mayur one shots by nuckts!updated-pg 24 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
awesome update dear...
loved it lodsss...
last part was too good...
thanks for d PM
love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
amazing.. update...
you have turned adhiraj's character.. negative i liked... it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
wow- Fabulous ending dear
awesomeee
loved it so much
rosh was very cute and sweet just like mayur..
hey do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Love it
Finally adhiraj ka the end hogaye
End was so romantic and cute
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Facing embarrasement!!!!!!!!
it was a nice sunday afternoon ,of winter days,though the sunrays were heating the house still the cool breeze was making a peaceful effect
sundays were usually free for mayur and roshni and her ivu
n-roshni chalo khana laga diya hai
r-mummy please do minute..
guys this is roshni and
this is ivu

n-nahi !😡chalo roshni khana lag gaya hai
r-saddens her face ok mummy😔
nupur was working in the kitchen but soon she was grabbed by her waist by a tight familiar grip
n-😳mayu chodo mujhe roshni aati hi hogi
m-don't tell me ki tum yeh sab enjoy nahi karti acting mischievous😉
nupur blushed😳
n-dekho mayu ab hato agar roshni aa gayi to..
m-roshni ivu ke saath khel rahi hai which means wo 15min ke baad hi aayegi chahe tum kitna bhi kaho to bahane nahi chalenge sweetheart😉
suddenly roshni enters the scene and sees what was happening,she was feeling very unusual but happy seeing her parents like that
r-mummy,papa
by now, mayank who was nuzzling in nupur's neck and kissing it,sprang apart listening to roshni's voice
nupur was too shocked to react but adjusted her position
r-aap dono yeh kya kar rahe the
both look at each other🤢
n-wo ha wo kya hai na beta..😕
m-beta actually wo ha tumhari mummy ke neck me dard ho raha tha to mai unhe thik kar raha tha😉😆
r-to unhone koi medicine kyu nahi li..😲
m-wo yeh aisi dawai best illaj karti hai
nupur glared at him 😡on that but he just gave a naughty expression and winked😉
r-by now who was worried,mummy aap thik to ho na😭
nupur's heart melted on this😛 and she kissed her cheek and picked her up
n-ale ale mera baby mummy bilkul thik hai
and then nupur feeds her the food
after some days
nupur was checking her some i-f ffs
m-aur nupur kya ho raha hai koi new story?
n-yup love and faith by DhanakZ its awesome !
m-wohi jisme finally shaddi ho gayi main lead ki?
n-ha wohi bahut cool story hai aur magical realism by Fantasia bahut hi pyari story hai with realistic approach
m-aur tumhari faria didi?
n-nahi woh ffs nahi lihti par comments bahut inspiring deti hai,aur teenage love by Maria,wo bhi bahut alag story hai
m-hm... par phir bhi aaj tum thodi naraaz lag rahi ho?
n-nahi naraaz nahi actually mai The feather in blue birf ke update ka intezaar kar rahi thi by SujaLuvsMayur pata nahi wo kab free hongi update ke liye itne intresting point pe humme cliffhanger pe latka diya
m-arre busy hongi
n-ha woh bhi hai pata hai mayu unhone ek os bhi likha hai latest wala hai kissing is injurious to health by god itna funny yet romantic hai ki mai to blush hi krti reh gayi
m-hm. alag naam hai btw tum blush kar rahi thi?kyu humara first kiss yaad aa gaya kya?😉
nupur blushed at this😳
now mayu couldn't control himself and captures her mouth and kisses her passionately and they both get lost in each other mayu was kissing her mouth,neck(umm. ab nahi likha jaata😳)
suddenly their blissful event is ceased by a phone call
m-😡ab kiska phone aaya hai?
he goes and attends the call and comes afterwards
m-nupur samrat gunjan aaj humare yaahe dinner ke liye aa rahe hai
n-wow that's gud chalo mai kaamo mei lag jaati hu tumhe saaman ki list deti hu please tum le aaoge?
m-ofcourse honey!!!!and pecked her lips again
n-mayu abhi nahi bahut kaam hai
at dinner:
mayank samrat were talking some their business related typical topics,nupur and gunjan were busy gossiping,roshni and sanaya(sajan's daughter) were playing with ivu and were doing masti
n-chalo bacho dinner lag gaya hai
they all were having their dinner
s-aur mayank tum batao iss baar diwali ke kya plans?
m-jo family chahe yaar afterall iss ghar mei in dono ki majority se hi kuch hota hai
n-by god matlab kya tumhari marzi nahi chalti?
m-obviously tum ,roshni aur ab to ivu teeno ki hi marzi chalti hai girl's rule!!
n-by god iss ivu ka to naam mat lo jab dekho doodh pee jaati hai,ghar ganda karti hai😡
