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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
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PART 36

Evening

Geet: Ek kaam karti hoon raat ka khana order kar dethi hoon kyunki Maan Sir ek baar kaam karne lag jaate hai tab unhe waqt ka koi hosh nahi rehta

Geet: Unhe bhooke rehne ka shokh hoga magar mujhe nahi waise bhi khana mangwane mein harz hi kya hai agar kaam jaldi ho gaya toh ghar jaakar kha lungi aur agar der ho gayi toh yahi peth puja kar lungi

Geet: Haan yahi thik hai

She picks up the phone and orders food

After some time everyone leaves

Maan: Geet chalo kaam ki shuruwat karte hai

Geet: Ji Sir

Maan: Waha kaha jaa rahi ho Geet?

Geet: Aapke cabin mein Sir

Maan: Geet hum waha nahi balki ek dusare room mein kaam kar rahe hai

Geet: Dusare room mein kyun Sir?

Maan: Uss room mein blueprints bade aasani se rakh sakthe hai aur waha humare zarurat ka sara saaman hai

Geet: Thik hai Sir

Maan: Toh chalo

Maan and Geet enter the room

Maan: Kya hua Geet? kahi tumhe mere saath akele mein darr toh nahi lag raha?

Geet: Nahi Sir darr tho begano se lagtha hai aap toh mere….

Maan: Main toh tumhara…

Geet: Aap toh mere boss hai na aap koi ajnabee thodi na ho

Maan: Haan… thik hai

Geet: Waise Sir agar aapko mujhse darr lag raha ho toh batadijiye

Maan: MSK

Geet: Kisi se nahi darta

Both of them start laughing

Maan: Geet ab kaam shuru kare

Geet: Sir ek minute mujhe bhook lag rahi hai

Maan: Geet itne jaldi abhi toh humhe puri raat baitkar kaam karna hai aur waise bhi maine khane ka koi intezaam nahi kiya

Geet: Jaanthi thi isliye maine khana pehle se mangwaliya tha aur haan ek baar aap kaam shuru karoge toh aapke chakkar mein mujhe bhi bhooke rehna padega

Geet: Isliye pehle khana kha lethe hai phir kaam karenge

Maan: Thik hai tum khana kha lo main kaam karta hoon

Geet: Sirf main nahi balki aap bhi mere saath khana khaoge chaliye

Maan: Geet mujhe bhook nahi hai

Geet: Thik hai agar aap nahi khaoge toh mujhe bhi nahi khana

Maan: Geet tum bhi na..achha chalo main bhi khata hoon

Geet opens the parcel

Maan:Ye toh parathe hai

Geet: Haan toh?

Maan: Main ye sab nahi khatha mujhe Italian dishes pasand hai

Geet: Ofho Sir next time Italian dish order kar lungi abhi ye kha lijiye. Parathe bade hi lazeez lag rahe hai

Maan: Nahi main toh Italian dish hi khaunga

Geet: Main bhi dekhthi hoon aap ye kaise nahi khate

Geet takes a piece of the paratha dips it in curd and offers it to Maan

Geet: Lijiye Sir itne pyar se khila rahi hoon kya aap ab bhi nahi khaoge

Maan opened his mouth and happily accepted the paratha

Now it was Maan's turn he also did the same thing

Geet was really happy

Dono ek duje ko khana khilathe hai

Finally the dinner was over

Maan and Geet start working

They start discussing each and every minute detail related to the project

Many a times they ended up fighting

They were enjoying each other's company

They were unaware that someone else was also watching them

Maan: Geet ek file hai jisme maine ek similar kaam kiya tha

Geet: Sir wo file store room mein hai

Maan: Thik hai main usse lekar aata hoon

Geet: Sir main le aathi hoon mujhe pata hai wo file kaha hai

Maan: Thik hai

Geet gets up

But Maan suddenly remembers Arjun and the storeroom incident

Maan: Nahi Geet tum waha akeli nahi jaaogi main bhi tumhare saath chaltha hoon

Geet: (thinking) inhe achanak kya ho gaya

Maan: Geet chale

Geet: Ji

Both of them leave their mobile in the room

Geet opens the storeroom but she does not remove the key from the key hole

Maan by mistake closes the door now both Maan n Geet are locked in the store room

Maan: Ye store room ki kya halat hai lagta hai maine yuhi logo ko kaam pe rakha hai sab ek number k kamchor hai

