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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

nice part !

arnva is really sweet

shyam is crazy!lol

cant wait for the next part !

thanks

xxx

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Hey Sanchu!

Loved this part...Shyam is so gross!

V enjoy long updates!

Continue soon!

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

WOW Morphz!

This one was painful! 🤢

Khusi's inner turmoils, Arnav's politeness and care, and shyam's total evilness.

What a gentleman Arnu has been throughout all this. Sweet, sensitive and compassionate! And he is falling for her too. Slowly but subtly! So dreamy and beautifully crafted.

I fail to understand why Shyam won't leave her, especially after realizing she knows he is two timing her and her best friend. What a creep. I recall the part in one of your updates where you said "Anjali is big enough to handle her troubles and Khusi shouldn't be concerned about it and let the relationship with Shyam continue" 😡 yeh banda chahta kya hai?

Khusi ka Anjali se door rehna.. I really felt that pain! How will she deal with her friend and how will she put her life back in motion? I am intrigued to find out!

Khusi ka apne aap ko saza dena, felt very real too!

This was a very intense update darling! you had me hooked from the first scene itself. It was indeed pretty long... but I wished it would never end! 😳

Can't wait for the next part! simply superb! ⭐️

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

gud as usual!! lovd it!

best of luck 4 ur xams!

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Zahra

@Minnie.

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

awhhh awesome update u know u always update in a perfect tym period not to soon an not to l8t i love that lolz sorry had to meantion lmao

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Nice. Oh definately didn't miss Arnav in this one. This Shyam is such a ...! How dare he talk to khushi like that. the precap is quite scary. Thanks 4 the pm, sancho.