g-😲di please shant ho jao waise samrat tumhe kya lagta hai iss baar hum poora excel friends group with family diwali ke liye Nainital jaaye?😊
san-ha papa chalo na please mujhe sabke bacho ke sath khelna hai😛
m-ha beta bilkul btw suhani ki koi news?
s-ya dude delivery 2weeks baad hai
n-by god accha hai i hope everything goes fine
g-ha di😛
suddenly gunjan's spoon falls down and she bends down to pick that up n does that but while coming up her head dashes to the table's end and she yells😲
g-ahh..
s-kya hua jyada lagi to nahi?with concern
n-gunjan thik to hai?
m-nupur mujhe lagata hai tum first aid box le aao usme medicine haiusse apply karte hai
g-nahi jiju mai bilkul thik hu
nupur goes and searches for medicine
n-mayu medicine nahi hai
m-offo ab kya kare?
r-mai batati hu!!!!!!!!!!⭐️
s-tum beta tumhe pata hai medicine kaha hai?😕😲
r-nahi uncle mai khud hi medicine hu
now everyone gets confused😕
g-beta yeh tum kya keh rahi ho?
roshni then comes forwards towards gunjan and picks her head and kisses the area where she got hurt!
g-beta thank you so much par yeh kya tha?😛😃
r-medicine
s-kaisi medicine?😕
r-pain ki medicine,wo papa ne aaj mummy ko neck pe pain ho raha tha to yeh medicine di to wo bilkul thik ho gayi!!!👏
now sajan look at mayur and mayur are highly embarrased and nupur blushes like hell😳☺️
and all of them burst out laughing🤣
mayur are blushing☺️ and nupur shyly bends her head
s-kya dude?kuch aur nahi to phir medicine?koi aur bahana nahi mila kya?😆
😉
m-nahi woh actually..
g-hum sab samjh gaye jiju aap dono roshni se pakade gaye aur aapne yeh bahana bana diya...😊😆
now all 4 were laughing and here roshni was feeling sad that everyone was laughing at her and this was noticed by mayank
m-kya hua princess aap udaas kyu ho?
r-aap log mujhpe has rahe ho na?
g-nahi bete hum to bus aise hi
r-to agar wo medicine nahi thi to gunajan massi ko abhi bhi pain ho raha hoga na
g-aweee no sweety bilkul nahi dekho gayab hao gya pointing at her head
r-sachi?😛
g,n,s,m-muchi!
san-mujhe neend aa rahi hai
s-oh chalo chalte hai guys we need to go now bye!
m,n-bye
s-but seriously dude we had a nice time and now you guys will have nice time eh?😉
m-shut up samrat😆
sajan and sanya left
r-maine kuch galat bola kya?
n-nahi beta bus mummy,papa ke baare mei ekdum bahar nahi bolna chahiye
m-hmm.. aur agar kuch humare baare mie kehna ho to humse pooch lena nahi to sab kya kahenge ki roshni ke parents kaise hai hai na?
r-par aap log has kyu rahe the?
n-because..looking at mayank for help
m-because tum wo keh ke bahut cute lag rahi thi
r-ha???
m,n-hmm.
n-acha ab chalo gudnight!
r-goodnight
r-umm mummy agar wo kissi medicine nahi thi to aapka pain kaise kum hua?
n-tum jab badi ho jaogi tab samjhogi abhi chalo so jao
now roshni sleeps and mayur were in their room
n-kya hua?
m-roshni jab badi ho jaegi to wo wo sab samjhegi n meri beti ko koi ladka yeh sab he was feeling scared and angry😡
n-mayu tum bhi na abhise hi itne possessive?by god!!!!!!!!!😆
dekho wo kabhi to badi hogi hi na humesha tumhari princess nahi rahegi chalo ab so jao aur sochna band karo
m-thanks for making me understand!now goodnight and ya i love you!
n-i love you too!!!!!!!!!!!
uff.. completed finally ,guys the names mentioned of authours of i-f are just for the os if you don't like your names and matter linked with it just pm me i'll edit the post
have a great diwali
love ya🤗
love nuckts!!!!!😊










Edited by nuckts - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
That was funny 😆
Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
awesome OS...
i loved it lodsss...
thanks for d PM...
love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Heheheehe it was hilrous update

Just fabulous hun

Awww roshnee was so sweet and innocent

Loved her too much

PMG u included me in this part.. hayeee I m really very hun

Lekin ye kya me and mayur ki di-lol lol lol

Itna bare bacche ki mom-dad mujhse chota hai… r a yaar maine abhi tak apni study nehi complete ki + unmarried bhi hu- but u made me here mayur's di…LOL LOL LOL

But I enjoyed it loads dear

Beautiful part

Too good.

Keep it up

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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
it was a nice update...
talks of roshni make me laugh..
i loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you so much guys for your inspirational response!!!!!😊
happy diwali to everyone!

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