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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

my...my...

simply awsum concept yaar...

loved it alot...

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...


hey anu thnk u so much for u'r comment😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: kashabhiya4ever

really luv da concept.. its unique! feel sooo sorry for shonu nd shona but hope saink happens nd she comes back to lyf! great work!😃


thnx dear 😊
dnt feel sry wait for the next part😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

awesome do continue soon


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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

ashi...saturday ho gaya...update...


yes swearthrt the update is on its way😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsum fic
Add me to ur pm list plz:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_shilpa

awsum fic
Add me to ur pm list plz:-)


thnx dear😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

NOTE…………………….

IN STARTING THE FEW PARAS ARE FROM THE BOOK " I TOO HAD A LOVE STORY" BY RAVINDER SINGH…..

Sumthing heavy stuck my heart, a terrible blow. My eyes widned , I froze.. sumkind of coldness crawled widin me…….. my muscle could not move. My heart seemed to alternately stop beating n pumo furiously. My brain went numb. I lost control over myself n the echo of that message beat against my eardrum……….


Sumhow the days were ending n the nights were arriving…… while I wished her soul rest in peace my own soul within was restless…….. I tried to sleep but sleep seemed to be far away from me….. images from the past that I spent wid her kept running through my mind….


SHE DIED I SURVIED, COZ I SURVIED I DIED EVERYDAY



I was bound by my stars to live a lonely life. Though the fact is its jus "she" who is gone n everything is same. But this everything means nothing to me…..


Recalling sumthing bout her u happen to laugh n in no moment even as u laugh u taste u'r own tears…… I miss her. Her talks, her voice, her smell, her smile, her love everything. The more u want to avoid romance around u the more u will found it…. It will torchure u…..u will see the couple doing things that u sumday did wid u'r beloved.. you will feel the pain… n u'r heart will bleed……..


Nothing exists u , even u'r sexual desire goes into hibernation….. while working out in gym u will try to lift the heaviest weight …. Later standing under the shower u will cry hard but no body will hear u………


You will search n consume anything that can erase u'r memory…….. n believe u'r life will appear wrose than death……


How I wanted to hug her…. To smell her….. to love her….. to cuddle up wid her…. To hear "I LOVE U TOO" from her voice……


I can feel u'r warmth in my arms

I can smell the fragrance in u'r hair

I can hear u'r wondrous laughter

I suddenly realize that it was a dream

I cannot feel u'r warmth

I cannot smell u'r hair

I cannot hear u'r laughter

I MISS U SOOO MUCH


5 YEARS LATER

I was not that old Armaan anymore…… of course I couldn't be that Armaan , whome shilpa love more than her life………


He killed shilpa, he killed her trust……. N I killed the Armaan who killed shilpa….


Wondering what bout sid???? Sid is happily married to ridhima….. shilpa's younger sister….. after knowing that shilpa is married to me sid tried to get close to shilpa….. to make her understand that she still love him….. but shilpa never paid any heed to it……. But at that moment ridhima was the one who helped him to move on in his life.. shilpa helped the two to confess their feeling to each other….


That day when I saw shilpa hugging sid it was not bcoz she cheated me…… it was bcoz sid was finally happy…… sid n ridhima were finally one……..



After that incident ridhima hated me….. well I deserved it…. Well sid was a support me….. maybe he saw me dying every moment widout shilpa……


How I hates myself, how I wanted to say sry to her….. to hug her n ccry my heart out…… how I wanted to kill myself for misunderstanding her….


But no!!!!!!!!!!!!!! death was not a soln to my problems… my punishment was my life which was already hell widout shilpa in it….. I had to live my life to punish myself…..


How I wished that I would have given her a single chance to explain….. or would have trusted her fully…… then today I wouldn't have been alone…… my family would have been wid me……

Me , my baby , my shilpa……………

But now this is a shattered dream………..


I loaded myself wid work so that I dnt have time to curse myself for the destruction that I caused…… still shilpa was always in my mind…….


Well going to London for a conference….. sid n ridhima settled there after their marriage….. Armaan said nothing to them about his arrival……………


The moment my feet touched the land of London there was a certain wave of satisfaction within me….. as if everything was going to be alright…… my life would get a new reason to live, a reason to smile, a reason to love…..


I brushed my thoughts away and made my way towards the hotel…..


The conference went good….. my smile didn't leave my Face for a second ……. Well the reason???? Its still unknown to me……

Girl:- dekh ke nai chal sakte??? Meli teaddy beal ko chot lag gayi…..


Armaan saw a cute girl of around 4 years satnding in front of her wid hands on her hips n anger in her eyes….. instantly shilpa angery face came flashing in front of him…… he smiled at her n sat on his knees…


Ar:- m sorry…… (she smiled)

Sumthing in that girl attracted Armaan towards her….. her blue eyes n her dimples smile………

Girl:- tumne mele teady ko chot lagaya…. Ushey sholly bolo….

Ar:- sholly teaddy (while holding his ears)

Ok aab apana naam batao…………..

Girl:- AAHANA!!!!!!!


Sumthing struck him…. He had decided wid shilpa that she would name their girl child aahana………


Tears made its way from his eyes….. a tiny hand came upto him wiping away his tears………

Aahana:- ok bye mujhe jana hai…… mamma aati hogi….

Ar:- ok bye…


She turned to go n Armaan too…… a cool breeze passed making him shiver….. his feet almost gave up n he stood still there…… he felt sum sensation, restlessness. For sum unknown reason he turned back….


He saw Aahana hugging sumone n shouting "mamma ice cream plz" …….. He couldn't see her as her back was towards him…….


And then I saw her……. I froze…… everything around me started to revolve….. I felt dizzy……………

WHAT WAS THAT??????


Finally the part is updated….. so sry for being so late….

Thnks for u'r comment n hitting the like button….

omg !!!!!!!!!!😲😲 53 likes???? m i dreaming???😍

m sooo thnk full to u all for liking my work...

Do comment on this part too….. n hit the like tab... it means a lot to me...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ashi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1st time in my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



hey ashi,kahan se start karun samajh nahi aata...kya ye meri choti si sis hai,jisne ye part likha hai?tumhe to 53 kya 100% like tabs milenge...end shayd mujhe aur "arsh" fan ko pata hai,shilpa lover kabhi shilpa ko mar nahi sakti,but tumhare likhne ka tarika...kahan se kis tarah lines chunkar likhna chahiye,ye tumhe achchi tarh pata hai...ek story kaise khubsurat ban sakti hai,ye tumhe pata hai...shayad yahi wazah hai ki tumhari innocent ff hot,romantic ff ko bhi beat kar jati hai...

tumhari ff jindagi banati hai...jindagi ki kahaniya banati hai..jindagi kis tarah khubsurat banti hai sikhati hai...ye tumhare dill ke jo jazbaat hain,story likhne ki jo art tumhe god gifted mili hai,usey khatm mat hone dena...

the best lines...


Recalling sumthing bout her u happen to laugh n in no moment even as u laugh u taste u'r own tears…… I miss her. Her talks, her voice, her smell, her smile, her love everything.

Nothing exists u , even u'r sexual desire goes into hibernation….. while working out in gym u will try to lift the heaviest weight …. Later standing under the shower u will cry hard but no body will hear u………


You will search n consume anything that can erase u'r memory…….. n believe u'r life will appear wrose than death……


How I wanted to hug her…. To smell her….. to love her….. to cuddle up wid her…. To hear "I LOVE U TOO" from her voice……








waiting eagerly for next part...love u...


ur di


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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor armaan
sooo sad
loved da entry of aahana
was aahana mum shilpa
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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