Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 3 ~ Last Pt 60 Pg 27 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
I know I know.. u all wanna through chappals at me.. and I'll not stop you.. cause I know it was my mistake..
But actually mai bhi kya karti.. I was really not at all free.. plz plz forgive me..
And guys.. one imp thing.. I have cut that anni missing wala part.. and u know me really senti cause kasak is ending..
Ok baki ka bhashan baad me.. here u go with the update..


LAST PART 60

All ladies applied haldi & then anni took her to her room. Her face glowed even more after the bath. Anni again teased her' bhabhi bhai tho aapko dekhte hi reh jayenge..
She just blushed
Geet'
anni aaj ke liye bahut nahi ho gaya.. ab itna bhi mat feko
Anni' yeh lo.. bhabhi mai fek thodi na rahi hun.. aap kaho tho bhai se puchva dun
Geet pulled her back'
ab nahi nahi anni.. uski kya zarurat hai.. mujhe tum par bharosa hai na
They both giggled & anni told her to rest for a while because then she had to get ready.

Geet was all ready for full-filling her dream in just few hrs. All those feeling that she had inside her were difficult to be described. She was happy.. happy more than anyone to get her prince charming.. her Maan. But she was scared.. after all that she had faced in her life.. after losing her loved ones.. her family.. she never wanted to lose him. He was the only reason because of which she was alive today. She would have been long ago broken, if he wouldn't have been there to console her. And may be she'd had not been alive today if he wasn't with her. She coloudn't thank god enough for sending maan in her life.

Anni snapped her out' kahan kho gaye the bhabhi
Geet' nahi anni.. bas yunhi..
Anni' yunhi tho nahi.. yah I know it.. u were thinking abt ur prince charming.. haina..
Geet blushed..
Anni' So.. is bhai really a prince charming.. or should I say is he ur prince charming..
Geet' Ofcorce anni.. he is my prince charming.. mere sapnon ka rajkumar.. jiske mai hamesha se sapne dekhti thi.. I cannot thank babaji enough for sending maan in my life.. he is my everything.. if he is then I am..
Anni' bas bas bhabhi.. I'm wondering how can u love him so much.. I mean do u think he loves u this much.. nahi nahi.. unka pyar aapke pyar se tho kam hi hoga..
She immidiately put up a fight'
bilkul nahi anni.. balki he loves me more.. just that he is not that good at defining his feelings to others.. par mai janti hun.. jitna pyar woh mujhse karte hain na.. I can't even try to reciprocate it..
Anni' Wow.. bhabhi.. waise ek baat puchun.. aap dono.. I mean how did u fell in love with bhai.. I mean wo tho.. he is such a.. she was struggling with words.. when geet helped her
Dusht danav?
Anni' exactly..
Geet'
Mai bhi jab unse mili tho yahi sochti thi.. but u destiny.. babaji kuch bhi kar sakte hain.. & the kasak that I.. actually we both went through.. it all made us fall in love..
Anni' Kasak? kaisi kasak bhabhi?
Geet closed her eyes & all she could see was him'
Anni.. kasak.. this kasak still haunts me.. this kasak can never end.. just that now it is embedded in our lives as love.. kasak woh ehsaas hai jise maine hamesha mitne ki koshish ki.. but I never succeeded.. & today I thank babaji for not letting me succeed in ending it.. even today when I cloe my eyes.. I can see him.. even when I know he is always with me.. but still agar woh kabhi dur hote hain.. tho this kasak haunts me.. anni.. this is one of the feeling that I have treasured.. & I'm so happy that it came to me.. actually to us.. me & maan.. & see today it is making us one..
Anni' Bhabhi.. I never knew love could be this deep.. I'm really falling for ur & bhai's love story.. kash mujhe bhi aise hi mere sapnon ka rajkumar mila hota.. I also wanted to feel this kasak..
Geet' ek min ek min.. mila hota matlab.. when did u met ur sapnon ka rajkumar.. m I missing out anything?
Anni's face became red' bhabhi.. woh.. actually
Geet'
tell me the name..
Anni' bhabhi.. aisa kuch nahi
Geet' Plz anni bata na..
Anni' Ok but promise me ki aap bhai ko nahi batayoge..
Geet' acha baba.. but ab tho bol..
Anni' woh.. his name is gaurav rathode.. bhai ke hi client hain
Geet'
Mr. Rathode.. r u kidding me
Anni' nahi bhabhi.. why wud I..
Geet' pagli I saw maan was very uncomfortable in his presence.. aur tu usi se..
Anni' bhabhi.. why r u scaring me..

