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Hey dear read all the three parts together and believe me I was feeling so low but now a strange feeling just conquered me it felt so nice now first the way he tried kissing her oo the feel itself made me giggle he didn't had any control by just a look having her around all the time after marriage what wonders it will do...then the way he wanted her to say she will miss him but still verbalized his own feelings and making her go gag over him n the special way U derived to kiss its just blew me as far as I remember this is the second time he did that which made both of us means me n geet go to the dreamland...The next part even without maan it was just amazing as the way geet missing him wandering around and hating people who liked his absence which was just eating her up but then in the room its was bit relieved I really loved her restlessness the whole time without him missing everything around her just being with him made it all special...then the proposal was damn touchy I loved the way he was trying his best to get it words to express his dadi what he feels and lest he himself knew about his feelings but still same like dadi we couldn't have much happiness loving his responsible side to care about each one involved in the matter so that none is hurt...last part was way to special as we got to see the glimpse of our beloved maaneet ooo that was damn sweet,the sweetbattle which may start of the sexes and the way he made he confess that was aweee can't even say how it eels as she exclaimed and then can't even deny what she said least did she knew how much he wanted to hear that...I really loved maan part too as U showed being him restless too without her and the small short short counters that was taking toll on him of not being her around best part was like he said no one can take her I was seriously loving his determination towards her of already accepted her being a part of his...finally we will know her bitter past along with this could be used as a best trick to stimulate the relation along with making it strong and the dadi was superb they way she already showed her hold on her on being a part of their family least she wanted her acknowledgment she already knew this is the future...lets see if the baby is fine in next part or not as she is falling hopefully U won't do what they did in serial
Soory for such a long comment but couldn't control my typical self to comment after reading such beautiful updates
Thanks for the pm
God bless U
Keep writing
Take care
Soory for such a long comment but couldn't control my typical self to comment after reading such beautiful updates
Thanks for the pm
God bless U
Keep writing
Take care
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
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