'and then she said it'~4* thread5 link: pg 151 - Page 73

i don't knw whom u have disappointed..u r a gr8 writer n thr is not even a single doubt about that..so u continue the way u want to..tc

Hey Sush... i donot belive that what u wrote disappointed anyone. It was excellent and i loved it.. I infact have read ur entire FF again.. twice since yesterday. Its the best

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Hello!

Yea, I know I have plenty reserves, and I'm yet to comment on the chapter.. But can't help it, my boards started from today, so I have no option..

But since you posted this note, you deserve to know what I personally feel about this chapter.

I think it was perfect. The timing, the relationship, the things that led to it all, it was perfect! Seriously! I told you this before also I guess, that I liked the fact that they were intimate with each other in spite of not having realized their relationship.. And it fits perfectly well in this story, whatever conspired in this chapter!

And I'm not at all disappointed at the pace at which things unfolded, in fact I'm pretty happy with the pace! No offence to anyone, but I personally think this consumation came at the right time - wasn't too quick, nor dragged!

And maybe Riddhima already knows that she loves Armaan, but we wouldn't know that, nor would Armaan, since its all from his Point of View.. Keeping that in mind, maybe they both consumated their relationship whilst both are in love with each other, just haven't confessed yet!

Seriously, I think this story's moving along just fine!

And also, I seriously don't think you should change anything you thought originally for the next chapter.. Its your story, and even if you get varied responses, I definitely think you should stick to what you've planned!

Just my opinion!

I think the latest chapter was perfect!

Sorry for the laid back comments, but just a few days more, I'll be back to commenting soon :)

Shrutika <3

hey sush, just read ur note and i just wanna say that, that u r an awesome writer. Ur ff is too real. I dont think it was early in arrange marriage its common, in fact this the way things work most of the time. I must tell u that the reality touch u gave is one of the key factor that attracted me.
Keep up the good work. Dont make us wait too much yaar. Update soon.
Love
sonu

I am a silent reader of ur ff but ur note has made me post this comment.

I just luv this ff specially d way u've portrayed an arrange marriage. In arrange marriages people generally consummate their relationship before falling in love. Last part was awesome and definitely not disappointing. It was realistic. Plz don't change d coming chapter.

well I dont know about other's point of view

I loved the part. I think thats what happen in most arranged marriages. Its more realistic this way

Hey
i loved ur update
i thought it was just great
write soon cannt wait to read the next part
p.s. U write very well

i would only say...The last part was fantastic n was one of the best part so far!!!
Hey i can't comment coz dese days m not feeling good, i hardly come online!!! but i was very happy today due 2 some reasons!!!
Don't worry...if i'll get time, i'll put up a long comment on my fav ff! Sush i love n adore this ff..n for d physical relationship thing i would just like 2 add..i have read many ff's where i felt more of a lust love but here i found it serene, pure...and emotions that took me to another world. I don't know why you r not satisfied..but we are truly satisfied! You are doing a great job, maybe dere is some writers instinct! I loved the part..it was adorable, cute n simple yet Romantic with a pure love, where i truly found love rather than lust!

Love
aakriti