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Bye_Bye_if

@Bye_Bye_if

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#451

Part 15

Awesome update

Loved it

Haha geet was telling her that he's wrong...

Good that she, herself got that she shouldn't said that

I love the way Maan told her that she's also his punishment

And he dint slept peacefully... sab kuch hotey hue bhi feeling incomplete etc...

And they slept for 8 hrs...

Ok Maan was in love with her but how come geet slept in arms of a devil... she doesn't have any feeling for

Yaar please make some soft corners in geet heart for Maan for quite some time at least... you made him vulnerable to her for just 2 lines then the same hatred... increase the melting geet text to some more lines or one or two para...

Ok just for her he is going to give pick n drop for all secretaries... good

Why he was so hastily sending her back...

Looks like he wanted to think about that how he could sleep so peacefully and she isn't punishment

I am so in love with the devil now...

Continue soon

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@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#452

wow yu have fantastic imagination

poor maan craving for love ,warm & touch

like a new baby

love how they slept 8 whole hrs peacefully

oh oh geet telling yash & pari

she is gonner pay a heavy price

i'm falling for this FF everytime read it

waiting next

God bless yu

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#453

ossum dear

superb

what to his next move dear

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#454

wow annie...
what an update.
yeh maan ke demands toh din bhar din badthi jaa rahi hai...
but loved the update..
the simply demand of him wanting to sleep with her shows his loneliness and craving for love...it was touching...
but unfortunately geet is not able to see beyond the mask of the devil, there lies a man who is lonely and craves for some love..
for some reason i found this update very endearing...
will b waiting for next part to kno..what u have in store for these two
keep writing
love u
reva

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Opaldews

@Opaldews

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#455

Just read all the updates...=]
omg i missed them like hell..=P

eshh man the story goin' amazingly interesting..=D
haee the limit he's obeyin' on GEET's lie makin' me confused..=S em scared, what will MAAN do if he come to know bout GEET's fake promise..shit..=/

haeee he slept with her finally...*me dancin' in joy* =D
actually i was with MAAN on that..LOL..=P

aww waitin' for the pain what he's hidin' and yes the helplessness..=/
unfold this soOn..=)
happiee that GEET also felt his pain or may be got confuse, whatever it was *me likes* =P

and yes from now on you will see my comments regularly hunnie..=D
Xx..<3 =]