SURROGATE RELATIONS Thread 3, part 27 updated 16/9

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MsMovielover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

loved the update...

so glad maan is back...

ohh i cant wait for more

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#682

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1
it was beautiful and touchy . it is unfortunate , geet uncle exist in this world. just they don't have conscience nor feelings . How can they do such act . it is disgusting to think also . loved the way maan took care of her and rudr also to tell pst of geet to dadi and maan . I want to congratluate for one of beautiful scenes is incorporated in today'episode . they treated differently , but u know i was thinking those scenes where maan and geet watched movie sitting on the couch in night . I loved the scene and today scene took me to the past becoz the emotions u potrayed they showed through their expression . just loved and dor that scene a warm hug from me bindu . 🤗

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it's great when something like u have written is shown , mostly it is other way round...we see in the show first nd then add it in the stories

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#683

Originally posted by: bansipatel
Wonderful update bindu...!!
so maan came to know all about wat geet had gone thru...
brij is such a kamina...😡 😡...feel like strangling him to death...!!
glad maan came on time n he was thankful to rudr also for handling dadi too...!!
the confrontation was lovely...
ooppss geet sitting on maan's laps...😳...haayyee..
maan cleared all the doubts about sam with geet...me is dancing as he cleared it out..!!
loved the update..!!
dnt take long now to update the next part..
already awaiting the next part..!!

maan has cleared abt Sam but geet hasn't agreed yet...
it's so horrible that people like brij really exist ...😡

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: ninand
ohmygod... Geets past made me feel choked and nauseated with the terror of what she might have been through..

Yes, its difficult to detach oneself completely from feeling marred or soiled or degraded after such gruesome and horrific incident leave one as victim..

could imagine Daadis shock too at the turn of events and her reaction..

Soo glad that Maan decidedly told her of his intentions.. though her wanting to fight that decision would be natural.. bit anyway, so relieved Maans back to comfort and protect her..

you have written this well.. great part. Do continue soon.

it wud be difficult for her to accept that she can have a normal married life... so she wud resist but then don't forget it is MSK who is her opponent, who has his own style of dealing with resistance

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
wow..!! loved it!

so i guess geet is afraid of a physical relationship is she??

and that brij..i am hating him!! its so pathetic that things like this do happen in rela life..

humara to ye padh ke hi kalgea cheekhuthta hai! and some poor souls who bear this!! god bles them..

u are an amazing writer..i was a silent reader..but this upadte made me speak up..

i am still feeling the tremors that the thots arose inme!!

thank u

she is afraid of physical relation, how cud she be comfortable with a man after what she has been thru' ...i did wonder if i shud add incest in the story, but then such horrible acts happen in life... any forced physical act is terrible , but when u r violated by someone who is supposed to be ur guardian...yes god help the tortured souls.

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: Audiwalia
I want geet to tell maan everything abt her past... She had a horrible past... Can she ever able to live normal life..

it will happen but not immediately...she needs help, not just Maan's love

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anupamachem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#687

Loved it especially Maan's words towards the end which he said thoughtfully not making her panic.What to say about Geet in Maan's lap and he consoling her!
Rudr seems a very balanced person. He knew about Geet's past and still wanted to fulfill Nt's last wish to marry Geet.
Great job! continue soon!

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jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#688

first of all i am sooo happy that maan is back. i know i know i should not be happy as update it self is sooo emtional and sab but yaar apna maan is back to look after apni geet. s
loved the way maan console geet and claimed that she is only his and no one can ever harm his geet👏👏👏👏. bindu this scene was written sooo nice yaar. love every single word said by maan.
then geet feeling comfy and tellimg maan about brij😡😡😡😡😡 he is such a bad person that he should drown to death
hayeee maan asking her to get marry and then convincing her that marriage with sam was just proposal nothing serious.
geet is still not convinced but maan is affirm in his decision.
love the way geet thinks that she wants to be his for ever but then thinking that she is coming in between him and his happiness. was sooo good.

bindu what i say yaar. tooo good full of emotions and concern for each other.👏👏👏

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever
Hmmm I didn't think the proposal would come so soon nor the fact that geet so easily discussed even tiny bit of her horrendous past in a fit... I had thought a lot of cajoling and coaxing even driving to the edge would be involved in geet's low-down of her past... N the last bit didn't sound like geet accepted the proposal ... Seems like we'll have s runaway bride in the offing... Geet bhagegi kya??? Mereko lagta hai bhagegi:-)... Ab agar aise update ke baad people ask for more n sooner then it's not their fault u see :-)... U got us double despo about what next n how next!!!

proposal had to happen soon as brij is on the sidelines.( didn't have enough matter for an update without it😆)..geet's disclosure just burst out...yet as soon as she became aware of what she was saying she stopped...(nd many were getting tired and restless not knowing abt geet's past😉)...she hasn't completely revealed what she had endured, not to any one...i think along getting her professional help...
geet hasn't accepted maan's decision of marriage...she will resist, but Maan will have a solution to suit her and himself 😆...but she won't run, she can't coz then she will fall right into brij's hands...
was thinking of Maan Brij encounter...but i can't imagine Maan being violent with Brij without being physically provoked😕

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reni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#690

Hey superb update..so geet had such a painful past... She was sexually abused..hope she can come out of it.. Maan would fill her life with happiness... I so wanted him to tell her that he is marrying her because he wants her and his happiness lies with her... Hope he says it to her someday...