Geet was not listening

She was recollecting the unfortunate incident

Maan was continuously blaming the workers

But Geet continued walking

Geet picked up a cloth that was lying in one corner of the storeroom

This was a piece of her torn kurti

She couldn't control her tears she started crying

Maan: Geet tum sun rahi ho main kya keh raha hoon

Maan: Geet main tumse baat kar raha hoon

Maan Geet ki taraf badtha hai

He places his hand on her shoulder

Geet immediately turns around her eyes were full of fear

Maan: Geet kya hua tum thik toh ho na

Geet hugs Maan and starts crying

Maan: Geet rona bannd karo mujhe batau kya hua main tumhe rothe hue nahi dekh saktha

Geet hugged him tightly

Maan noticed the kurti and understood everything

His blood was boiling he wanted to kill Arjun there and then

Maan: Geet mujhe maaf kar dho

Geet still does not break the hug

Geet: Aap kyun maafi maang rahe ho?

Maan : Ye sab meri wajah se hua uss din naahi main tumhe storeroom bhejtha aur naahi wo hadsa hotha

Geet: ismein aapki koi galti nahi Maan

Maan: nahi Geet galti meri hi hai tumhare inn khoobsurat aakhon mein agar aasu hai ghabrahat hai toh uske liye kahi na kahi main bhi zimedaar hoon

Geet: Nahi Maan balki uss din maine aapka ek naya roop dekha mujhe pata nahi tha k aapko meri itni fikr hai agar wo haadsa nahi hotha toh shayad main ye baat kabhi samaj bhi nahi paati

Maan: Geet ab tumhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai tumhari zindagi mein aise karodo Arjun kyun na aajaye unhe pehle mera saamna karna padega mere rehthe tumhara koi baal bhi baaka nahi kar saktha

Geet: Jaanti hoon mujhe aappar bharosa hai

Maan and Geet break the hug

Maan caresses her face and wipes her tears

He kisses her eyes

Maan: Ab main inn aakhon mein aasu nahi dekhna chahtha

Geet nods her head and started blushing

Maan: Geet hum yaha ek file dhundne aaye the right?

Geet: Haan wo file maine yaha dekhi thi

Geet goes and removes the file

Geet: Ye lijiye Sir

Maan: Chale

Geet: Ji Sir

Maan: Ye darwaza kyun nahi khul raha. Geet chabi dho

Geet: Sir chabi toh maine darwaze pe hi rakh diya tha

Maan: Geet laparwahi ki hadh hothi hai chabi apne paas rakhna chahiye tha na darwaze pe rakhne ko kisne kaha

Geet: Ye lo isse kehthe hai chori upar se seena jori aap pehle mujhe ye bataiye k aapko kisne kaha tha k aap darwaza bannd kare

Maan: Wo galti se bannd ho gaya

Geet: Aa… aa…aa… aa…. aap kare toh galti aur koi aur kare toh laparwahi kya baat hai

Maan: Mujhe tumse behes nahi karni hai

Geet: Mujhe bhi aapse baat karne mein koi interest nahi hai

Geet opens the window

Watchman was listening songs

Geet: Hello koi hai Mr. Watchman humhe yaha se bahar nikaliye

Maan: Geet chilana bannd karo watchman ka toh pata nahi magar mere kaan zarur phat rahe hai tumhari cheek se

Geet: Achha agar aapko mere chilane se itni hi problem hai tho aap aawaz lagayiye

Maan: Haan thik hai…. Hello koi hai …hello

Geet: Mujhe chakar aa raha hai

Maan: (scared) Geet kya hua tumhe chakkar kyun aa raha hai

Geet: main thik hoon magar aapki tabiyat kharab lag rahi hai

Maan: Ye kaunsi nayi nautanki hai?

Geet: Nautanki toh aap kar rahe ho… yun toh humesha logo se chillakar baat karte ho as if saamnewala behra ho aur aaj jab actually chillane ki zarurat hai toh hello hello kiye jaa rahe ho who bhi itne dheeme aawaz mein k mujhe sunai nahi de raha toh uss bechare watchman ko kaise sunaiye padega

Geet: Aap zara hatiye main batathi hoon chillana kise kehthe hai aakir aapse kuch toh seekh hi chuki hoon

Geet screams loudly

Maan covers her mouth with his hand

Maneet eyelock

Maan: Chup bilkul chup

Geet removes his hand

Geet: Aap toh baat hi mat kijiye hum dono yaha aaphi ki wajah se phasse hai

Maan: mujhe bhi tumse baat nahi karna

Geet: Achha hai kumse kum thodi der shanti toh milegi

Maan: Geet

Geet: Jaanthi hoon mera naam Geet hai aapko mujhe baar baar ye yaad dilane ki zarurat nahi hai

Geet: Iss kabadkhane mein koi candle hai ya nahi

Maan: Candle ki kya zarurat hai lights haina

Geet: Lights ka kya bharosa kisi bhi waqt gul ho sakthi hai

Maan: Jab bhi bologi ulta hi bologi kyun?

