NewFF(Maneet) Mere Humsafar Thrd3 Upd prt 39 pg143 - Page 51

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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all three parts together dear
wonderfull updates...
Maaneet moments WOW!!!!
Beautiful...
Now I think story is going to take turn... per Maaneet should keep their faith on each other...
Thanks for wonderfull updates Dear
luv
--anu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful part!
Maaneet's eyelock convo was super romantic n cute...
Maan caring 4 geet was SWEET...
Luved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update maaneet eyelock wow amazing love it bt da stupid arjun back😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry di late for comment..😭..
but update ajj bahot jyada achi thi...i dont explain in words ki kitne achi thi...
it s mindblowing,awesome,superb etc etc...
most lovely,touchy and beautiful part is maaneet thinking...
its is soo brillantly write...
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i love it alot.
bilkul asli lag raha tha...😳
u always prove it that ur a brillant writter...😊
dev,daadi,ani ko kho maaneet ko samjne ke kosish na hi kare...kyunki vo to khud apne ap nahi samte...to ye 3no kase samjege...
sabse hatred part...arjun...he is devil😡...agar mere hath me a jae to me use mar dalo...
cont soon...but pehle apna khaal rakhega...
u know na ur precious for me...
love u alot di...
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update. Dono kitne confusion me he..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

what is that arjun upto ...

i want all his plans to fail n back fire ;;;;;;
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely ff
just read all the updates

i hope arjun does not succeed n maneet story moves ahead
add me in ur pm list

shruti
Edited by shruti_ms - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 34
Next morning

Maan gets ready for office

He opens his window and automatically his eyes move towards the outhouse

Geet had just taken a bath and she was drying her hair

Maan was mesmerized by her beauty

Maan: (self talk) Geet k chehre pe ye paani ki bunde kisi phool par oas ki bundo se bhi zyaada khoobsurat rag rahi hai

He keeps on admiring Geet

Geet looks in the direction where Maan was standing

Maneet eyelock

Maahi ...Maahi...

Maan felt like teasing her

He took his mobile and typed a message

Maan via his hand gesture signaled Geet to check her mobile

Geet gave a sweet smile to Maan and went inside to check the message

Geet was reading the message

Message " Geet tum koi jannat se utri hui pari nahi ho jo taiyaar hone mein itna time laga rahi ho waise bhi tum itni bhi haseen nahi k saare ladke tumhe dekhthe rahe issliye taiyaar hone mein itna time waste math karo aur 10 minute mein parking mein aa jao hum office k liye nikal rahe hai"

Geet: Mujhe laga shayad good morning likhkar bheja hoga magar nahi uss akdu insaan se main ye expect kaise kar sakthi hoon haina babaji

Maan: Ye abhi tak bahar kyun nahi aayi usne mera message toh pada hoga na

Geet gives an angry look to Maan and closes the door and window of the outhouse

Maan couldn't control his laughter

Geet goes and stands in front of the mirror

Geet: Mana k main koi pari nahi hoon magar itni bhi buri nahi hoon' haina

She takes the towel just then she receives a second message

She reads it. It was once again from Maan

Message: "Geet ab apne aap ko aaine k saamne niharna bannd karo aur jaldi se ready ho jaao aur haan ek baat toh main kehna hi bhool gaya itna bhi apne zulfo ko mat sukhako pata chala k tumhara wig sabke saamne nikalkar bahar aa jaaye"

Geet: Wig? Mere baal inhe wig lagte hai?

Geet: Babaji ye main kaha phas gayi iss insaan ka kuch nahi ho saktha ek bhi mauka wo nahi chodthe mujhe pareshan karne ka...ab najaane aaj unpar kaunsa bhooth chad gaya hai...ab main inka koi bhi message nahi uthaungi haan...

Geet: Chal Geet taiyar ho ja warna ek teesra message aa jaayega

Geet gets ready Maan was already waiting for her

Geet avoids Maan and directly goes and sits in the car

Maan was enjoying her childish behaviour

Maan starts the car

Maan: (thinking) Lagta hai sachmuch ruth gayi hai

Geet: (thinking) Ek baar bhi sorry nahi kaha maine ek dum sahi naam diya hai Dhust Danav

Maan: Geet...Geet

Geet: Dhust Danav

Maan: kya kaha tumne?

Geet: jo aapne suna

Maan: Geet tumne mujhe Dhust Danav kaha?

Geet: Haan magar lagtha hai ye word kafi chotha hai mujhe aapke liye koi naya naam dhundna hoga

Maan: Geet tumhe mujhse pange lene ka kuch zyaada shaukh hai kya?

Geet: Pange toh aap lethe ho khamkha mujhe pareshan karte rehthe ho

Maan: Magar maine ab kya kiya?

