SURROGATE RELATIONS Thread 3, part 27 updated 16/9

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: simm28
bindu so nice update .love that maan phone geet & tricked her to that she is missing him.love the maan's talk to himself.so in love with this update. omg what this brij up to now .please bring maan now .so he can take care of geet .BINDU HAPPY OMAN.UPDATE SOON.THIS IS MY MOST FAV.FF

thank u
maan will be there in the next update...happy that u like my story...next update after weekend

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 13 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: Mehek25
Wonderful update Bindu. I look forward to it so much. You have a wonderful way of conveying Maan and Geet's feelings. Whenever I read it I can visualise the scene in front of my eyes. Loved the way Maan tricked her into saying she missed him. So Brij the one who is responsible for Geet's dread of men. Waiting for Maan to came and tackle that creep. Thanx for update and Pm dear. As for the VZ song its my fav one from the movie.

Happy Onam to u and ur loved ones...

thank u...happy that i can transfer what runs in mind into yours.😊

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#593

So Geet missing Maan 😳 ; phone convo was The Best 👍🏼

Brij 😡 glad those heavy security finally was put to good use !

Awaiting Maan's return ; I hope how'll he react seeing that Geet fainted !!!

Loved the update

Thanks for pm ...

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soumi

@soumimaaneetsou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#594

awsm part di...👏👏👏👏👏

thnx for the pm...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#595

hi...thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update. Poor Geet! Hate Brij, update soon n pm wen do u do

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#596

Happy Onam to you too😛
wonderful update...loved the twist...
really enjoyed the phone conversation between maan and geet...
loved the way maan tricked her😆...how beautifully he made her confess that see also missed him too much...that brij😡😈🤢 thank God dadi didn't believe that 🤬 and took the right action...
poor geet is unconscious...hope maan will come back soon and geet tells him everything related to her past...can't wait any more ...please update soon...

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#597

yes waiting for him

plz make it that they realize their love for each other

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redfox

@redfox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#598

Fab update😊
Loved the conversation between Maan and Geet.the way Maan made Geet blurt out tat she missed him a lot was smart.It would have been awesome if Maan would have been present when the baby kicked for the first time.
And thank u for giving Maan's point of view to their separation
So finally Maan has started thinking about his feelings in terms of love though he considers himself to probably b halfway on tat path..That's a welcome upgadation from attraction or the unknown feeling he used to describe it as. And now that he has made peace with his feelings he is able to c that he has made progress in making Geet open up.He sees her quickly achieving a level of comfort with Rudr in new light.He is determined not to lose Geet to anyone
The song was Dreamy
When u mentioned photoshoot I thought Sameera would be present with Rudr and we would probably get a glimpse of dynamics between the two..Never mind..Hope we see that in future updates
And out of the blue comes her scarring past.Brij is a creep in name of uncle and is sure to create problems in future though Dadi tacked him tactfully for now.
Geet will probably retreat back to her shell now..
And will Maan and Geet get married in urgency to avert the threat posed by Brij before Maan can have a proper talk with Geet about his feelings.If this happens Geet will think that Maan married her just to save her and the baby and will blame herself of ruining his life..It will be harder or Maan to draw her out of her shell.Poor things..just when things were going fine for them Brij ruined it all..But they are together and will hopefully conquer it all.

Didnt realise that my comment turned into a huge rant..so will stop here

PS: Update soon

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soma kazmi

@somakazmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#599

beautiful update dear...👏 loved it to core...😃
maan tricking Geet to confess she is missing him...😳
telephone scene between Maan Geet and baby was cute...😳
Maan determined to win Geet...👍🏼
Geet waiting 4 maan...😊
Brij i hate him...😡
Dadi i loved her she had called Geet her bahu and Maan's wife...👏
Brij will be back with more evil plan and m sure Maan will take care of geet...😊
geet fainting...😭
hope maan is back in next update and kick brij's ass...😃
🤗update soon n tnx 4 pm ...🤗