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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

a very cute update.

loved the update n pics.

keep going

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Zahra

@Minnie.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

sorry 4 l8 reply dude been busy wiv eid an skwl starin soon an wht not sorry lovelly update though bless ya

i love ur stories an wht not there really interesting an different bless ya

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Zahra

@Minnie.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

im sure i comented but i shall do so again lollz lovely update bless ya thanks 4 pm

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Zahra

@Minnie.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

wooowww another update i didnt realise lolz bless ya thanks 4 the pm sweety

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xainab293

@xainab293

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

sanchariii! i loved it! great job yaar!

i love arnav n khushi! the way theyre attracted to each other!
simply superb!

thanks for the pms!

continue sooon!😊

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Hey sanch, nice ff. Like the ease with which arnav khushi became friends, diff from all i've read so far. N anjali khushi's friendship is cute, shyam as usual hate him. Am a bit confused, is all of the story in flashback? Part 4 esp i dont get if its happening in present or flashback, pls lemme know.

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Sanchari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz
Hey sanch, nice ff. Like the ease with which arnav khushi became friends, diff from all i've read so far. N anjali khushi's friendship is cute, shyam as usual hate him. Am a bit confused, is all of the story in flashback? Part 4 esp i dont get if its happening in present or flashback, pls lemme know.

Well you see, I completely forgot to write about the Christmas, and it is an important part of London, so I had to write a part on that, but I had already mentioned that they became friends , so I had to write a flashback

Nope, not all the story is in flashback, but it is part of the update, you know, to show the bonding of Anjali and Khusi,

I am sorry I couldn't make it clear, will surely try to write a better one next time, well it's half written, it has flashbacks too!😆

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SillyPepper

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Hiya Sancho!

Just happened 2 read this! I m posting my comment after completing part 1

It was amazing!

My bad I missed this FF! Pls PM wen u update n I remember ur other FF in which Khushi resigns from the job n both talk sarcastically! I lost after part 1...

If possible giv me the link' for dat one...or PM me Wen u update!

Now am off 2 read remaining parts!

Edited by cindrella255 - 14 years ago

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Me first here too 😉

No Arnav in the update..😭

Khushi has to settle in London again and it's hard for her...I hope Arnav helps her in this; also poor girl is so lonely, she needs company...I hope Tanya be a friend to hers...

Nice part...😛

Edited by the_rain - 14 years ago

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