Geet: Babaji koi insaan itna dramebaaz kaise ho saktha hai... jaayiye main aapse koi baat nahi karungi

Maan: Geet suno toh

Geet does not reply

Maan: (thinking) Baat toh tumhe karna hi hoga main bhi dekhtha hoon tum kab tak chup baithi ho

KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS

Adi: Kya hua Geet badi upset lag rahi ho

Pinky: Lagta hai Maan Sir se phir se ladai ho gayi

Geet: (shouting) Pinky tujhe kya lagta hai main unse ladthi hoon haan bol

Geet: (shouting) Adi Sir aap bataiye kya main ladaku hoon kya mujhe kabhi gussa aata hai boliye

Maan was passing by

Maan: Unse kya puchthi ho Geet becharo k chehre dekho tumhara ye gussail roop dekhkar bechare darr k maare kaap rahe hai

Maan smiles and enters his cabin

Geet: Najane aaj mere saath kya ho raha hai har baat pe unki hi jeet ho rahi hai

Geet gives an angry look to Adi and Pinky and enters her cabin

Adi: Pinky aaj humhe Maan Sir aur Geet se dur hi rehna chahiye warna inke cold war mein hum khamakha bali k bakre ban jaayenge

Pinky: Ji Sir aap sahi keh rahe ho

Maan dials Geet's number

Geet picks up the call but does not speak anything

Maan: Geet sabko meeting k baare mein inform kar do hum 15 minute mein conference room mein mil rahe hai

Geet nods her head but does not utter a word

Maan: Aur haan Geet meri secretary ko ye bata dena k sahi time pe meeting k liye aajaaye wo kya hai na usse late entry maarne ka kuch zyaada hi shaukh hai

Geet disconnects the phone

Maan: Geet ko pareshan karne mein kafi maza aata hai

Conference Room

Adi: Aaj ki meeting ek special aur important project k baare mein discuss karne k liye bulayagaya hai

Adi: Constructions ki duniya ka sabse bada aur important project ek aisa project jise haasil karne k liye humare jaise kayi construction companies koshish kar rahe hai

Dev: Tum Chopra and son's k project ki baat kar rahe ho na?

Adi: Ji Dev sir

Maan was observing Geet

Maan: (thinking) Gusse se gaal pure phul chukhe hai magar gusse mein aur bhi zyaada pyaari lag rahi hai

Adi: Maan Sir aapne kaha tha k iss project k baare mein aap khud discuss karenge

Maan was busy admiring Geet

Adi: Maan Sir

Maan :Haan Adi

Adi: Sir aap discuss karnewale haina?

Maan: Haan off course

Maan: Toh jaise k aap logh ye jaante hai k ye kafi important project hai aur main chahtha hoon k ye project Khurana constructions ko hi mile

Maan: Ye project thoda alag hai jobhi companies iss project mein interested hai unhe ek plan taiyaar karna hoga aur ek tender bharna hoga jis company ka plan aur tender perfect hoga ye project ussi company ko milega

Maan: Iss project mein main personally kaam karunga aur koi ek mujhe assist karega

Geet: (thinking) Zaahir si baat hai wo main toh nahi hoon kyunki ab wo mere na bolne ka badla lenge khoob jaanti hoon unhe

Maan: Aur mere saath jo iss project mein kaam karega wo hai'

Everyone was looking at Maan with expectations except for Geet

Maan : Iss project mein Geet mere saath kaam karegi

Geet was surprised she looked at Maan

Maan was smiling

Maan: I hope Geet tumhe koi aitraaz nahi hai agar koi aitraaz hai toh abhi bol dho

Geet: Nahi Sir mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai

Maan : Good toh aap logh baaki projects par kaam kijiye iss project ko main aur Geet handle kar lenge

Everyone leaves

Maan comes near Geet and slowly moves towards her ear

Geet closes her eyes

Maan whispers huskily

Maan : Geet

Geet: Hmm...

Maan was really happy to see the effect that he has on Geet

Maan: Dekha maun vrat todhna pada ya nahi

Before Geet could realize what Maan said he kissed her cheeks and left the conference room

Geet opens her eyes but could not find Maan

Geet: Babaji najane unke kareeb hone par mujhe kya ho jaata hai ... Maine kya socha tha k unse baat nahi karungi magar unhone naa sirf mujhe bolne pe majboor kar diya balki mujhe kiss karke bhi chale gaye

Geet: Aww... Ek baar phir...maine aisa hone kaise diya ...aaj toh main unse puchkar hi rahungi

Meanwhile,

Arjun: Toh meeting ho gayi

Mystery person (from Maan's office) : Ji Sir Maan Sir ne Geet ko apne saath iss project mein kaam karne ko kaha hai

Arjun: Wo toh main pehle se hi jaanta tha Maan Geet k alawa kisi k baare mein soch hi nahi saktha khair maine jo cheez tumhe di hai jaante ho na uska kya karna hai

Mystery person: Ji aap fikr mat kijiye mujhe ache se pata hai k wo dono kaha kaam karenge aap befikr rahiye aapka kaam ho jaayega aap bus mera khayal rakhiye

Arjun: Tumhe tumhare kaam ki muhmaangi keemat mil jaayegi magar yaad rahe koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye

Mystery person: Aap uski fikr mat kijiye

Arjun: Good. Achha suno aayenda office se phone mat karna main nahi chahtha k Maan ko kisi bhi tarah ka shaqh ho

Mystery person: Ji Sir

Call ends

Arjun: (self talk) Kuch din aur Maan Singh khurana iss project k saath saath Geet bhi tumhari zindagi se humesha k liye dur ho jaayegi

PRECAP: Maan: "Geet main tumpar aakh bannd karke vishwas karta hoon kabhi mera bharosa mat todna"😊😲😭

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PART 35: PAGE 105
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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