MG-SS-manayun kaise..?upd. Part-4 on Pg. 37. - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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priti di waiting for d next part eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dash_aryan

Good One...while reading could visualize awosome & naughty expressions of Maan(Gurmeet) & innocence of Geet (Drasthi)

Continue...

thanx a lot for ur lovely comments i am glad u liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx a lot for ur lovely comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishuu

This is awesome n very funny...aww poor geet...in a dillemma...haha...wud luv to knw wat she does...

thanx a ton for ur fab. Comments. Ya just wait n watch. I hope u will like it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deepanwita

priti di waiting for d next part eagerly

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sweety will cont. Asap.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ausum luved it plzz...plz pm for whn u upd the second part!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArMaanDeewan

ausum luved it plzz...plz pm for whn u upd the second part!!😊

thanx a lot for liking it. Will surely pm u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow loved it like anything
desperately waiting for the next part
plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: keerthikarri

wow loved it like anything
desperately waiting for the next part
plz continue soon

thanx a lot for ur fab. comments dear...
ya sure will cont. asap...take care...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART- 2.

GEET- kya karun-kya karun (looks above)- hey Babaji aap kuch help karo na plz koi idea do na MAAN ko manane ka……she gets up n walks around the room thinking how to please MAAN…..suddenly her face lights up with a naughty smile…she immediately gets dressed in a white saree n comes down…..greets DADIMA…. "good morning dadima"…..

DADI- good morning bete….aaj aap bahut khubsorat lag rhi hain….

GEET-(blushes)- thanky dadima….woh main ma…

DADI- aap jinhe dhoondh rhi hain who toh bina nashta kiye office chale gayein bade gusse mein nazar aa rahe they….

GEET- kyaaa unhone nashta nahin kia….hey babaji yeh maan bhi na….dadima woh….

DADI- geet bete yeh aap dono ke beech ki tom n jerry fight se humein door hi rakhiye….n she calls out nakool….for the tiffin…..and handles it to geet…. "baaki toh aap samhaal hi lengi hai na"….(winks at her)…..geet smiles n says…. " jii dadima takes her blessings"….. " humesha aise hi muskurate rahiye aap aur aapke dusht danav"….. aur haan yaad karke aap dono nashta kar lijiyega kyunki khaali pet koi kaam nahin hota hai…… n she leaves….

GEET- ( smiles naughtily)- oh toh itni naraazgi ki nashta bhi nahin kiya…koi baat nahin jab hum hain toh phir kya gham hai…. MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA…ab main bhi dekhti hoon ki aap kaise nahin maante….MRS. GEET SINGH KHURANA….ko aap bhi nahin jaante….

In the office…..in maan's cabin…..he is is continuously thinking about geet…. (with a naughty grin)…. " I am eagerly waiting for u MRS. GEET SINGH KHURANA… let's see what have u planned to please ur beloved husband….and ur time has already started…. Suddenly there is a knock in the door n maan comes back to reality…. "come in"….. adi enters in his ladkhadata hua n stammering avtaar….. " maan sssirrr woh clients apka wait kar rahein hain conference hall mein…..

MAAN-hmmm….tum chalo main ata hoon… and make them comfortable…..

ADI- yes sir….n leaves…..

Maan gets up n is ready to leave….suddenly Geet enters with a bang….n both of them collide with each other once again….which makes her fall in his strong muscular arms….instantly their eyes meet with each other….and the history of passionate eye lock repeats itself….making them restless n increasing the fervour of their craving to be each in others embrace forever….the masculine scent of his body is driving her senses madly making her insane….and same is the effect on him too her feminine beauty…her soft supple lips…her beautiful deep hazel eyes…..her impeccable features….drives him to edge of madness….as always….she knows his condition….she can feel the sexual tension arising between them….and even he is also not unaware of this…he knows her in n out….suddenly the reminiscence of the morning incident makes him get over this …. and he gets up instantly…. making her stand up…. though still holding her waist….he takes his gaze away from her eyes….n says….

MAAN- geet tum mera haath chodogi….

She lovingly looks at him n says…. " maan maine apka haath kahan pakda hai, yeh toh aap hi….he instantly looks at her n then his hand which is holding her waist line…n moves away quickly….she smiles cutely looking at him….

MAAN-( angrily)- geet maine aisa kaunsa joke maara hai jo tum apne gande daant dikha rahi ho….

GEET-hawww…excuse me main roz subah shaam brush karti hoon ok…. aapki tarah nahin hoon…. (then shyly)- aur aj toh maine specially aur bhi achche se brush kiya hai….

MAAN- (in his typical sarcastic manner)- achcha…aur woh kis khushi mein…?

GEET- taaki main apko acche se kis…..

MAAN- whattt…?

GEET- hmmm…mera matlab hai taaki apko koi pareshani na ho….aap hi toh humesha mere daanto ko criticise karte rehte ho na…in her usual blabbering manner…..n she is moving closer n closer to maan making him move back….aur pata hai aaj toh maine special mouthwash bhi use kiya hai….n she traps him as his back hits the wall….n says in her sexy, silky voice…. "aap chahe toh mehsoos kar sakte hain"….moves her lips more closer to his making him feel her fresh breath…n this makes him gulp his saliva…but as we know Maan toh maan hain….how can he give up so easily….he holds her hand n makes her move back….again an eyelock session takes place….now eye to eye convo is taking place between maaneet….

