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nksweetgirl

@nksweetgirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#711

hey...i don't usually comment ..im kind of a silent reader but i couldn't resist this time because i absolutely loved the part...this is the thing i love about this story is that it's not like the usual type ..love, marriage, then consummating the relation .. i like how this is different ,, it's unique

and last but not least ..i m totally in love with armaan's character..there are so many stories with riddhima's POV or third person..but this is the first story I'm reading which is armaan's POV which i absolutely love it ...

please continue soon..can't wait to read more

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swati

@smileever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#712

As per my viewpoint...I did not find ne thing wrong in the way ur story is proceeding...intact its truly different nd surly not at all non realistic...do continue ur way soinish 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#713

Whatt? Who was disappointed? And I still don't get why? I thought the part was perfect! Love making was the perfect medicine for ridz. She neeeds to forget the sstep dads touch and remember only armaan's for her to move on so the part was perfect! Nd yes in arranged marriages its usually sex then love...
Actually in so many relationships its sex than love, sometimes they don't even make it to love!

Sush don't change a thing because ur true readers understand nd love it! Ur the writer and as a reader I want to read wht u had planned, not what others forced u into!

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#714

Hello!

Yea, I know I have plenty reserves, and I'm yet to comment on the chapter.. But can't help it, my boards started from today, so I have no option..

But since you posted this note, you deserve to know what I personally feel about this chapter.

I think it was perfect. The timing, the relationship, the things that led to it all, it was perfect! Seriously! I told you this before also I guess, that I liked the fact that they were intimate with each other in spite of not having realized their relationship.. And it fits perfectly well in this story, whatever conspired in this chapter!

And I'm not at all disappointed at the pace at which things unfolded, in fact I'm pretty happy with the pace! No offence to anyone, but I personally think this consumation came at the right time - wasn't too quick, nor dragged!

And maybe Riddhima already knows that she loves Armaan, but we wouldn't know that, nor would Armaan, since its all from his Point of View.. Keeping that in mind, maybe they both consumated their relationship whilst both are in love with each other, just haven't confessed yet!

Seriously, I think this story's moving along just fine!

And also, I seriously don't think you should change anything you thought originally for the next chapter.. Its your story, and even if you get varied responses, I definitely think you should stick to what you've planned!

Just my opinion!

I think the latest chapter was perfect!

Sorry for the laid back comments, but just a few days more, I'll be back to commenting soon :)

Shrutika <3

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#715

Originally posted by: perfectsmile
Heya!!!

Firstly, though I am late, Happy Dussehra!! Hope you had fun!!

Now, thanq so much for the lovely comments. As I have gone through, I realized that though few of you liked the part, most of you were kind of disappointed: be it the way the things went on so soon or something else.
Well, I don't know what to say. I just tried to put in something away from the typical ones. I know it should have been :realizing love, confessing it and then consummating the relation. Thats the niche. But I don't know, in arranged marriages, it hardly happens that way. (atleast in my point of view).
Here Armaan and Riddhima are two completely different people: poles apart. They are mere friends if not strangers a month or two ago. So it takes time for them to realize if they are in love. Now that Armaan had, she will too soon.

Then coming to Armaan, most of you said that he shouldn't have made love to her or that waited for a while or that it was too soon. Well, I respect that. I don't have anything in my defense except that sometimes in a relationship, emotional support offered with physical love or assurance tends to heal people faster. That's what I tried to put forth. But I guess I have failed at that.

Well, sorry for the disappointment. I can't nag you to stick around the fiction if the part somehow made you lose your interest but I just hope you keep reading and that I get those awesome comments.

And yeah, once again, thanq so much for the honest comments. I deeply appreciate that. Keep them coming in the future too.😃

Now coming to the next part. I had written most of it but then reading the comments I thought it was better to change few things here and there so you would enjoy it. So it might take a little time.

LOL, finally I am done with the essay, and you guys are spared. 😳

Keep reading!!

Love ya!

ps: Some reserves are still unedited. Will be glad if you fill them out before I post the next chapter. 😳

hey sush hi buddy hope you are f9 now
and about your last update ,i thought it was f9
acording to me
well w8ing for your next update
maria:)

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#716

Hey sush! Just to say i love the way u r taking the story. As u wrote about arrange marriages, i totally agree. Though guess that's our opinion, every1 has theirs. Cant wait to read the next part. So pls post soon.

