MG ' SS ' MANAYUN KAISE..? PART 1.
Hii maaneetians'. this is my first SS on MAANEET'.my first attempt to write something on my beloved MAANEET'.hope u all will appreciate it'
GEET-hey babjii yeh maan bhi na kitna time lagaate hain nahaane mein. Mujhe bhi toh fresh hona hai'.
She calls out maan'maan'.
MAAN-hmmm'.
GEET-kya hmmm'.aap bahar niklenge ya nahin'..
MAAN-hmmm'..hmmm'.
GEET-phir se hmmm'.hmmm'..waise toh mujhe kehte rehte hain mp3 mode mein chali jaati ho'.magar khud jo repeat mode mein chale gaye hain uska kya'
MAAN-geet tum phir se mp3 mode mein chali gayi'.
GEET-(looks upward)-dekha-dekha babjii'.
MAAN-geet tum har baat mein babajii ko kyun pareshaan karti ho'.
GEET-(angrily)-maan agar aap 2 sec mein bahar nahin aaye na toh'..
And she moves towards the bathroom door'but maan suddenly comes out and both of them collide with each other '.which makes her fall on him'.
MAAN-(naughtily)-mujhe nahin pata tha Geet ki tum mujhpar is kadar marti ho, mujhse itna pyaar karti ho ki?
GEET-ki?
MAAN-ki mujhpar khud hi aakar girti ho.
Geet tries to get up '.but due to maan's wet body she slides back '.
MAAN-dekha.
GEET-kya?
MAAN-yahi ki tum mujhse ek pal ke liye door nahin reh sakti ho isiliye toh baar-baar mere upar giri hi jaa rahi ho.
Geet again tries to get up but maan holds her and makes her roll down on the floor'..which in turn results in opposite '.
GEET-aisa kuch bhi nahin hai Maan dekhiye.
MAAN-(naughtily)-hmmm'dekh hi toh raha hoon .
GEET-(shocked to see Maan in a towel)-dekhiye, mujhe nahin khud ko dekhiye,( irritate hokar)-Maan aap mere saamne khade ho, I mean lete ho aur woh bhi sirf tauliye mein. Aapko sharam nahin aati hai cheee''.and she tries to move away'.
MAAN-(naughtily)-toh utaar doon.
GEET-just shut up Maan.
Maan gets up and replies'.
MAAN-by the way Geet yeh mera personal room hai, aur main yahan par chahe tauliye mein khada rahoon ya phir leta rahun, isse tumhe ya phir kisi aur ko koi problem nahin honi chahiye mere khayal se.
GEET-mujhe kisi aur ka nahin pata'. magar mujhe problem hai, aur bahut zyaada problem hai.Aap plzzz jaakar kapde pehno Maan.
He pulls her close and starts humming'.
"jab se tere naina mere naino se laage re", are Geet apne nain toh kholo warna mere gaane ka kya faayada.
GEET-(has closed her eyes tightly)-main nahin kholungi .
MAAN-(in his full romantic mood again starts singing)-"tere naina hans diye bas gaye mere dil mein tere naina". Ab toh apne khubsoorat naino ko khol do plzzz Geet warna humaara yeh close dance bhi bekaar hi chala jaayega.
GEET-nahin kholungi-nahin kholungi bas.
MAAN-bas-basna hi toh chahata hoon main tumhaare in naino mein.
Hearing this she opens her eyes slowly'.
MAAN-yeh hui na meri mishti waali baat.
GEET-maan'.
MAAN-(takes a deep breath)-haaye''..
He moves a bit close to her and in his husky tone says'.
MAAN-tumhe pata hai Geet jab tum sharmaake nazrein jhukaati ho toh bahut khoobsoorat lagti ho, aur jab tum apni nazrein uthaati ho toh usse bhi zyaada khoobsoorat lagti ho.
GEET-mujhse flirt karne ki koshish mat kijiye Maan.
MAAN-main flirt nahin kar raha hoon geet'. Main sach keh raha hoon.
GEET-sach'.
MAAN-haan sach'
GEET-sach'
Suddenly Maan pulls Geet more close to him...and turns her around'.one drop of water falls on her neck'.sending shivers down her body'Maan's passionate eyes traces the drops'he moves more close to her and sips the water droplet from her neck'. "I LOVE YOU MAAN". " I really love you"'..
MAAN-(naughtily)-aaj tumne is abla nar se pata nahin kya-kya karwaliya hai I love you, I love you kehkar. Pata nahin aage tumhaara aur kya iraada hai?
GEET-what do u mean Maan?
MAAN-(desperately)-tell me Geet , batao mujhe ki tumhaare is gande dimaag mein mujhe dekhkar aur kya-kya gande khayaal aa rahein hain haan?