He pulled her ears' she is saying the truth..
Anni' bhai!!
Maan' tu mujhe pehle nahi bata sakti thi.. I saw him following u that day.. & he had ur & geet's pic in his hand.. & I misunderstood him.. tabhi I was being so protective abt geet.. oh god anni.. tu nahi bachegi ab..
Anni' Bhai wo tho.. it was our first meeting.. & wo pic galti se unke paas aa gayi.. he was trying to return it to me.. bas
Geet' ek min ek min.. maan thats why u were so uncomfortable with him.. but woh kal phone pe kis se baat..
Maan' detective.. I was worried for u..he made a baby face
Geet' oh god maan.. & woh out of station..
Maan'
usi din tho I saw him.. tho bas I went behind him.. but mujhe kuch aisa nahi mila.. that could have helped me..
Anni' bhai.. but ab to aapko unse kuch problem nahi hogi na.. she said timidly..
He started at her giving her the 'sak kuch clear ho gaya hai but u never told me' wala look
Anni' plz plz plz plz plz bhai
Maan just melted & hugged her' okay!!
Anni' I love u bhai!!
Maan looked at geet.. she whispered' I love u too
He could not do much but smile..

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They sat in the mandap after exchanging garlands. The mantras started & with each passing moment they could see their dream coming true.. their kasak being successful. They took the feras promising eachother to be with eachother always and forever. He put the sindoor in her maang & tied the mangalsutra in her neck, which made her blush making her look even more beautiful.

After all the rituals were completed he took her into THEIR room, carrying her in his arms. She hid her face in his embrace trying to register that she has just got all the happiness in her life. And was abt to be his.. forever.


She opened her eyes next morning to find her in his embrace. The closeness reminded her of the last night.. she could not do much but blush.

Maan' do u know how tempting u look like this.. his eyes were still closed
Geet' How can u see me with closed eyes..
Maan' because I love u..
She hugged him.. like never before.. just showing that how much she respected this closeness of them..
I love u too

They slept for a little long. How peaceful it felt in eachothers embrace like heaven. They could not thank god enough for making them one forever.


Finally their kasak came to an end.. or should I say it never came to an end. Just that it made them one & got embedded in their lives.. their memories forever!!


A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.

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Ok guys.. so this was the end of kasak.. maan's kasak.. geet's kasak.. maaneet's kasak..
And I hope.. all those who didn't knew the meaning of kasak.. got it after reading my FF.. cause even I didn't knew what kasak actually meant before I wrote it..
And I know u will again wanna through chappals at me.. and this time too I will allow u to do so.. cause I know its because u loved kasak.. & me.. right??
Guys.. I'm really senti.. and if I go on writing this I'll take I donno how much threads to write it.. but in all.. kasak was the first time I wrote anything.. and then I made so many friends on IF.. plus I had become a senior member while writing kasak.. I still remember that!!
I will really really miss kasak & u all..
Plus guys.. one more imp thing.. uff this is the third time when ur gonna slipper me.. okay so.. I'm gonna end teri yaaden soon.. and I don't have an idea abt when m I gonna update.. I'm hell busy.. I know my sorry is not at all enough.. but plz plz.. sorry..


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Plz plz give me my likes and comments
This is the last part so I want everyone to participate.. and the silent readers too..

Love yah all.. & will miss u all
Mahima

Edited by mahimak - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yuppiee
me first
its really gud
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Posted: 13 years ago
Second :D OH MY GOSH tht was just AMAZING !! I loved ur KASAK and MAANEET's KASAK haiii (; seriously u are one fab writer thank u for this KASAK and the pm's :) and I understand update whenever u can (=
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Posted: 13 years ago
me 2nd. it was really good. can i gv u a punishment for gving late update i.e., plz gv the epilogue of kasak.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dh_riti

me 2nd. it was really good. can i gv u a punishment for gving late update i.e., plz gv the epilogue of kasak.



Your punishment is most welcomed.. I'll surely give an epilouge soon.. may be tom or day after tom latest :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg mahi awesoem update
but so bad of u yaar i was expecting more update for this ff
and seriously gonna kill u for ending this ff
i will damn miss this ff badly yaar
but it was too good while reading u know i fall for it
thanx for update and pm sweet heart
Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear very beautiful i loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it mahima
was waiitng for kasak for a long time
shall always remember kasak ...
an wat about u so busyy
exams hai kya ??????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing it was. Loved it. Hope to see you soon with another maaneet ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb one n pls write epilogue for kasak eagerly waiting for that n hats off to u for ur ff n ur hardwork for ff

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