Kaliren (Maaneet ff) updated on pg69/ 3may

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Beautiful update..After reading this part I realized how much I had missed ur work..

About this part..I dont understand wats the problem with Geet..You had given wonderful insight into Maan's life..Hoping to see Geet's side revealed in the next part..

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Mmm ok first OMG tht was like pretty longgg an update..gosh..i didnt know i have another Jaz in making...haha

and mmm why is GEET sad and not happy..whts wrong..wht has she lost tht she doesnt wanan dream..i am so waiting for that..hope to get a quick update..

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srilu

@srilu_123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

hai

this is awesome and great

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Great update! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

hey superbbb update yaar...
maaneet encounter😆 was nice...
feel bad maan's loneliness...but am happy atleast anu,vicky n dadi r there with him😊...
looking fwd...

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

haiii thakku one jhappi from my side for the update...

I just loved it...

haila the scene in which Geet bumped into Maan was superb...

ye maan bhi na bina soche samjhe kuch bol deta hai n then he regrets...😆

waise...I really liked the effect Geet had on Maan...

poor Maan...couldn't think of anyhting else apart from Geet😳

arghhh that Viren n Pammi ...seems to be good for nothing...😡

n I feel that Pammi is gonna create problems for Maaneet in future...arghhh she better stay away from them...

moi loved Vicky N Anu...loved the bonding they share with their Veerji...

hoping to see Maaneet together in the next part...😳

awww KHuranas and Handas share ancestral history...sounds interesting...😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Hi dear..thanks 4 d apm n fantabulous update! Loved it! Geet took off wid Maan ! Poor Maan..did nt realsie who he was talking to! Too late! Maan attracted to Geet! Love dthe intro to Khyranas! Seems lyk Maaneet will meet @ orphanage! Update soon