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fathima

@fatzfathi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#717

i completly agree wit u sush..🤗 u tried a diffrnt route tan d typical ones..n i loved it.. 😳 n its true tat in most of d arranged marriages things occur in d exact opposite way of lov marriage..u had very wel explained it...n i admire d way u tried d diffrnt plot here... 👏👏👏

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divi1oct

@divi1oct

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Posted: 13 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: perfectsmile
Heya!!!

Firstly, though I am late, Happy Dussehra!! Hope you had fun!!

Now, thanq so much for the lovely comments. As I have gone through, I realized that though few of you liked the part, most of you were kind of disappointed: be it the way the things went on so soon or something else.
Well, I don't know what to say. I just tried to put in something away from the typical ones. I know it should have been :realizing love, confessing it and then consummating the relation. Thats the niche. But I don't know, in arranged marriages, it hardly happens that way. (atleast in my point of view).
Here Armaan and Riddhima are two completely different people: poles apart. They are mere friends if not strangers a month or two ago. So it takes time for them to realize if they are in love. Now that Armaan had, she will too soon.

Then coming to Armaan, most of you said that he shouldn't have made love to her or that waited for a while or that it was too soon. Well, I respect that. I don't have anything in my defense except that sometimes in a relationship, emotional support offered with physical love or assurance tends to heal people faster. That's what I tried to put forth. But I guess I have failed at that.

Well, sorry for the disappointment. I can't nag you to stick around the fiction if the part somehow made you lose your interest but I just hope you keep reading and that I get those awesome comments.

And yeah, once again, thanq so much for the honest comments. I deeply appreciate that. Keep them coming in the future too.😃

Now coming to the next part. I had written most of it but then reading the comments I thought it was better to change few things here and there so you would enjoy it. So it might take a little time.

LOL, finally I am done with the essay, and you guys are spared. 😳

Keep reading!!

Love ya!

ps: Some reserves are still unedited. Will be glad if you fill them out before I post the next chapter. 😳

Heya..

U hvnt failed in my opinion(no offense 2 anyone)..

As u said in arrange marriages it hardly happens..

I jus lyked the part so much..

It was very nicely expressed..

Eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part..

Continue soon..

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: perfectsmile
Heya!!!

Firstly, though I am late, Happy Dussehra!! Hope you had fun!!

Now, thanq so much for the lovely comments. As I have gone through, I realized that though few of you liked the part, most of you were kind of disappointed: be it the way the things went on so soon or something else.
Well, I don't know what to say. I just tried to put in something away from the typical ones. I know it should have been :realizing love, confessing it and then consummating the relation. Thats the niche. But I don't know, in arranged marriages, it hardly happens that way. (atleast in my point of view).
Here Armaan and Riddhima are two completely different people: poles apart. They are mere friends if not strangers a month or two ago. So it takes time for them to realize if they are in love. Now that Armaan had, she will too soon.

Then coming to Armaan, most of you said that he shouldn't have made love to her or that waited for a while or that it was too soon. Well, I respect that. I don't have anything in my defense except that sometimes in a relationship, emotional support offered with physical love or assurance tends to heal people faster. That's what I tried to put forth. But I guess I have failed at that.

Well, sorry for the disappointment. I can't nag you to stick around the fiction if the part somehow made you lose your interest but I just hope you keep reading and that I get those awesome comments.

And yeah, once again, thanq so much for the honest comments. I deeply appreciate that. Keep them coming in the future too.😃

Now coming to the next part. I had written most of it but then reading the comments I thought it was better to change few things here and there so you would enjoy it. So it might take a little time.

LOL, finally I am done with the essay, and you guys are spared. 😳

Keep reading!!

Love ya!

ps: Some reserves are still unedited. Will be glad if you fill them out before I post the next chapter. 😳

Sush ! this note was indeed a shock for me.. I cant believe you're thinking to change the track after reading the comments..please DONT! Atleast thats what i feel...You're the writer and no one except you knows what lies ahead ..as for the arrange marriage thing, I do agree with your POV. As much as i love the cliched romance and all, life's not an easy game and it never happens the perfect way. We all know that.

Its not necessary that things happen the way we want them too or dream of! Its very rare and the people should feel lucky if they get everything the way they want it to be.

I dont know why but I feel whatever happened between AR was perfect for them ..it might not be perfect for others but for them.. M not saying this to make you feel better or so but its the kick of my pragmatism!! LOL

Its my request to you, do carry on with the track as you wanted it to be.. You know where this track will lead to unlike us all. ...😃

P.S: Happy Dusshera to you too