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fri42911

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

superb part!!!!!!! you have done amazing job writting dance scenes!!!!!!

please continue soon!!!!!!

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

@fri42911 - Aww, thank you so much!! 🤗

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Jyo.KG_dbhusain

@Jyo.KG_dbhusain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

nice part

aww i feel bad for armaan bechare ki kya halat banadi hai shilpa ne

do cont soon :D

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shalika

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Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wow awesome fic...

loved it

plzz continue soon

nd do pm me too. :)

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abcd12344

@abcd12344

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

OMGGG Guru 😲😲😲 This part was the best so far.. I mean I like all of them but this one was more open and had more passionate scenes ☺️and also it was the LONGEST 😆 The dance was superb.. Shilpa really showed off her dance to him 😆 but which dance teacher do that now? Showing off her dance to the most handsome guy student? 🤣 and Armaan getting those WILD dreams☺️.. he really needs to fade away from those stuff now😆 and OMG that girl 🤣 he keeps bumping into her 😆 You don't know how much I'm enjoying Shilpa's character.. I love how she's strict with HIM especially.. and I also loved how she threw her question back at him.. I like this clever Shilpa.. love her character in this .. it's so opposite of her "RIDDHIMA'S" character who was ALWAYS confused and DUMB 🤣 Now I really really wanna see KaSh as student-teacher characters.. its more fun and challenging 🤣 I wish you continue to update every now and then.. but i have a feeling since how u updated so fast for 2 parts.. ur gonna update after so long now -______- Dude u better update jaldi the story is getting interesting!!!

Edited by dildirani - 13 years ago

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arshluvskash

@arshluvskash

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Hey guru how r u dear i catch up wd this ff through fb link lovely ff guru and what a lovely part the dancing scence and moves and to imagine kash in this ff love it arsh rocks KASH Always rocks love u kash and kashian and proud to be kashian and update soon and yes do love kash always 1st cuz its emerges best love it guru ur ff wow.

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Awesummm ff
plzz ad m to pm list

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manjiri

@m4manju

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

omg m loving this story... the way armaan is behaving when she is arround and his wild imaginations...jeez, u wrote it awesome or what ⭐️ loved the characters of them both... the detention is going to be rocking...cont soon... n thx for PM 😊

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

@Jyoti - Thanks! Lol, will try to do so. :)

@Aish - Thanks! :D

@Shalika - Thank you. Will try my best. Done. :)

@Subuuu!! - Your comment should be the longest on there!! :P

@Arsh - Hey! I'm great. You? :D Lol! Glad to see it's working out. ;) Thank you and yes, they sure do. <3

@charmingkiller - Thanks! Done. :)

@teenorchid - Thank you and done. :)

@m4manju - Aaww, thanks! I'm so glad that you like it. :) No prob! :D

Thanks again everyone!!! 😃🤗

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: dildirani
OMGGG Guru 😲😲😲 This part was the best so far.. I mean I like all of them but this one was more open and had more passionate scenes ☺️and also it was the LONGEST 😆 The dance was superb.. Shilpa really showed off her dance to him 😆 but which dance teacher do that now? Showing off her dance to the most handsome guy student? 🤣 and Armaan getting those WILD dreams☺️.. he really needs to fade away from those stuff now😆 and OMG that girl 🤣 he keeps bumping into her 😆 You don't know how much I'm enjoying Shilpa's character.. I love how she's strict with HIM especially.. and I also loved how she threw her question back at him.. I like this clever Shilpa.. love her character in this .. it's so opposite of her "RIDDHIMA'S" character who was ALWAYS confused and DUMB 🤣 Now I really really wanna see KaSh as student-teacher characters.. its more fun and challenging 🤣 I wish you continue to update every now and then.. but i have a feeling since how u updated so fast for 2 parts.. ur gonna update after so long now -______- Dude u better update jaldi the story is getting interesting!!!

Hehe, thanks Subi!! :D LOLL, really? I didn't even know that. I just wrote whatever came. 😆 Haha! This dance teacher does!! 🤣 Ooohhh... those are just the trailers my friend. ☺️😆 Haha, I don't know what to do with that girl yet. 🤣 Aww, thanks so much!! LOLL!! That's because she's NOT RIDDHIMA, but SHILPA. ;) Haha, don't even get me STARTED on Riddhima!! I can just write pages and pages as to how she's obsessed with being confused. 🤣🤣

Go give this concept to Palki. She said she needed one!! 🤣🤣 I wanted to update this week, but cause of school I wasn't able to. :\ Chorry!! :( I'll try my best to update twice tomorrow. :)

Hehe, oh you just wait and watch. It gets better. ;)

Edited by MG.Creations - 13 years ago