GEET-ek aur shabd.
MAAN-toh- toh tum kya karogi Geet haan?
GEET-agar itna hi aapko apni izzat ka khayaal hai toh phir mere saamne is haalat mein kyun khade hain aap'.?
MAAN-ab mujhe laga ki agar main 2 sec mein bahar nahin aaya toh tum darwaaza tod dogi''
GEET-main todne hi waali thi.
MAAN-kyaaa?Geet tum itni desperate ho gayi meri izzat lootne ke liye ki tum darwaaza todne par utaaroo ho gayi, are thoda toh sabr kiya hota. Toh.
GEET-toh?
MAAN-(with a naughty grin)'.toh ye badal tumpar khud ba khud aakar barasta
GEET-what'''..?
MAAN-kyun tum is baarish mein bheegna nahin chahti?
GEET-nahin woh kya hai na mujhe baarish se bahut allergy hai'.mujhe sardi khaansi ho jaati hai'..
MAAN-lekin is baarish mein bheegne se tumhe koi bimaari nahin hogi, balki ulta tumhaari saari bimaariyaan nau do gyaraah ho jaayengi.
GEET-thanx aur waise bhi mujhe is duniya ki sabse badi bimaari toh ho hi chuki hai.
MAAN-kaunsi bimaari?
GEET-(romantically)-pyaar ki bimaari.
MAAN-(smile karte hue)-really.
GEET-really.
MAAN-agar bimaari maine di hai toh, ilaaj bhi main hi karunga na.
GEET-mujhe ilaaj ki koi zaroorat nahin hai'.
MAAN-(with a sexy grin)-magar mujhe toh hai'..
GEET-(in her mind)- mujhe inke iraade kuch thik nahin lag rahe hai'..
Meanwhile maan is loosing his self-control actually he has lost it already'.and geet has sensed this '.
GEET-maan'dadima'.
Saying this she rushes inside the washroom and shuts the door'
MAAN-(angrily)- GEEETTT'..tumhe iski keemat chukaani padegi'dekh loonga'
Geet suddenly opens the door and says'TOH DEKH LIJIYE'.
Maan rushes towards her but she instantly closes the door again'.
MAAN-moti mombatti tumhe dekh loonga'.just wait n watch'
GEET-sorry maan magar aaj aap kuch nahin kar sakte kyunki aaj toh main apne kapde bhi nahin bhuli hoon bahar'.jiska fayada aap utha sake'.
MAAN-geet ab main nahin ' tum mere paas aaogi'aur khud ko rok nahin paaogi'.
GEET-aapne kuch kaha kya maan'.?
MAAN-nahin toh kuch nahin'tum fresh ho jao geet'.main jaa raha hoon'
He changes and immediately leaves the room'.
GEET-jaa raha hoon'magar kahan maan'?...maan'maan'.
She comes out 'chale gaye'aur mujhe bataya bhi nahin ki kahan'.lagta hai ki naraaz ho gaye'koi baat nahin aapki mishti aapko mana legi'.par kaise'.?soch geet soch'geet tub hi na jhalli hai ekdum jab paas the tab door kar diya '..ab door chale gaye'toh unhe paas lane ke tareeke sochne pad rahein hain'.
Meanwhile maan is secretly watching geet'.and thinks is his mind'socho mishti socho'main bhi dekhun tum kya karti ho? Kyuki is baar main nahin tumhe hi mere paas aana hoga'..and I will make sure'ki tum mujhse door na jaa sako'.
And he leaves'.
GEET-mujhe aisa kyun laga jaise ki maan mujhe dekh rahe the'.geet tub hi na bawli ho gayi hai'jab saamne rehte hain toh unki kadar nahin karti'aur ab jab door hain toh'main unhe itna miss kar rahin hoon'.
Par koi baat nahin main bhi MRS. GEET SINGH KHURANA hoon'.itni asaani se haar nahin maanungi'.apne MAAN ko toh apne paas laakar rahungi'.haan'.chahe iske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade'.par baat toh abhi bhi wahi hai na ki main karungi kya'.?
Kyunki main jab bhi kuch sochti hoon toh humesha uska ulta hi ho jaata hai '.aur maan bhi humesha ulta hi karte hain'.
So here geet is in dilemma'.and so am i'.what to do'.let's see all ur responses'.if u would all like it'then I would love to cont'.waiting for ur comments, likes'.criticism...and suggestions too...
LOVE
PRITI.
INDEX
PART-2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1764087/mg-ss-manayun-kaise-upd-part-4-on-pg-37?pn=12
PART-3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1764087/mg-ss-manayun-kaise-upd-part-4-on-pg-37?pn=22
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