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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
oh hell arnav will ask forgiveness frm khushi..😲
wow dis would be a miracle 😍
i surely wanna read dat plzz do cntinue Nad..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
wow...i wish this would hapnd in real too...but after todays epi my hopes r high,,anyways very good update..do conti...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Just too good for words.
do continue soon.
Raunika

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
pls cont
the story turning interesting each part
super update
waiting next
thank yu so much
God bless yu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Naddiya!
Achanak time mila aur padh liya
bade maze mein padh rahi this, uss ne gadi park ki, woh chilla rahi thi, as usual nok jhok, sindoor...wait, paused
Kya, *rubbing eyes*
refreshed the page
Yeh...sindoor, he married her😲
yaar itna unique kaise likhti hon?
Isko ko mein kya naam doon?
loved it
aishe heart attack jyada diya karo, heart strong ho jaye ga!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Di, that was too good!!!
Please continue soon it's full of suspense!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
wow
lets c wat arnav do next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hahahhahahaaha this is sooo hilarious and sweet especially the part where he says "haq ha" loved this yaar!!! seriously wish that something like this could happen in the show!!!! and the end with mamiji and la the blah having a heart attack ... FANTASTIC!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

part 2 at page 4


part 3


dont forget to comment . i read each and every comment of yours .sorry for not replying as i am not at at getting time, and i dont want to hurt others by replying few... do comment turning it in to SS as you all are liking it .

Arnav: marched to Lavanya room, he knocked the door it open

LA : was busy doing her packing

Arnav: where are you going?

LA: home

Arnav: why?

LA: as that chamkali no no Mrs Khushi Arnav Singh Raizida is live in with you.

Arnav: oh i see

LA: throw her clothes in bag

Arnav: close the bag ..." but i want you "

LA: for what?

Arnav: Lavanya you know we are in a relation .

LA: oh really are we

Arnav: yes

LA: but your family dont like me , remember how your nani scold me when i said i will share room with you.

Arnav: oh woh tou nani

LA: but last night she didnot reacted , even she said to everyone he is doing right ...

Arnav: really did nani said that.. shocked

LA : yes

Arnav: trust me even i am too shocked .

LA: really

Arnav: yes

LA: hug him

Arnav: drop your idea of going from here , get ready for office remember we have a meeting today..

LA: oh yes . oh what should i wear ? she just started looking in her wardrobe

Arnav: may i help you?

LA: sure ...

Arnav: just taken out a dress and pass it to LA...

LA: this look at it,,

Arnav: yes ... ok i am going to get ready

LA: ok

Arnav: walk out " you should stay here LA other wise i will not be able to make her realized " he had a self thought...


Payal : was sitting next to Khushi

Buaji: dekho zara kitna aaram se sorahi ha ( look at her how peacefully she is sleeping)

Payal: lagat ha saalo se nahi soi ( look like she has not slept for years )

Anjali: chal agar chota aagai woh naraz hoga (lets go if chota came back he will be angry)

Buaji: hum ko apni betiya ka paas rahna ha ( i want to stay with my daugter)

Anjali: please

Payal: chala buaji yeh thek ha , jab utha gai tab dekh laga ( lets go buaji ,she is fine . when she will get up then we will come)

Arnav enter he just look at them" di mein na bola na sona da iss ko " ( di i said na let her sleep) he said bit loud .

Payal and buaji just went out .

Arnav..he was taking out his clothes for his cupboard. look at her payal , taken it out look at sleeping Khushi .kept it back went to change ... all the time he was thinking about her . her face was just coming in front of his eyes ." whats wrong with me ?yeh larki " he just shake his head and walk out ...

Khushi just suddenly sat and with close eyes she was murmuring " di uthaya kyun nahi , aap ko nahi pata hum ko office jana tha . agar hum late huwa tou woh laad governor hum per phir chalia ga "(di why you didnot wake me , you dont know i have to go to office , if i get late that laad governor will shout on me )

Arnav: just could not stop smiling " i am always in her mind "

Khushi: di bolo na ,kya time ha ,itna acha khawab aa raha ha hum ankhe nahi khula charaha ( di say na what is time . i am seeing such a nice dream ,that i dont want to open my eyes ).

Arnav: he just sat on other side of bed and just stare at her ...

Khushi:Pata ha di hum kya dekh raha ha hum itna ameer hogai ha ka hum ...( do you know di what i am seeing , i am so rich that ) she started searching payal on bed.. found Arnav hand and his lap she just move and placed her head in his lap .hold his hand in her ."di jab bethi ho tou bolti kyun nahi ,kya chup ka roza ha (sorry i dont remember the hindi term) di when you are sitting why you are not talking are you keeping silent fast)

Arnav: was just total lost he was just looking at her innocent face

Khushi: hum thek smajha aaj aap ka vaardth ha , aur abhi time ha thora se aur khawab dekhe sakta ha ( i am correct today you are fasting, and there is still time ,so i can dream)

Arnav: just look at her hairs that were coming in between , he could not see her face clearly. he just with the help of his finger remove it ...

Khushi was just smiling ... he move his finger close to her lips to touch it ...softly touch it


La: Arnav meeting will start when you will come we are getting late... she just shouted from out and open door

Khushi just open her eyes in shock look she was laying in his lap holding his hand in her's ...

Arnav: just look at the door and at khushi...

Khushi: just quickly got up from his lap as he was looking at her her head hit his chin...

Arnav: ouch

Khushi: ahhh

LA: oops in shocked

Anjali for behind "Lavanya chota aajai ga aap chala" they could just hear her voice.

Arnav and Khushi just look at each other ... both rubbing their head and chin respectively.

LA: ha di aajai ga she just slam the door .. they look at the door

Khushi: aap yahan..she look around( you here)

Arnav: aur kahan jao...( where should i go)

Khushi: hum yahan kaise ( how i am here )

Arnav: look at her ..

Khushi: chora hum ko (leave me)

Arnav: tum na mera haath pakra ha ( you are holding my hand not me ) he should her his hand in her's khushi quickly left it

Khushi: phir hum kaisa ( how i am?)

Arnav: tum aakar meri goud mein soai thi ( you came and slept in my lap )

Khushi: per hum yahan kaise " how i am here?"

Arnav: kal hum na shadi ki ha " yesterday we got married"

Khushi: what ? "hum kp yaad kyun nahi aaraha " why i cannt remember ?"she shouted with open mouth

Arnav : HAQ ha he just touch her lips with his finger... " i am going office Mrs Khushi Arnav meeting ha will be back till then you recollect ..." picked his mobile and was to walkout of room

Khushi: suna tuo jump out of bed

Arnav : look at her he just turn and stare ...

Khushi: saw her fore head in mirror she just recollected all..

Arnav: you take alot of time ... and i dont have time to waste .. see you ... walked out


to be cont ...do comment .. add naddiya26ipkknd for pm please ...


Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Before PM!
Loved it
Mrs. Khusi and she sleeping in his lap
Awesome concept...and fab imagination
Keep it up!

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