'and then she said it'~4* thread5 link: pg 151 - Page 71

Hi Sush
Iam so sorry for the late comment.
The part was AMAZING. 👏
I just loved it.
OMG!Riddhima attempted suicide! that too twice!
When she asked armaan y he didn't come in her life earlier,it was so touching.
Armaan is so caring.His character is so natural.I really like how he wants to keep her happy & understands her unspoken words.For me the best part in the chapter was when armaan realized he loves riddhima.You described his feelings so well.
Ridz herself asking him to make love to her,showed the love she has for him,the trust she has on him.I have a feeling ridz has already fallen for him.But i guess she will not confess her feelings so soon.Now that armaan realized his love for her,hope he will understand that she loves him too.I soo want to see his reaction when he comes to know of her feelings.
Their love making scene was SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL.There was nothing vulgar in it at all.
The song was apt for the chapter.It's one of my favourites.
ATSSI is unique.
Altogether this chapter was Simply Amazingly Beautiful.

👏 👏 👏
Cont soon.Thanks for the PM.

can we expect a early update... very eager to read next part...

oh my god, i so wasn't expecting the part to be like that... i loved it... they were adorable and man i love ridhimma's character in this ff
loved armaans caring and romantic side in this part
thank you for a beautiful part :) love you sooo much

Sorry for being sooo irregular on the commenting part..i hve been really busy with my college.. but i make it a point on reading ur ff every day..!!😊

hey loved the part...very beautiful...the simplicity of their love n care...the way armaan took care n comforted riddhima...their sweet moments in da nandi hills...their conversations n moments ... n the cottage part...so beautifully expressed armaan's feelings n realization ...of his love towards riddhima... n their beautiful passionate moments...loved all ...this was da bestest n the most beautiful parts penned down from you...loved it...anywaz take care of yourself...thanks for pm...pls continue soon ...take care...love aish...

Heya!!!

Firstly, though I am late, Happy Dussehra!! Hope you had fun!!

Now, thanq so much for the lovely comments. As I have gone through, I realized that though few of you liked the part, most of you were kind of disappointed: be it the way the things went on so soon or something else.
Well, I don't know what to say. I just tried to put in something away from the typical ones. I know it should have been :realizing love, confessing it and then consummating the relation. Thats the niche. But I don't know, in arranged marriages, it hardly happens that way. (atleast in my point of view).
Here Armaan and Riddhima are two completely different people: poles apart. They are mere friends if not strangers a month or two ago. So it takes time for them to realize if they are in love. Now that Armaan had, she will too soon.

Then coming to Armaan, most of you said that he shouldn't have made love to her or that waited for a while or that it was too soon. Well, I respect that. I don't have anything in my defense except that sometimes in a relationship, emotional support offered with physical love or assurance tends to heal people faster. That's what I tried to put forth. But I guess I have failed at that.

Well, sorry for the disappointment. I can't nag you to stick around the fiction if the part somehow made you lose your interest but I just hope you keep reading and that I get those awesome comments.

And yeah, once again, thanq so much for the honest comments. I deeply appreciate that. Keep them coming in the future too.😃

Now coming to the next part. I had written most of it but then reading the comments I thought it was better to change few things here and there so you would enjoy it. So it might take a little time.

LOL, finally I am done with the essay, and you guys are spared. 😳

Keep reading!!

Love ya!

ps: Some reserves are still unedited. Will be glad if you fill them out before I post the next chapter. 😳

Hey sushmita! I realised that I'd never commented on your ff but I have read all the parts and have enjoyed each and every part immensely. Regarding the latest part, well I didn't find anything wrong in it. In fact I think both have feelings for each other and like you mentioned, they are an unusual couple so I guess their consummation was a little unusual too. But it wasn't as though there was no love in it at all. I found it really good and not to forget, well written, dont know about the rest so don't be disappointed. :D Do update soon!! :)

I can't believe people said they were disappointed! Your story is realistic, it's true, in an arranged marriage the couple in question tend to spend the night together and then fall in love! I fully support you in the caption you wrote! And don't change your interpretion because someone disapproves, your the author, you make the choices! I loved it, and hope you update soon!!