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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
its amazing!!
plz pm me when you update thanks! tht 2 timing dummy. i hate this Shyam
..Anita.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Amazing start
this is really different...khushi and shyam face off? i can't wait for that
where is arnav
and please pm me when you update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Awesome part.very beautifully written.
loved how u wrote her dilemma
Raunika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
was listening to this number and your FF came to my mind .. thought id share ... its very apt on Khushi and Shyam ...

Last Christmas, I gave you my heart
But the very next day you gave it away

this year to save me from tears
ill give it to someone special ...

Once bitten and twice shy
I keep my distance but you still catch my eye
Tell me baby do you recognise me?
Well it's been a year, it doesn't surprise me

I wrapped it up and sent it
With a note saying "I Love You" I meant it
Now I know what a fool I've been
But if you kissed me now I know you'd fool me again

A crowded room, friends with tired eyes
I'm hiding from you and your soul of ice
My God I thought you were someone to rely on
Me? I guess I was a shoulder to cry on
A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Oooh Oooh
Now I've found a real love you'll never fool me again

A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Next yearI'll give it to someone,
I'll give it to someone special
special
someone
someone
I'll give it to someone,
I'll give it to someone special
who'll give me something in return
I'll give it to someone
hold my heart and watch it burn
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone special
I've got you here to stay
I can love you for a day
I thought you were someone special
gave you my heart
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone
last christmas I gave you my heart
you gave it away
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone

Edited by JalebiBai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: JalebiBai

was listening to this number and your FF came to my mind .. thought id share ... its very apt!!!


Last Christmas, I gave you my heart
But the very next day you gave it away

this year to save me from tears
ill give it to someone special ...

Once bitten and twice shy
I keep my distance but you still catch my eye
Tell me baby do you recognise me?
Well it's been a year, it doesn't surprise me

I wrapped it up and sent it
With a note saying "I Love You" I meant it
Now I know what a fool I've been
But if you kissed me now I know you'd fool me again

A crowded room, friends with tired eyes
I'm hiding from you and your soul of ice
My God I thought you were someone to rely on
Me? I guess I was a shoulder to cry on
A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Oooh Oooh
Now I've found a real love you'll never fool me again

A face on a lover with a fire in his heart
A man undercover but you tore me apart
Next yearI'll give it to someone,
I'll give it to someone special
special
someone
someone
I'll give it to someone,
I'll give it to someone special
who'll give me something in return
I'll give it to someone
hold my heart and watch it burn
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone special
I've got you here to stay
I can love you for a day
I thought you were someone special
gave you my heart
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone
last christmas I gave you my heart
you gave it away
I'll give it to someone, I'll give it to someone


Awesome!
Thanks for sharing🤗
Well I was thinking to introduce a song in the next chapter!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
well then i read your mind and wrote this bit for you then 😉... i was listening to this song in the morning and i had this feeling of deja vu.. and i realised, it was apt on ur FF.. well, i must applaud your style of story telling, it was so relate able !!
would love to know which song you will pick !!😍☺️

Originally posted by: murphy369


Awesome!
Thanks for sharing🤗
Well I was thinking to introduce a song in the next chapter!😃

Edited by JalebiBai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
amazing update!❤️
continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
omg sanch!! you write too??
that was simply great!! fabulous writing!!👍🏼
i read both the parts just now!!
wonderful.. keep going!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Oh sweety thats soo kind of you !!!

thank you sooo much and love yaaa..

big hug 🤗

yes weekends were soo sulky b4 I joined IF
But after IF I can have Arhilicious weekends thanks to you my frnds.
mmmuuuaaahhh
fab update murph👏👏
Arnav met Khushi dropped her home and they are neighbours...
means we may anticipate romantic encounters of Arhi.
wow love them both.
waiting for the next😍
and verses from Louis Armstrong are very beautiful too.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wow sanchita!!
i loved this part and their meeting.
It was natural and totally non-filmy!!
i liked the way you linked up the story.
Khushi doesnt know her best friend has a brother in London.. Interesting. Small world it is!!!

Please continue soon!!!
Want to see this part take shape...

You are amazingly talented. You think of so many scenarios in such a short span!!! 🤗

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