Detention - ArSh FF - Part 5 Page 9 - Page 8

Shilpa's character. Love her! OMG she is such so harsh on Armaan, but i kind of like it, it's hot lol. But theres something mysterious about her, we don't knwo what she is thinking. Does she like Armaan too? Is that why she's mean to him, so she can control her emotions? And also make him hate her? Btw her being a teacher is hottt! I never seen a concept like this man, well done!

Haha i found the punishment hot! :P Their 'relationship' is not a common one. And he is slowly falling for her even though he hates her at the same time. How cute! OMG he can't control himself around her :| Jeez, i wonder if all guys are like him?! Having 'accidents' when they see a hot girl!

🤣 His dreams of her! Already aswell, gosh doesn't he realise that's his TEACHER! It's gonna cause alot of trouble for them both. I wonder if thats another reason for her staying away...

OMG the dance :| Woman you put like a hot scene in each part :| Keep it up🤣 That was just spicy man! And the way she just said it to his face that hes falling for her, i was shocked. She knew about it? But why is she acting all cool about it? I so want to get in to her mind right now.

The last chapter was scary kind of. I never took Armaan as the agressive type, i'm glad that he defended Shilpa but like that, no. It's good to know he would protect her, but it shows how possessive he is of her and it's scary. But hot 😆 But the guy now knows not to mess with Armaan, he should've minded his own business in the first place. I wonder what Shilpa was feeling when she saw the scene in front of her, obviously she ain't totally traumatized by it or she wouldn't have visited him. That's another thing, she's one of those strong type of girls, she doesn't get scared easily but if she does, she doesn't show it. She's good at masking her emotions with anger and rudeness, as if in a way to protect herself from getting hurt. OMG the last scene :| Armaan is really really scaring me now. Have you made him a psychopath in this FF?🤣 But bechara guy got called 'tiny' 😛 I wonder what's gonna happen next now!

Gurleen your writing skills and style is utterly amazing! I never knew you could write this good! Keep it up, your FF is amazing! I love all the chapter <3

Update soon!

Zarqaa ;)

Loving the tough character of shilpa.

Update soon...wanna read whats armaan is upto next 😛

plz pm me when u update plzzz