MAAN- (in his mind)- hmmm saree….

GEET- (in her mind)- haan aur woh bhi aapka fav. rang safed….

MAAN-(in his mind)- hmmm achchi lag rahi ho….

GEET-(in her mind)- mujhe pata hai after all yeh aapki pasand jo hai….aur aapke liye hi toh pehni hai….sirf aapke liye….aur aap keh rahein hain ki bas achchi lag rahin hoon….

MAAN- (in his mind)- ok baba bahut achchi lag rahi ho…..

GEET-(in her mind)- bas bahut achchi….

MAAN- (in his mind)- nahin…bahut-bahut-bahut achchi lag rahi ho…sabse khubsurat….toh sirf meri Geet hi lag sakti hai…

Maan gazes her upside down in an intense manner which makes her shiver….her beautiful and sensuous curves are peeping out from inside of her net saree…making maan's mind n thoughts getting corrupted….once again making him loose control… "maan control urself…its too early to loose urself…par main kya karun…Geet jab bhi mere saamne hoti hai toh main khud ko rok hi nahin pata hoon…pata nahin mujhe kya ho jaata hai…she simply drives me crazy…aur mera khud par bas hi nahin chalta…I can't control it…sach mein is ladki ne mujhe pagal kar diya hai…and that's what I love about her….lekin aj mujhe khud ko rokna hi padega…chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye….i won't give up so easily today no ways….so MRS. GEET SINGH KHURANA if u can then make me loose myself….i am waiting….make me witness your SHERNI avtaar once again….i am dying to see it…phir dekho tumhara SHER kaise rang mein aata hai…" (with a naughty grin)….

MAAN- (in his mind)- itni asaani se nahin geet…no ways…itni jaldi main nahin manne waala…more efforts r required from ur side…

GEET- (in her mind)- koi baat nahin Maan main bhi haar manne waali nahin hoon…aapko mana kar hi dum loongi…ab chahe iske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade….

MAAN- (in his mind)- wahi toh main dekhna chahta hoon Geet ki tum kya-kya karogi aur kis had tak….?

GEET- (in her mind)- aap dekhoge maan…ki pyaar ki koi had nahin hoti….

MAAN- (in his mind)- really…

GEET- (in her mind)- really maan … I will make u witness the saying that " everything is fair in love n war….and for me its just LOVE-LOVE n LOVE…for U…"her eyes are reflecting this emotion with full dedication for him…and Maan notices this…. his passionate gaze says it all…the whole atmosphere is filled with the aroma of their LOVE n PASSION…filling the room with their warmth…a sudden pull once again starts reducing the gap between them…but TRING-TRING…TRING-TRING…yeh phone sach mein humesha galat time par hi bajta hai…makes him hit the reality once again…

MAAN- halo…

ADI- maan sir clients apka wait kar rahein hain…

MAAN- hmm…main bas aa raha hoon…

Gives a stern look at geet n leaves…

GEET- (makes a pout face)- haii inki toh har ada jaanleva hai sachchi….suddenly her gaze falls on the tiffin….she hits her head n says… " hey babaji main toh maan ko nashta karana bhul hi gayi"….koi baat nahin Geet yeh toh achcha mauka hai conference hall mein entry maarne ka…magar usse pehle thodi si shararat ho jaaye…

In the conference hall…maan is busy with the meeting….n is explaining some architectural layout to the clients…suddenly his phone rings…he gestures adi to pick it up…but before adi could say hello…sth makes his face draw a BIG "O"…n DHADAM… adi falls on the floor along with the phone…which inturn puts the phone on speaker….

MAAN- adiii….

Rushes towards him…makes the other people jump from their chairs…

MAAN- (pats his cheeks n sprinkles water on his face)- adii kya hua tumhe…? get up…

Adi moves a bit holding his head…

MAAN- kya ho gaya tha tumhe adi…tum thik toh ho na….

ADI- (nervously in his stammering mode nodes his head in negative n looks towards the phone)- sssirrr…..woh ….

MAAN- woh kya adi….?

He indicates towards the phone with his trembling fingers….now every one looks at the phone with a tinge of fear n enthusiasm….except Maan who is giving his usual stern n hawwwtttyy looks towards the dead object…suddenly a voice transforms the dead object with a life of its own…filling the room with her warmth once again…

" Hii SEXY…aap toh gusse mein aur bhi zyaada SEXY lagte ho….aur aise hawwwttt looks mat do warna is mobile ka toh pata nahin magar main zaroor moam ki tarah pighal jaaungi….aur haan ek baat aur kehni thi aapse woh aj subah na aap gile badan mein bahut YUMMY lag rahe they...i would have devoured u completely…woh toh maine khud par control kar liya…magar kaise yeh main hi jaanti hoon…."saying this she giggles…n enters the conference hall…filling it with her contagious laughter….maan aap kuch boliye na tabse main hi boli jaa rhi hoon…kuch toh kahiye na….

MAAN- Geeet….

Geet stunned…n shocked….maan in anger standing holding his mobile in one hand…in his typical MSK style…

So once again here Geet is in dilemma what will she do now Babajii….?and MAAN….????? For that u all will have to wait for the next part…..plzzz do press the LIKE button… ur comments….criticisms….n suggestions r most welcome….as it encourages me to cont. writing more…

LOVE…

PRITI…

Edited by priti11 - 13 years ago

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