Geet: Dhust Danav

Geet finds a candle and a match box and keeps it on the table

Maan: Geet ab ghurna bannd karo

Geet: Kyun ghoorne ka haq kya sirf aaphi ko hai

Maan: Main ghoortha hoon

Geet: Haan wo bhi apne inn darawani aakhon se

Maan : Geet tumne meri aakhon ko dubara darawana kaha toh dekh lena

Geet: Kahungi ek baar nahi sau baar kahungi kya kar lenge aap?

Maan: Kya karlunga…

Saying so he starts moving towards Geet and as usual Geet starts stepping back

For the remaining part refer the next post

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Geet finally tumbled on the couch and since Maan was also standing very close in an attempt to save her from falling he too landed on the couch

Maan was on top of Geet and his hands were covering her mouth

Ussi waqt radio par agla song start ho jaata hai

Bahar se koi andar na aa sake (both of them become alert)

Andar se koi bahar na jaa sake (There was sudden tension and nervousness in between the two)

Socho kabhi aisa ho toh kya ho? (Maan could feel Geet's trembling lips on his warm hands)

Socho kabhi aisa ho toh kya ho? (The touch of her soft wet lips were driving Maan crazy)

Hum tum..emm..emm' (He slowly started removing his hand)

Ek kamre mein bannd ho ( As his hands were moving he gently touched her lips with his fingers in a passionate way)

Aur chabi kho jaaye ( Geet was slowly losing control)

Hum Tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur chabi kho jaaye ( Maan's touch were playing havoc with her senses )

Tere naino ki bhul bhulaiya mein Bobby kho jaaye (After removing his hand he started looking deeply in her eyes)

Hum Tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur chabi kho jaaye ( He slowly moved his hand and carefully rested it on her back)

Aage ho ghanghor andhera (he started caressing her back making different patterns with his fingers)

Baba mujhe darr lagta hai (He started placing wet kisses on her neck. It was becoming more and more difficult for Geet to resist his touch)

Peeche koi daku lutera ( He slowly started lifting her kurti)

Hmm.. kyun dara rahe ho ( Geet was really nervous she wanted to stop maan but there was a part of her mind that wanted to allow maan to do whatever he felt like doing)

Aage ho ghanghor andhera peeche koi daaku lutera ( She moved her head on one side giving more access to Maan. He continued planting kisses on every bare part of her skin that was accessible to him)

Upar bhi jaana ho mushkil neeche bhi jaana ho mushkil (In an attempt to control her new found emotions she pressed her nails on his shoulder. Maan realized his mistake and tried to get up )

Socho kabhi aisa ho tho kya ho socho kabhi aisa ho toh kya ho? (The couch was very small and maan was holding geet with one of his hands he lost his balance in an attempt to get up and landed on the floor)

Hum tum'' (now Geet was on top of Maan)

Kahi ko jaa rahe ho aur rasta bhool jaaye (There was a sudden urge for both of them to feel each other to know each other better)

O..ho'( Maan once again lost control and started touching her passionately )

Hum tum kahi ko jaa rahe ho aur rasta bhool jaaye (Geet too started responding and slowly started approaching his lips)

Teri baiyaan k jhoole mein saiyaan bobby jhool jaaye (But before they could seal the distance with a kiss lights went off)

Hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur chabi kho jaaye (This brought both of them back to their senses)

Basti se dur parbat k peeche (Geet immediately got up and stood at a good distance from Maan)

Masti mein chur ghane pedo k neeche (Maan too tried to maintain some distance)

Andheki anjaani jagah ho (Geet took the match box and lighted the candle)

Bus ek hum ho aur duji hawa ho (Maan turns around and he could not stop himself from staring at the angelic face of Geet which was glowing even more in the candle light)

