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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
me too just wish this happens 😍
nicely written na haq hai😉

heart attack for maami and blah 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Ha ha ... What was that... WILD WILD imagination i say ... 🤣


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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Di ke liye sadi kar dali wow!!! i loved it.. plz continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
thx for the comments as you all liked it i will type its second and final part... as a Eidi for all of you... Eid mubarak to all

loved each and every comment thx a ton... love you all.
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
That was such a cute OS, I love the significance of the 'Haq' here where ASR marries Khushi to rightfully bring her to his home, for his di (or rather for himself), forever. To me, it seemed he was doing it for himself more than for his di, and how he didn't regret one bit of what he did, I loved that! Fab work naddiya, it was a lovely present for Eid! and Edit-ul-fitr mubarak to you too, god bless you :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Very nice and rocking update.
Plz do continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
a very eid day to u and ur family too..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mami ji: oh my heartwa sinking phatai sari next bahu... she sank on sofa

LA: hold Arnav shirt " you marry that chamkali ? "

Arnav: "i just " he just paused and though for a while ... what he has done in anger.

LA: you married her... you prefer her on me ..

Arnav: Lavanya you know i dont believe in all this , she was not coming so i just fill her maang you know na such kind of people they just believe in all this

Nani who was standing still " chota what do you mean you dont believe in such things"

Arnav: Nani she was not coming and arguing with me , di said she will not eat.

Nani: chota what if you dont believe we all believe you have married Khushi...

Anjali: Khushi my chota wife... she just smiled

Arnav just look at everyone...


Payal and buaji enter

Buaji: hey naadkashor ...in front of my eyes he put sindoor

Payal was just shaking Khushi woh was standing still with out any motion ..."buaji dekha iss ko kya huwa ha"

everyone looked at Khushi

Anjali : Khushi ...

Khushi just collapse before she hit ground Arnav grab her...

Arnav: di water

Payal just ran to kitchen and brought a glass.."yeh la"

Arnav made her lay down on sofa in his lap . sprinkle some on her face "Khushi " pat her face ...

everyone was gather around

Arnav: please give space let ...

Anjali : hum Dr ko bolata ha ...

Nani: yeh sub aap ki wajha se ha chota...

Buaji : agar khushi ko kuch hona tou hum

Payal: buaji

Arnav: just keep patting her cheek

Akash: knocked at Payal shoulder kya huwa

Payal: your bhai married Khushi

Akash : kya

Mami ji: clear her throat ...distance please

Akash : just walk to Anjali "Di yeh kya ?"

Anjali: shhh

DR arrived ...

Arnav: just made her lay on sofa and move away. walk to the other corner from where she could see her

Nani: dekha iss ko kya hogaya...

DR:check nervous break down ha has anything happen ?

Anjali: she will be fine?

DR: yes let her sleep for couple of hours peacefully. he got up..


Payal i am taking her home ... try to pick he up ..

Arnav: this is my home and she is he... paused ... just pick her up and walk to his room with out listening to anyone

buaji: kahan lagaraha ho

Anjali: chota baat to suna

Arnav : just walk to his room made her lay on his bed

Anjali : chota kya kar raha ha aap

Arnav: aap sub na bola iss ki yeh haalt meri wajah se huwi ha ...

Anjali: you shouted at her she look at Arnav who was not replying

Arnav: was staring at her

Anjali: hum aap se kuch baat kar raha ha chota..

Arnav: di aap sub na bola yeh meri wajah se huwa ha ..till she is not fine i will not answer to any of your question.

Anjali: chota

Arnav: di please go

LA enter nani yeh yahan kaise rah sakti ha

Nani looked at Arnav

Arnav: jaise nani na bola yeh meri biwi ha tou ab yeh tou mera Haq ha ..he pause

LA: but ASR

Arnav: please you all go from here let her rest

Buaji: humari bitiya

Arnav: meri bhi kuch ha ..he just got up ask everyone to leave the room

Anjali : chota hum nahi jai ga ...

Arnav: di please aap na bol iss ko la kar aao ..mein la aaiya ab

Anjali:iss tarah na

Arnav: di trust me mein kuch nahi karo ga ...he made a sad face ..just let me pay for what i did.

Anjali walk out he just closed the door ...

Arnav look at her just walk to his green house... sat on the chair... closed his eyes ..from the first day till now he had a flash back. "yeh sub meri wajha se" he just remember how he hurt her with words ."yes you all are right yeh sub meri wajha se , she in this stage because of me , ab tou mein sorry khana ka be Haq nahi rakhta ... he just sat there for hours he dont remember when he slept ..

it was dawn he woke up with the sun rays ..look back she was still asleep . he freshen up and walk out of room. saw Anjali buaji and payal sitting

Arnav: aap sub yahan kyun soraha ha

Anjali: tum itna ghusa mein tha

Payal: khushi

Arnav: woh abhi tak sorahi ha ...

Buaji: hum dekhe la

Arnav: ha per iss ko uthaya nahi sona da ...

Buaji: just look at her form door ..." woh kuch "

Arnav: woh sorahi ha mein na iss ko nahi uthaya ... said in a low tone

Anjali : chota ghusa thanda huwa

ARnav: di

Anjali : kya chota

Arnav: i want your help he look at them

Payal: humhari

Arnav: ha mein na bohot socha aap sub thek ha mein na Khushi ka saath bahot galat kiya ha .

Buaji: dair aaiya durast aaiya ...kya karo ga babua

Arnav : maafi

Anjali: kya

Arnav: di bol diya jo mein na bolna tha , bus ab aap sub meri help kara.. he just walk down


Anjali ,Payal and buaji look at each other...


as you all asked me to cont i wrote this . if you all like this will update more ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
AHH i love this too much!
next part!next part! :P
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Promise to read this after 6 sept
ekdum promise!
I am really in a fix with so many pms

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