writing. You're a beautiful writer, Ankeeeta! I love you :)

Keep up the absolutely incredible work, and continue being amazing! I can't wait to read more ;) And also - update soon, please! I'm dying to know what happens next. GOOD LUCK <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG YOU CUTIE! I JUST READ THIS!

I have to THANK and credit one person who has always been by my side to help me, correct me and suggest the perfect ideas and story for 'COME' and that person is my special friend Phatty.
I love you so much Phatty to be so encouraging and so helpful, I really wouldn't have managed it without you at all. 🤗


I LOVE YOU ANKEETA! FOREVER AND ALWAYS, BB! I WILL ALWAYS BE THERE FOR YOU WHENEVER YOU NEED ME :$ I promise, love! I'm so honoured to have been mentioned by you! AWW. I feel so special right now :$ AHH. You're so sweet and amazing, omfg. I love you! keep being as amazing, and I promise that you won't even need anymore encouragement! In fact, I'll be coming to you for encouragement, ahhh! I love you :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FINALLY EDITED.

ANKU Congratulationsss! You finally reached the Second Thread YAYYY :D I'm So So SO SO SO Happy <3 You deserve this baby <3 You already know that your story is a Block-o-Buster ;) Lovvee <3 so here goes my Three due RES :P

Part 16 : I loved how you wrote it !! Riddhima's pain was So Clearly depicted :( And I Love how Armaan showed her attitude :) His tricks alwayss WORK! GO My bwoy :P The best thing that I like about your writing style is that you describe each of their emotion SO WELL. I'm envious,jaa :P No seriously. You write beautifully. You can make one Cry, Laugh and Blush...But Stick to the Reality Check of your Story. Simply Beautiful. <3 I LOVED ADORED everything you can say, How Muskaan is there for both of them. I've seriously fallen in love with Muski after you've depicted her character !!

Thank God You showed the Gupta House. Was practically dying to see what was going on. Aah,Shashank HAS to be Shashank,hai na? Its like he can't UNDERSTAND ANYTHING! Is he pretty blind! I liked the fact, however, that Padma wanted to be on AR's side, but just couldn't go because of Shanky :( Why does he hate Armaan so Much :( Aww the next part was L.O.V.E. <3 How well he understands her !! She was so cute, tee-hee, eating like a cute chor in the kitchen:) I LOVE Riddhima in this FF :)

Ofcourse, whenever they fight it just breaks my heart. Its seriously heart-breaking :( But his coldness was necesaary, I guess, to put some sense into her khali dimaag :P This next part was beautiful, brought out everything Armaan felt. Kudos!

Armaan walked in the room after a while, and saw her asleep with a frown on her face. He assumed she had slept off thinking about all that was happening; all that he had intended to tell her through the few words he had spoken to her in the day. He felt extremely sorry for putting her through this. For talking in the manner he had with her, and for behaving so coldly with her. He just wanted to break through her, make her understand his point of view. Make her understand, that how her emotions were taking over her common sense, how she was turning into a Riddhima he didn't even know. Someone as level headed and confident as her, was actually trying to get comfortable in the discomfort she was in. She couldn't let her fears take over her life. He wanted her to be the same Riddhima he had fallen for, and to not just be Mrs Mallik, someone who was only dependent on him for her life. He wanted her to stand on her own feet, literally and otherwise. He lay down next to her, and looked at her sleep. He had an urge to caress her head, kiss her lovingly, but he stopped himself. But he couldn't help but put his hand in hers, before he slept off, dreaming of a better future for the two.

I loved how he could forget everything and take care of her. How adorable he is, His love is hard to hide :) I loved how you depicted it. beautiful. Thats the magic of AR. Will make you smile through your tears. Made me do the same. As I always say Anku, you define AR's love. You potray it so beautifully,its hard for someone to NOT fall for Core of my Existence!

And also I adore how its Our Armaan you're writing about. I mean, he'll do anything but not let any harm come to his basket <3 I Love Armaan Mallik. He knows that their Love can win. That is, I repeat, the magic of AR <3 Loved the part !!

Part 17 : I seriously Do NOT have words for this. It left me STUNNED, the way you potrayed everything. Seriously, you should be giving me words to say. The confession was beautiful and I LOVED how they both spoke their heart out. How they had been suffering, both of them, yet both couldn't bear to live without each other. This is not an excuse, Anku...I swear. Sometimes you stun me too much.