Socho kabhi aisa ho tho kya ho socho kabhi aisa ho toh kya ho? (Geet once again becomes nervous when she realizes that Maan is admiring her constantly with a totally different emotion that did not go unnoticed by her)

Hum tum ek jungle se guzare aur sher aa jaaye (She was melting with every gaze of his it seemed that his eyes were directly communicating with her heart and her heart was ready to become his slave ' her heart was craving for his one touch and was willing to do everything for him'.just for him)

Hum tum ek jungle se guzare aur sher aa jaye (She tried to move ahead but her finger was slightly burned due to the flame of the candle)

Sher se main kahu tumhe chod de mujhe kha jaaye (Maan immediately rushed and took her finger in his hand and started blowing air)

Hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur chabi kho jaaye ( This simple gesture of his was enough to generate goose bumps throughout her body. Unknowingly she rested her head on Maan's chest )

Aise kyun khoye khoye ho? (The touch of her soft skin on his chest had a dramatic effect on him. He brought his face close to hers and started caressing it with his face. She could feel the warmth of his breath which brought her back to her wits)

Jaage ho k soye hue ho? (She tried to remove her hand from his grip. Maan left her hand Geet starts moving in a backward direction but she was still facing Maan. Maan was standing there he did not move. Both were trying to read each other's eyes)

Kya hoga kal kisko khabar hai thoda sa mere dil mein ye darr hai (Maan realized that Geet was heading towards a place where the curtains were not properly fixed. He started going towards Geet)

Socho kabhi aisa ho tho kya ho socho kabhi aisa ho toh kya ho? (Geet became nervous and started taking quick steps)

Socho kabhi aisa ho tho kya ho socho kabhi aisa ho toh kya ho? (The curtain along with the handle falls down)

Hum tum yuhi has khel rahe ho aur aakh bhar aaye (Maan holds geet with one hand and with the other hand holds the handle)

Tere sar ki kasam tere gham se bobby mar jaaye' (Both of them once again fall down and the curtains were on top of them)

Hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur chabi kho jaaye (Their eyes which were full of desires meet)

Tere naino ki bhul bhulaiya mein Bobby kho jaaye (Maan throws the handle on one side and places his hand on her waist)

Hum tum ( Geet encircles her arm around his neck)

Hum tum ( Her lips were trembling )

ek kamre mein bannd ho (She closed her eyes)

ek kamre mein bannd ho (Maan was urgently feeling a need to capture those beautiful lips of hers)

aur chabi kho jaaye (Their lips are just an inch away from each other' this had been their first kiss but'.)

aur chabi kho jaaye (Lights were back'the brightness forced them to open their eyes )

Both of them were embarrassed due to their proximity. None of them spoke a word. They got up and Maan went and closed the window.

Maan: Geet tum waha so jaao main yaha so jaata hoon waise bhi subah tak hum chahkar bhi iss kamre se bahar nahi jaa sakthe

Geet: Ji Sir

Maan closes his eyes and goes off to sleep Geet too dozes off

Maan opens his eyes after some time and notices Geet in an uncomfortable position he goes and sits besides Geet and gives her head the support of his shoulders After sometime he falls asleep

PRECAP: Geet meets Arjun 😲😲Shocked

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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hey me first lovely update
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me second not first😭...chalo koi baat nahi...
didi itni lambi ipdate...yeppiii
it tooo
much mindblowing..
every thing is soo perfect...pucho mat...
i can say outstanding
maaneet ka dinner kitna acha tha...dono ne ek dusre ko khelaya...great one...
in song
ur collection of pics with song line is just rocking...
every pic and maaneet movement match with song..so perfectly..
precap is😭
cont sooon
waiting eagerly for more.
love u alot...
ur's khushi
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oooh!!! Maaneet romance... drove me crazy and so did the caps! part before the songs... brought smile to my lips! Maan-Geet equation is sabse anokha in this world!!! I love their talks... Maan cares about Geet!!! store room scene!! made me 🤪🤪 crazy...!!!! I have gone mad!!!!! want more of it...!!!

so greedy!!!

shivu needs more MAANEET!!!! MAANEET!!!! 🤪
oye me third!!!! 🤪 lolz bhul gayi!!!

Precap is scary... but I know Maan would do anything to save his Geet!!!

more more more Maaneet!!!!!!!! 🤪
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago
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SOOO AWESOMEEE
cont soon PLEASEEE
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely😊
pix were nice 😊

what geet n arjun meet 😲 oh no
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing luved it
do continue soon

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