Aww, the bit after the confession was Real AR. Bickering, Smiling, Blushing, Loving. I miss my DMG :( But I Love C.O.M.E !! Seriously :) This part Left me like...Without words. I mean it. HOW? Seriously, HOW DO YOU DO IT EVERYTIME! I'm Really Surprised,Shocked,Stunned. I Love You, Anku.

Riddhima looked at him, her tears dried up, eyes swollen. She looked into his eyes and got lost in them, she could see the amount of trust and faith they had in them. What had he ever asked from her? It was another case that he never needed to, because they both always understood the others needs even before expressing them. But he had always been selfless, and for the first time he had asked for something with so much authority, and even that was only for her. She couldn't deny him anything, and this was his right. Why had she bothered asking him to wait for her to take any kind of decision. They both had every right to take a stand for the other, especially when it was regarding the others happiness. She thought about all that she had said to him in the last few days, and she knew he had understood each and every emotion behind it. But WHY did she ever think it was an easy decision for him to take and then follow. She may not have meant it , but she had almost made him feel like he was not capable of leading her to the right way. And he was right all along after all. She had thought about herself and her fears, and amidst all the turmoil, she had overlooked the fact that he lived with all those fears too. If she feared losing him, she didn't know why she ever did, but was he not human? He obviously had his insecurities too. It was going to be as hard if not harder for him to stay without her. She knew how much he needed her, after all he was the only one who made her feel needed and important and she knew she was. They both were in this relationship together, they belonged with each other, and it was time she stood up and took hold of it as much as he was. He was doing so much for her, couldn't she just trust the faith he had in her? She had nothing to lose, even if she wouldn't be able to walk tomorrow, she knew she would have her Armaan. The man whose feet she would walk on, all her life. They both deserved a better future, a lot of people needed them. They had to think beyond themselves and cure many others. Flourish in their careers, enjoy their lives and bask in each other's love. She WOULD be fine, she would make sure she at least tried to be. She had to come out victorious, for his love, for his trust and for them. Those fears and insecurities would have to face their love, which had always stood tall and overcome every pain and trouble. She was going to go for this treatment happily, because this was a way to lead her life and the both of them to every happiness they rightly deserved. She was going to fight it all, for him… WITH HIM.

I Don't have words. And Muskaan! I LOVE her !! Its so bad what Rahul did to her, I cried a lot when it was aired in DMG. Will RM come together in your story, Anku? I SO WANT THATTT! They're the best couple after AR !! And I Love Muski! Nautanki queen, yet L.O.V.E <3
Undoubtedly, this was the best part you've ever written :)

Part 18 : This was again a BEAUTY <3 I loved the whole thing, the REAL AR...How much they wanted each other, but knew they had to wait, how much it hurt them to be apart :( I seriously Don't know, how you manage to STUN me absolutely EVERYTIME. The parantha part was So Cute! Reminded me of DMG :) And the way AR reacted was so cuteee <3 AND Armaan's putting her hair behind her ear! Classic, but L.O.V.E <3 Aah I love those timesss! KaJen Wapas aa jao :(

Heehhee, she made a Time-table for her? Aww <3 And she wrote Miss Riddhima? WOW :D Loved that bit, and Armaan's answer was..Aaah, So Armaanish. LOVED IT!! Aww I love the kidss heehee :D Ayan and Ryan were So cute, "Armaan ko harana muskil hai" AWWW <3 The Letters Bit was So Adorable! P.S. I Love You and KKHH ? My two-most favourite Films! Awww! <3 And LOL, the CHEATER was TOO Cute !! I was grinning like Crajjyy :)

Whats up with Rahul man? Can't he just come back to Muski? He's hurting her SO SO SO much :( VERY BAD, Rahul . :x The last part made me literally burst into tears. It was so painful, the way they could let go :( I JUST Want Riddhima to get okay soon, and their love gets stronger! Muski is Uber-funny," Chak de phatte" :P LOVED THAT!

"Sssh," he interrupted and slowly bending towards her , took her in a kiss. They both leaned towards each other and kissed each other like there was no tomorrow. Promising each other of their unending love, pleading each other to take care ,and praying to the almighty to finally take them towards a life they both deserved.

Somewhere deep down they both knew, that this was probably the last chance , and they both had a feeling, this time, life or circumstances would NOT let them down.


Aah,KILL MEEE :( This was Heart-Touching!! LOVED IT LOVED IT SOO MUCH! Update soon Anku, Can't wait for RM ;)

Done :D
Kaisa laga,Madam?

Love,
Maitree :)

P.S.I LOVE YOU <3

Edited by ..Maitree.. - 14 years ago

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